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Reviewer: Storyreader21 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 20 2021 1:14 AM Title: Chapter 1

Nice. Really wish it had female Ranmachan either becoming the unborn child or ranmachan being the one to get pregnant, and have sex as a girl the whole time., but that's just me.



Author's Response:

Thanks!

While your ideas are interesting, the direction of the story was determined by the commissioner :D

Reviewer: SizePrincess Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 19 2021 11:32 PM Title: Chapter 1

I absolutely love Ranma 1/2, and there is not enough size content out there for it.

Thak you for writing this (I also love Nabiki XD)

Great work on this commission, I hope the commissioner was satisfied with this :D

Either way, I love it. 



Author's Response:

Yeah, I can see why you'd like Ranma.  From what little I've seen of it, it seems like a fun series.

It was a fun write, and the commissioner was very pleased with the end result, so it made the whole thing worth the challenge.  That said, from a very surface level I have to say Nabiki seems like a terrible person.  I don't know if the story makes her out to be a bit more nuanced or maybe make her go through an arc to make her into a better person, but I couldn't help be think about how unlikable she seemed to be.  That said, I like some unlikable characters and she's pretty hot lol

 

Glad you enjoyed it and thanks for reading!

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