A young girl is sent into hiding on the eve of World War III. When she heads back out into the world, it has changed dramatically...
Very enjoyable. Looking forward to seeing her using her size more. Maybe stepping on some people or saving them from a cat. Is it possible that maybe her mother also got into a chamber? Maybe she would decide to rule over the little people and accept their worship. Nice story so far.
Loving this story. Well done and very interesting.
Super cool plot. I greatly enjoy your writing.
Author's Response:
Thanks!
A slow shrinking story, about a man who has nothing left to lose.
Very nice story. Well done characters. Looking forward to more.question, will Linda be back in the story. She is my favorite. Maybe add in some high heels. Maybe someone beating their fists on the side of her shoes to get her attention. Excellent writing skills and so many different stories within the story.
Tremendous story. One of the finest I have ever read anywhere. It was hard to ever stop reading. This was excellent with great characters. My only question is Allison. The picture in the first chapter, who is she?
Author's Response:
Yvonne Stahowski. She is from Dexter. Thank you for the praise my friend.
Michael Parker and his wife Amy have recently purchased their first home that they can truly call their own. They're about to throw a housewarming party and their friends will be attending. What will happen when Michael decides to entertain their guests by showing off to them the latest invention he's been toiling away on for the past few months?
I like that Claire is gentle but crushing those guys was fair. Plus even though she's gentle everyone must obey and be respectful or else.
This is the first new story from me in a few years. This story is dedicated to all the Star Trek fans who may be out there. I think Star Trek fan fiction on this site is severely lacking, and hopefully this will help to somewhat address that problem. I understand that this is not for everyone, but hopefully it will at least appeal to some. If you are a Star Trek fan you might be able to understand where I'm coming from with this. I also hope that in doing this I might help inspire others to create similar works of Star Trek fan fiction here with size changing and all that. So anyway, check it out, and let me know what you think.
Looking forward to more. What terror will Dr.Crusher inflict on this small world? What will she do to other worlds and other people?
Great start,
Diesel
Please continue. What a lucky planet.
Later,
Diesel
A young man must come to terms with the fact that he no longer enjoys the station in life that was his by birthright and must now adjust to the cruel fate that life has dealt him.
Enjoyed this chapter as well. Sheila handles him well. Love when she talks about him like he is not there. Like a pet or an object.
So who are the new men and how do they fit in? I can hardly wait to see where this goes.
Why doesn't Wendy just use her device to catch him? He can't be 5 miles away.
Love it, love Wendy,
Diesel
Author's Response:
If you re-read the end of the chapter when she get's off the phone, she goes back to the house to get the locating device delegating Sheila to search for him in the meantime.
As to who the guys are.. I've already spoiled that surprise if you look at my response to Carycomic. ;)
I'm glad that you liked this chapter as well.. Not all of them are going to be so GTS intensive as I wanted to give the story a bit more background development so that it isn't smothered or one dimensional in GTS.. But please hang in there while that happens Diesel!
This has been a very exciting chapter. Will they be able to rescue mark before he tells what he knows? Will little timmy be caught by Wendy or Shiela on that attempt? Will the little people suddenly find the Massive Wendy and Shiela suddenly walking towards their tree? My other thought is would Wendy and Shiela be satisfied with just getting little timmy back or will both ladies fill their purses or bags with little people? I know, no spoiler alerts but this keeps running through my head in bed at night. I think of the horror of those two walking up to the tree. I know Shiela wants at least one tiny person to herself.
Author's Response:
Well I'm glad that you're thinking about the possibilities never the less Diesel. True, I wont give any spoilers away but everything that you said suffice it to say is on the table and then some things that you didn't say are right up there with those potentialities as well.
A sincere thanks as always for your contiued patronage of this story Diesel. :)
It's cool to see mark's capture from his point of view. Wendy and Shiela are both characters that I like a lot. . Wendy does need little timmy back. I understand that desperate times call for desperate measures. Torture is a way of getting that. How long can a little hold out against a Giantess?
Wow, they hung Hancock. The freedom nation doesn't play around. Melody looks very interesting. There are so many ways that you can go with this. Rescuing mark seems fair. Rescuing mark reminds me of a show I use to watch.
The use of mouse skins is a great idea. A natural source of clothing and food. It makes sense.
Wendy and Shiela are enjoying their torturing of mark. I'm assuming that he won't last long.
This was an informative and exciting chapter. It really wet my appetite for more.
Greatly enjoyed it,
Diesel
Author's Response:
I'm glad that you liked it Diesel
I got the idea for the mouse furs from the Huns barbarian tribe. That's actually what they used to make clothing.. Mouse hides. As strange as that sounds. So I figured that the Littles using it would make practical sense.
I know I certainly would not want to be left to the malevolent inclinations of some very determined powerful teenage girls.. Mark's in a lot of trouble I think.
Thanks a lot for your continued support Diesel.
Cool continuation. Little timmy has a new life with the new gang of little men. A Twinkie is a great prize. I have not had one in a long time. I'd have left the boy behind also. Too much risk of being caught. I was wondering if the Mother would come home and catch some of them. I like the birdcage as a home. Great for the Giantess perspective. I'm sure she still looks down on him.
I also wonder if Wendy or Shiela eventually recapture timmy or some of the other little men. I know spoilers.
Great to see this continue,
Diesel
Author's Response:
These things that you have just metioned I have consdiered suffice it to say... That's the thing about writing a story.. You have to think of everything!
Suffice it to say that I would not have restarted this story if I did not have a direction or outcome in mind.. That had me stumped for a while but now I know how to move towards it and not lose th forest for the trees.
I'm going full steam ahead on this now and am glad that you are on board!
Thanks a lot Diesel. :)
Greatly looking forward to it my friend.
Later,
Diesel
Author's Response:
There might be a short lag time as I have a friend visiting for a week. But that will give me a lot of time to make more interesting twists in the story. :)
You really get a feel of what it is like to be small. The blending in idea works very well. It was terrifying enough when the kids come in but then Mom also. So far so good, they are safe.
His light is also coming in handy. They really have a precise operation going on. A very enjoyable chapter. I definitely look forward to this story.
Later,
Diesel
Author's Response:
Thanks a lot Diesel.. I figured his tool would be a good way to gain favor with the other men after the unfortunate incident where Mark is captured.
The next chatper will be a little more graphic so please stay tuned. ;)
By the way the entire scene of when the girls were searching for Tim was great. It's easy to imagine the fear of when Shiela says, I think he's over here Wendy. Scary.
Also love when he stabs her to gain freedom and it only lasts a second as Shiela just grabs him with her other hand.
Loved it,
Diesel
Author's Response:
Yeah I imagine the tiny little pin prick isn't going to stop a determined Giant for long! And I'm glad that you were able to catch the fear that would set in when such a massive person decides to chase you down. He, he.
Thanks again Diesel!!!!
Love Wendy and Love the premise for the story. I am sure that Wendy will continue to have the upper hand. Very nice writting when you show it from his point of view (being lifted). You make your stories very believable. If this happened in real life it could easily go this way. Out of curiosity will Wendy's Mom make an appearance?
Looking forward to more,
Diesel
Looks like she has him. Will his hiding place be good enough? Wendy is a smart Giantess. The modern age is working against him. Love the new gadgets. They are only for his own good. Will his Giantess Mother eventually use them?
Nice story,
Diesel
Author's Response:
Thanks for commenting once again on this story Diesel... I was wondering if you'd make a call to it once I got it rolling again and am delighted to see that you have not let me down.
Welcome back Diesel and happy to see you again. ;)
Excellent chapter.The orange suit idea is logical. It will lead to his safety. Will he see the light or will his anger get the best of him. Very realistic idea. Being small for Wendy would be nice.
Author's Response:
I'm glad you like the idea of the fluorescent colors all in the spirit of keeping those afflicted from possibly getting underfoot. :)
Very cool. I am shocked that Tim could get away. The tunnels are amazing. To have them marked and everything. Wow, what a concept. The poor guy caught by Shiela. He is in for some tough times. Will Wendy be questioning him? Will she torture him to get what she wants? What am amazing world.
Beyond excellent,
Diesel
Author's Response:
These are all very good questions and deserve diirect attention in subsequent chapters Diesel. :)
Thanks a lot for another wonderful review my friend!
