[Report This]Date: April 12 2022 9:56 PM Title: Stressing and De-Stressing
I typically don't like spin offs, but this is really good! I'm really enjoying the chemistry between the main characters even if they still are at the "toy" stage of their relationship. I also really enjoy the contrast between this and the main story since the whole "on the run" angle gives it a really exciting edge and gives it a sense of urgency.
My main complaint would have to be the pacing since I feel like the daily upload rate might be affecting the amount of things you can get done per chapter. This is just personal preference but I would rather you take your time and write longer chapters that progress the plot a bit more, since you always leave me wanting more. You've seriously got me on the edge of my seat.
I'm really hoping to learn more about the characters and their backstories since they have not had the time to have more intimate conversations about each other. Same thing goes for the side characters, since Ignita is a bit of an enigma and I'm excited to learn about any character you introduce.
Other than that, Im really loving this story and can't wait for more! I'll read regardless of how you choose to go from here. Keep up the great work!
Author's Response:
I’m glad you enjoy it! I’ll definitely be taking the length into consideration on my next chapter, and I’ll see if I can work in some more backstory. I’ll try to give Ignita some more character, but she was never planned to get much attention.