Reviews For Birthday Treat
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Reviewer: kbDArt Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 24 2023 6:49 PM Title: Chapter 1

Very nice erotic short story.

I enjoyed the RP intro and the idea of the dual-tech (one to shrink, the other to make a person more flexible to swallow). Well written Gershwin. It's taken me awhile to come across your writings, but better late than never. I enjoy them.




Author's Response:

I always appreciate the feedback. Always happy to see someone has enjoyed my work. I've fallen off the writing waggon for a whole now, I get the itch to get back on now and then, and I will, eventually.

In case you weren't aware, "Taking a Dip" and "Dream Come True" are both now fully illustrated comics, you can find them on my Eka's Portal account.

Reviewer: Milla Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 25 2021 12:45 PM Title: Chapter 1

Wow, this story was very good, to say at least! The way everything changed from fantasy to a real life, threatening end of his life was just perfect! Also, I'd like to write like you, I loved your style!



Author's Response: Thank you very much, I appreciate the feedback! Happy to hear you enjoyed it and the style.

Reviewer: Her-chocolatebar Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 23 2021 6:07 PM Title: Chapter 1

Oh that's okay. I assure you! :)

I will have no problems imagining such a wonderful scenario on your behalf! Lol

Reviewer: Her-chocolatebar Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 22 2021 9:05 PM Title: Chapter 1

Wow! That was truly wonderful. I love these flavours of story here too.

Wouldn't happen to have becky's phone number on you by any chance? 😁🍫

Perhaps she has a craving for something sweet!

perhaps she has a craving for something sweet!

Like chocolate!!



Author's Response: I’m happy to hear you enjoyed it! Hah, sadly not, I didn’t imagine one for her in the story.

Reviewer: Cameron99 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 20 2021 6:40 PM Title: Chapter 1

Really enjoyed this one, thank you! I get legitimately excited if I see a new or updated story from you, as Welcome to Kinks and Taking a Dip are legitimately two of my favorite stories period



Author's Response:

Thank you! I'm happy you enjoyed it.

It really makes it all worthwhile hearing people like you say that :) there will be more to come, getting back into the writing now.

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