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Reviewer: Petite Soeur Signed [Report This]
Date: November 29 2021 2:16 AM Title: Lady Masque, part 1

This story reminded me of the sad fact I-raf-you wasn't able to sell enough copies of Gaiden to pay artists to do illustrations for all of the bad endings, including this one for Tetsukamen (Iron Mask). Dunno know why you're using English and French for her name; if you're going for French, her name would be 'Masque de Fer'.


It's been ~8 years since I played, so I only have a vague recollection of A.S.'s Shrink School setting. Usually when I replay Gaiden, it's to revisit Mizuho Land and the third ending where Tetsukamen and Mizuho both defeat Chijinda and misunderstand when they asked him to choose whom he wanted to be shrunk by. Don't remember what kind of effects a double dose of the shrink serum had, but I do remember Mizuho trying her best to locate his mini-mini size.


In any case, for the above reason, I wouldn't know what to suggest should happen in this particular route where Iron Mask monopolises Chijinda all to herself.

Reviewer: iswear12 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 21 2021 8:41 AM Title: Lady Masque, part 1

A super compelling start, I love seeing Shrink High stories show up!


Yours is well-written, compelling, and paints a clever scene. Chijinda and Tetsuko are faithful along with the general background stuff to the game, and the descriptive ability and dialogue are fun.


I hope things ramp up even more, it's a really good start and I want to see more, not just of this but other stories too when you get the chance, keep up the amazing work!!

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