Date: March 20 2021 7:02 PM Title: Preparations
I do hope you continue this story of yours, it does have some great qualities! I love the idea of the owner shrinking people down for her client's unaware enjoyment. We've seen crush and some vore but I'm looking forward to the (semi) non lethal punishments for the other victims. Makeup and lipstick sound amazing to be mixed with the size genre. And we've only seen 5 out of the 12 people's points of views so I'm interested in what else you might have in store later on.
If I could also make a suggestion: stomach POVs? Maybe the other person on the strawberry doesn't get chewed up but maybe survives getting swallowed? Maybe one of the ones in the flip flops survives though I doubt it.
My only real complaint is the length of the chapters. Maybe make them a little bit longer, dive a bit deeper into things and what the characters see. What they're feeling, how big things really are to them now.
Anyway, I do look forward to seeing what comes next from you with this story!