[Report This]Date: April 21 2022 2:09 AM Title: Sweet Emotion
Just out of curiosity, would you be okay with a throwaway reference to Max and Procerita's adventures in the main story? Just something like them being mentioned in a newscast or the characters reading an after action report on them. I'm not sure where you intend this to be in the "timeline" and I don't want to mess up your flow by saying they're outlaws or heroes when it doesn't fit. Anyways this whole thing has been a blast.
Author's Response:
That would be amazing! The timeline would be relatively difficult to fit in something like the news (considering this is only about a week after the invasion), but maybe something about her popularity as a gladiator on Glalan Prime?
Or, you can have something in the news that can be a hint of what’s to come in my story. Of course, I have absolutely no idea where the story will go in the future, so this option isn’t very viable.
Date: April 21 2022 12:06 AM Title: Sweet Emotion
This chapter might have given me diabetes and I love it.
Author's Response:
Fantastic! I was worried it would be too cutesy but if you enjoyed it I’d be happy to write more.
[Report This]Date: April 20 2022 3:59 PM Title: Sweet Emotion
Love these two little rascals, loving this story so far. Excited for what you have planned
Author's Response:
I’m glad you are enjoying it enough to leave a review! If you’d like to make any suggestions I’m completely open to ideas.
I’d also like to mention your username is very fitting for this story.
[Report This]Date: April 20 2022 2:43 AM Title: Sweet Emotion
A nice ending to a story arc, it seems like Max and Procerita are going to stick together in spite of everything which is nice to see. If you ever decide to write more about their adventures I'll be waiting!