Date: November 01 2022 2:00 AM Title: The First Strike, part two
I love how you set the scene with the aunt taking her time jogging before she meets with Travis. It shows that this isn’t a big deal for her and that there’s no consequences if she’s late, but for the guys, there probably will be.
In addition to the Aunt, I like how experienced and confident she is with the whole shrinking process and also the worship stuff. I like how she convinced Travis to kiss her daughter’s feet while he was still regular sized. Not to mention that comment about how she put Travis’s dad in her ass one time. Amazing!
Speaking of her daughter, I like Cindy’s contrasting behavior compared to her mother. She also doesn’t seem to care much for the shrinking process and seems that the whole concept is strange which is funny.
I found it shocking how easy it was for Travis to get shrunk. Seems like as long as you know a guy’s name, they could get shrunk. The police didn’t even verify if what happened was true. This seems like the norm, so I’m curious if any guys got shrunk on purpose without committing a crime.
Anyway, I’m curious what happens with Cindy and Travis next and I can’t wait for the next chapter! (I’m also excited for a potential teacher scene soon.) :)