Date: March 30 2021 11:19 AM Title: Chapter 1
Great job! It's clearly well-written first chapter with zero fluff. Definitely adding this one to the favorites list for future update notifications.
Author's Response:
Thank you, johnsmith10992!!
Date: March 30 2021 6:25 AM Title: Chapter 1
First off, welcome to giantess world!
Next, I like the setup of this story. The intro to the characters are nice, and I think it's interesting you mentioned that she has a family. Could be fun for her to hide him from them. Lol
I also like Lily's friendly/flirty behavior. She gives me that "I'm going to mess with you, but you will love it" vibe.
I'm also excited about the tags included in this story, so I can't wait to see what you have in store for us!
i can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Thank you, TomSpeedy! Slowly but surely, I'll try to keep working through this story–and stay tuned on the points you bring up. I've got a feeling they'll come up soon!