[Report This]Date: May 02 2022 1:31 AM Title: The Invasion
Hello, dear reader! I have a secret for you for all of my fans who read the reviews.
*whispering* none of my names are creative at all! They are all simply slightly edited translations of Latin words!
Author's Response:
Damn, I should have spell checked that one.
Anyway, here’s a list of all the translated names in case you were interested.
Procerita, derived from procerit, meaning tall
Ignita, derived from benignitas, meaning kind
Carnifex, no changes, meaning executioner (very creative, I know)
Peira, the root word for pirate in Latin
Timet, no changes, meaning afraid
[Report This]Date: April 20 2022 5:12 PM Title: The Invasion
The issue with chapter 12 and 13 should be fixed now. There was an issue where I pressed the enter key instead of “add story” and that seemed to have screwed everything up.
Once again, shamelessly giving myself a 10
[Report This]Date: April 12 2022 9:08 PM Title: The Invasion
My advice is to write at whatever pace you feel works for you, if it's more motivating to work on bite sized daily chapters, then do that, if you feel like you want a longer segment, try it and see if the result makes you happy.
As for the ongoing plot, it seems like Max and Procerita know that Aelmari won't engage in lethal force if he's "on her person," I wonder if that will factor into their plans. I wonder how Max will take their offers of "adoption" compared to his current captivity? He does seem to like where he's at, even if he won't admit it. Anyways keep up the good work!
Author's Response:
Glad you’re getting invested! I would like to use the Aelmari as a driving point in the emotional conflict of the story. It’s so much fun to write I don’t think I’ll ever have it in me to have it end.
Author's Response:
Glad you’re getting invested! I would like to use the Aelmari as a driving point in the emotional conflict of the story. It’s so much fun to write I don’t think I’ll ever have it in me to have it end.
[Report This]Date: April 09 2022 11:44 PM Title: The Invasion
Oh shit, sorry GreenAnon! I didn’t realize pressing delete got rid of your review as well!
shamelessly giving myself a 10 btw
[Report This]Date: April 09 2022 11:44 PM Title: The Invasion
Oh shit, sorry GreenAnon! I didn’t realize pressing delete got rid of your review as well!
shamelessly giving myself a 10 btw
[Report This]Date: April 08 2022 10:02 PM Title: The Invasion
I liked it a lot! I see we're starting on day one of the invasion, I'm guessing Procerita will manage to do better than Clara did at evading the Aelmari? Either way it's off to a good start, Glalans are always fun characters to write, I think you got their mindset pretty well. I'm hoping that she and Max get closer, it's a harsh galaxy out there for a fugitive catgirl!
Also as for adding to a series I think you just go to the series page while logged in and there's an "add to" thing below the description, I double checked to make sure it was open. Here's a direct link to the series page since the series listing on the side of the homepage seems to not be working.
https://giantessworld.net/viewseries.php?seriesid=9386
Author's Response:
I’m still struggling to add to the series due to technical difficulties this time rather than my own hubris.
Putting that aside, I’m very glad you enjoyed it! You are one of my favourite writers on the site and it means a lot to me that I get to be a part of your universe.