Date: October 29 2022 10:22 AM Title: The First Strike, part one
I’m curious about Mrs. Waller. I’m crossing my fingers and hoping that she’s a naughty teacher ready to pounce on him.
Nothing like getting a strike at school. Might be fun if he gets detention too.
I’m liking the strike system and how strict it is. Seems like these guys truly fear if they will shrink or not. And because of that, the women take advantage of it.
I can’t wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading! Keep your fingers crossed… she may find her way into the story. Kinda gave me an idea… but we’ll get there! Can’t wait to share the next chapter with you!
Date: October 29 2022 3:36 AM Title: The First Strike, part one
Love the concept of extended shrinkage for strike offenses against women. Will be interesting to read of the punishments and of extended times shrunk due to strikes.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! I’m glad you like it! [spoilers] The punishments will indeed intensify as the strike sentences get longer and as our protagonist gets older and deals with older women.
Date: October 28 2022 10:30 PM Title: The First Strike, part one
This is a creative concept, and your writing is pretty tight too. Can't wait to see what you do with this
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reading and saying those things! It really means a lot. And I’m excited to share where it goes as well!