Date: July 01 2008 8:07 AM Title: To Be With An Asshole
nah, no subplot. just keep this going! i want to see more!!
Date: February 24 2008 1:46 AM Title: To Be With An Asshole
I recommend a crude plan or something so at least you have an idea on what to do. Doesen't have to elaborate. Thinking as you write is good, but planning it is better.
Of course, you plan offsite on Microsoft Word and you make sure no one but you reads it.
So if the subplot works, well plan it out, see how it might work and then consider your options
[Report This]Date: February 23 2008 1:29 PM Title: To Be With An Asshole
Nope! No need to add the good professor. This story is good enough the way it is.
[Report This]Date: February 21 2008 4:43 PM Title: Encounter With Holly
So, there's going to be something for everybody, then? Cool!
[Report This]Date: February 21 2008 4:40 PM Title: The Watch
Interesting opener! I just hope this "Holly" (mentioned in the next chapter's prologue) isn't the ex-girlfriend John alluded to, earlier.
Date: February 19 2008 7:32 PM Title: The Watch
Yes, you will receive reviews when the giantess material is introduced.
Date: February 19 2008 4:56 PM Title: The Watch
Good start. I look forward to reading more. Please continue.