I like how you inverted the initial size relation and is using it to show how John’s assumptions about Airy and fairies were wrong and biased. I also like how Airy, in a clumsy and dumb way, show real care for John. The duo dynamic is both comic and endearing sometimes, makes you really hope John come to see Airy in a more positive light.

And who knows? John said he doesn’t like man, but is full of biases. What if he ends up liking his experience with Airy and Tug? It also feels like you are building up some mysteries about who commands the fairies and how they live.

Thank you for sharing your story, I am invested and hope to see more of Airy and John soon. 10 out of 10 so far.

On a final note, sorry for any misspelling. Although I am fluent in english, it is not my primary language.