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The Freshman by Jacksmith Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 506]
Summary:

An adventurous teen who just happens to be five inches tall has been stuck in homeschool all his life.  When he finally enters public high school and a new world of friends, bullies, and cliques, he quickly discovers challenges even bigger than he could've imagined.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Adult 30-39, Mature (40-49), Couples, Giant, Legwear, Odor, Unaware, Adventure, Entrapment, Feet, Gentle, Humiliation, Maternal, Mouth Play
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 82 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 179462 Read Count: 1058021
[Report This] Published: September 01 2011 Updated: May 26 2019
Reviewer: littlewarrior Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 02 2017 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21: Vixen Advice

Oh my, who should Peter trust? I know I have some catching-up to do, but I wanted to pop in to tell you I enjoyed this chapter in particular. I find it representative of some of the things I've enjoyed about the story in general. You've commended me before on my restraint. Let me just say that Peter's interactions with Ms. Tritter are just heavenly, exemplars of the power of subtlety.

Sharon I find interestingly complex. Mandy is her foil as the unpredictable, genuinely scary one. Sharon is still threatening, but somehow less so. Even endearing, in an odd way. I'm hoping she's sincere, and turns into the friend who gets Peter to take some fun risks. In any case, I trust the 'smith to weave an engrossing tale, and look forward to following Peter's high school haps.



Author's Response:

Good to see ya back on the site. I'm glad to hear you like the quieter moments of this story. Those are often some of my favorite parts of this genre. Thanks for reviewing

Reviewer: littlewarrior Signed
Date: May 13 2017 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26: Tightly Wound

Ha! Ms. Watson is... interesting. I share Peter's sentiments about the idea of Ms. Watson getting more "friendly" towards him. I'm laughing right now at how genuinely uncomfortable this chapter has made me (in a good way).



Author's Response:

Oh good. It's definitely supposed to be a bittersweet chapter for readers.

Reviewer: littlewarrior Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 30 2017 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32: Popped Question

Well, of course Sharon has to make sure Peter "knows the score". But she'll need to stay creative if she wants to keep playing on his insecurities. And I have every confidence in her.

"the siren’s irises threatened to spin from her sclera as poisoned shuriken..."

Author's Response:

Sharon's got a very large playbook on hand

Paul in Wonderland by Jacksmith Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 14]
Summary:

Paul's love of all things Alice in Wonderland sends him down the rabbit hole when his entire family discovers his fetish and decides to do something about it.

Done as a commission.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Mature (40-49), Crush, Entrapment, Fantasy, Feet, Footwear, Gentle, Growing/Shrinking Out of Clothes, Humiliation, Incest, Instant Size Change, Maternal, Mouth Play, Odor, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: Jacksmith Commission Stories
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9182 Read Count: 52329
[Report This] Published: August 23 2017 Updated: August 29 2017
Reviewer: littlewarrior Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 30 2017 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Well, I certainly couldn't pass this one up. I think I know where Paul's Wonderland is. It's that sweet spot between lust and embarrassment, and your crafted prose put me right there beside him. Seriously, you brought me out of the abstract appreciation of the scenario, and into his conflicted mind as he steps out from beneath that couch. Nice allusions to the source material, too.



Author's Response:

Hey, thanks much. Glad you felt engaged

Converse by Vintovka Rated: G starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4]
Summary:

A man.  A shoe.  A journey.  A giant woman.


Categories: Giantess, Adventure, Crush, Feet, Footwear, Unaware, Young Adult 20-29
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: Gamma Tau Sigma
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3440 Read Count: 12486
[Report This] Published: July 08 2018 Updated: July 08 2018
Reviewer: littlewarrior Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 12 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Converse

Fun scenario, and fantastic descriptions!



Author's Response:

Thanks!  You'd never guess I had to radically deviate from my plan halfway through.

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