Date: August 12 2021 3:07 AM Title: Chapter 1
Utterly fantastic story. There are a few gramatical errors {e.g. capitalizing the first letter in a sentence} but they are few and easily ignored.
I too have a few wrestling stories, yet to be posted, though none where the guy shrinks as the contest goes on. Great concept and well done on your part.
My favorite part has to be him shrinking up between her breasts within her sports bra. You had very nice descriptions of this, and it came across very alluring {even if he complained about her cleavage}.
Too bad the story is over.?.?.? Perhaps another round or two for Jen is in order??? Maybe Steve becomes suspicious and Jen has to deal with him late one night as well.
Author's Response:
thank you!
this is my first time writing a story, so the review is appreciated!
I'll have to think about if I want to continue with this character.
I look forward to your wrestling stories too