Reviews For Oatmeal Creampie
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Reviewer: D W Signed [Report This]
Date: November 19 2021 3:14 AM Title: Chapter 1

How is it that Stephen survived being eaten and pooped out by Dani; but the other five died by being crushed inside her?

Otherwise, though I am not into the "M" part of "FM/m", quite a good story.  Just how far will Dani go as Stephen's mother?

Who is "Tippy"? {I have the suspicion you write your thoughts out and have not finalized your story, and post it before completely proofreading.  LMFAO, I do that all the time too.}

Will Dani eat Stephen again, maybe even Reuben or a few others, and poop them out too?  Will Dani nurse Stephen?

Reviewer: supernatural Signed [Report This]
Date: November 18 2021 11:53 PM Title: Chapter 1

I'm still waiting for the oat meal cream pie. Those things are good :(

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