[Report This]Date: June 03 2015 10:52 AM Title: Introduction
Wow super interesting chapter, Caitlin showing some actual humanity for once. It doesn't seem like it was a mere ploy to draw Jack out. I wonder if she has legitimate feelings for him or some kind of issues stemming from her background. Can't wait to find out about this new depth that's been created for her.
[Report This]Date: June 03 2015 3:49 AM Title: Introduction
After a few months off the site, I come back and find this piece of literature finally updated after almost a year!! Yeah!!!
Gonna be honest; this is the one story that got me introduced to the site.
It's good. Still good. Just... please don't make me wait so long for an update again; that was almost as brutal as Caitlyn's treatment of Jack was. Especially after this relative cliffhanger.
Date: June 01 2015 3:37 PM Title: Dissipation
oh shit dawg
the suspense
Date: June 01 2015 12:36 PM Title: Introduction
By the wait, how does Jack see being inside in the teddybear?
Author's Response:
The bear is made of quite a chunky knit material, which you can sort of see through. Imagine putting a woolly jumper over your head - you can see through the little holes between the wool surprisingly clearly, without being seen.
[Report This]Date: June 01 2015 12:09 PM Title: Dissipation
Im with Antagoniser here.
This is the best chapter yet in this story!
Jack pulled the 'hidden in plain sight' card and he is doing a great job with it. (but for how long, i have no idea.)
Caitlin's reaction was great and it was realistic. I could sense her rage as she was already frustrated with whatever she was doing prior to arriving at home, and now she was steaming with fumes from her head and now Jack can feel it too as she cools down by unintentially hugging him.
It sounded like she destroyed her room just trying to find Jack. Now imagine Caitlin finding Jack. Man, I cant wait when that happens.
I really wonder. Does Caitlin know that Jack is there inside her teddy? I have a feeling she does and is pretending that she has no idea, forcing Jack to remain still whenever she is present.
Or, this is the best unaware scene that I have seen in a long time.
Since Jack is 'gone' in Caitlin's mind, does she need something else to relieve her? Will she have sex with the teddy? Will she strap that dildo on the teddy and use it like a sex toy, all while Jack is inside it?
I mean, you did mention that the neck region of the teddy was worn down a bit. Could happen.
I believe its Saturday now, so Caitlin might stay at home all day, or possibly stay in her room all day. That could be a problem for Jack.
There are so many possibilities; I just cant wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Caitlin is unaware that Jack is inside the bear, it wouldn't make much sense for her to pretend she didn't know if she did, either - she would have dragged him out instantly.
This is a big bear toy that Caitlin simply likes to cuddle at night, while I won't deny that there is something a bit telling about the fact that she enjoys holding onto something similar in size to a Beta like Jack - it's not because she views, or treats, her teddy as a sexual object.
It will be Saturday in the morning, and if you remember, someone will be coming round...
Date: June 01 2015 9:53 AM Title: Introduction
Wow... just wow. Best chapter yet, Caitlin's rage and then breakdown was amazing. Desperate to find out what happens next!
Date: June 01 2015 5:59 AM Title: Dissipation
I'm with gadget, no sympathy for this monster direct to jail ! great chapter: PS: make her pay imagin8 please!
[Report This]Date: May 31 2015 11:44 PM Title: Dissipation
Can't say I feel sympathy for Caitlin after she kidnapped, beat, raped, and humiliated a guy half her size and a quarter her weight...Whatever backstory she has, its not justification for what she's done. And apparantly, Jack wasn't even the first normal sized guy she's messed with so who knows what other crap she's pulled.
I think Jack needs to get the eff out and fast! Caitlin is an unstable, brutal woman, who I doubt would hesitate to beat him into submission, maybe even kill him, if she got her paws on him! Or at least that's the impression I get of her. Either way, I'm surprised Jack didn't decide to call the cops when he had the chance, this fiasco was definitely worth getting the law involved!
Great chapter!
[Report This]Date: May 31 2015 10:51 PM Title: Dissipation
.....finish this. It's against the law not to.
[Report This]Date: May 31 2015 10:25 PM Title: Dissipation
If she finds him there, the next morning, you know she's going to beat the stuffing out of both of them! Or, at the very least, bind and gag him within it.
Date: May 31 2015 8:17 PM Title: Introduction
Saw a bit more of Caitlin here, what with the drinking and anger over Jack disapearing. I really like what you've done so far. Now its whether Jack can survive the night with an angry Amazon holding him close.
Date: May 29 2015 9:03 AM Title: Preparation
Can't Jack just break the window? Since he's been kidnapped he shouldn't have to pay for any damages. He's the victim here.
Author's Response:
Jack knows that the glass is impossible for someone of his size to break - it's designed to be strong enough to withstand an impact by a fully-grown Alpha, so that's 8-times as strong as he is. Even if he threw something heavy at it, he could never get enough force behind his throw.
Date: May 29 2015 8:50 AM Title: Desolation
Hopefully Jack won't rergret it...! I'm sure he'll be fine.
Date: May 29 2015 8:47 AM Title: Desensitisation
Poor Jack. Nice to see this story back. Still really enjoying it.
[Report This]Date: May 28 2015 10:19 PM Title: Preparation
Oh snap things are turning up. Awesome chapter.
[Report This]Date: May 28 2015 10:16 PM Title: Introduction
I just read the whole story through and I fucking love this. You have an unbelievable talent when it comes to writing out domination scenes with Catilin, they're so descriptive and sexy. I personally loved it when she uses her feet, as well as when she pushes Jack's head against her breasts.
Caitlin is by far my favorite character, she's like my dream girl come true. A giantess that can still fit in the bedroom, and do personal activities with you. She's incredibly tall, has red hair (I like red heads, their hair just looks so exotic and wild), she's muscular (always a turn one when you've got a giantess fetish), and she knows how to be domineering.
My only regret, however, is that she doesn't seem to have any redeemable qualities about herself. I understand why that is, sometimes you just need a bad guy to be bad. I just wish there was something more personal about her character that could redeem her in some way,and make her easier to sympathise with. I mean, hell, I'd worship her in real life the way she'd want me to. But only if I knew that she was doing it for our mutual enjoyment, and that she still saw me as an equal and not a lesser being. I understand that that won't happen, as Caitlin is set to be the primary antagonist and nothing else. I just wish I could like her for reasons other than her looks.
But hey, don't listen to me about that, I'm not trying to write your story. You write it the way you want it written man, cause it's coming out amazingly the way you've got it set up.
Author's Response:
I understand what you mean about wanting to find the redeemable qualities in a character who appears to be incredibly cruel and/or evil, it's a response I myself have to most protagonists like this, however in many ways it's a lot cleaner to simply make them irretrievably bad. As you've stated, if she was nicer, she would be incredibly desirable in a lot of ways - that's sort of the whole crux of the issue.
Not to give the game away too much, but some facts that will come to light that explain why Caitlin's is the way she is, though not for some time.
[Report This]Date: May 28 2015 8:26 PM Title: Introduction
I always enjoy comparisons in stories, especially when it is within a specific size range. Its just odd for me when a comparison comes in that is close but not quite there. Its just a trait of mine to pay attention to the smallest of details in stories I like. What you did with the protein bar was spot on as everything that is twice as big will have 8 times the volume. What caught me off guard was the dildo. For a beta girl it would be 1 foot long and 2.5 inch wide. That tells me that either 1) alpha males are hung like crazy or 2) the girl has an oversized dildo.
Its a wonderful story and I can't wait to read more of it.
Author's Response:
Your suspicions are correct regarding the dildo; Caitlin is just under 6' 7" in old money, so she's a big girl whichever way you look at it. I doubled up the size of a truly enormous real life dildo, so it's not unprecedented, but it is extreme for effect. Jack is also completely naive about this sort of thing so all it does is scare him, Jack doesn't know how hung Alpha guys are but this 'evidence' adds to his feeling of inadequacy.
[Report This]Date: May 28 2015 7:51 PM Title: Preparation
Wow, what a deep chapter.
It kinda reminded me of those 'escape' games where you have to find stuff and unlock things.
I have a feeling that Caitlin will discover the message that Jack sent. Maybe by fingerprints, smell of a beta, tablet position. I got that feeling.
I like the detail you put into Jack making a skeleton key and the part when he was trying to decode the tablet.
Caitlin is coming soon. I wonder what she will discover in the next chapter!
Date: May 28 2015 1:29 PM Title: Preparation
Buzz-killer!
;-D
[Report This]Date: May 28 2015 12:14 PM Title: Preparation
If she doesn't go near the hamper, why NOT hide there? In fact, why doesn't he put her dirty clothes underneath the T-shirt, then re-lock the wardrobe, before getting in the hamper?
Author's Response:
Some reasons why Jack won't risk hiding in there:
i) Perhaps the basket is empty because she threw all the clothes out to look for him when he first escaped to the bathroom. He doesn't know for certain that it is unused.
ii) Even if it's unused, the laundry basket is a very obvious place to hide, it's one of the first places she will check, and it was left empty without a lid on it, so if he covers himself in clothes it's even more obvious something has changed.
Also: if he puts dirty clothes under the t-shirt (presumably to create a Jack-sized bundle), at best it will delay her by about 2 seconds.