Very fun adventure story. I like the level of character development. Having Sihil in the story really heightens the tension by providing two perspectives from two characters that have a rounded arc.

I also appreciate your use of Latin as the second language. This is one of the rare times that being forced to take Latin in high school has done anything for me. 

Love Robin's character arch. Would love to see a sequel. 

Fun and action packed!

I really like this concept. The contrast of a cruel and gentle scenario is neat. The mechanism of this story where digestion is optional, is a fun mechanic to play around with.

I think something that would be your writing is slowing down when you get to the action. Take a bit of time getting there and then build out the scenario. You and I both seem bent towards digestion, watersports, and odour. When you get to that point, give the audience some more description of what's going on - the smell, the sight, the feeling. Take your time there, paint a picture. 

Your concept is neat and what I'm saying is that I'd like to see more of it. Keep up the good work!

You have a well placed writing style. I think you hit a good back and forth for dialogue and action. It's fun to read.

Definitely, love this dynamic. It'll be interesting to see how the characters evolve in their outlook. Kristen will have to become more gentle, but perhaps as John gets more comfortable that he is safe, maybe he tolerates his girlfriends violence more? Lots of ways you could go, all very fun. 

Oh, and my only complaint is that you teased and then didn't have a giant couple scene. 

I like this story. This is one of my favourite devices - a giantess and tiny who are on gentle-ish terms but where cruelty is still involved outside the relationship. Very dominating dynamic. I like it. 

Your characters have great dynamics. But I think your storytelling would improve if you extended your descriptions of events out. There's references to things that sound interesing but not a full description. I think this would help bring your story to life. 

Cool start to the story. I enjoy that Carmen isn't reflexively cruel, more so just flippant. She cares about what other people might think but not that highly on the life of tinies.

You're back! It's great to have another story from you. I'm trying to think what it is that is so remarkable about your stories. I think it's that your stories are lewd but also romantic and whimsical. The romance plays up the submission and connection that sits below the outward expression of the fetish. It's a neat interplay. I also like how you played with folklore - in a way that provided enough context without being over the top with exposition. Really well done. 

Really good stuff. I'm a sucker for giant-tiny couples, especially where the giants are otherwise cruel. You're writing style is fun to read. The ideas in this story are also quite fun. Giants deciding to fuck with one particular tiny because they are bored - neat. I'm really looking forward to future chapters.

It's always exciting to see a new author who is writing more developed stories. I really liked this one. Anna's growth felt sort of like a metaphor for honing in one someone, flirting with them, and having them be interested back. Suddenly, this person is a huge portion of your life and interest. Growing is an interesting way to reflect that.

I love stories that develop the romance. It gives more of a sense of the characters and it makes me interested in where they are going. Like what is Arlo going to do now that the woman he was flirting with actually is the most important person in the region? Will he be able to help her? Will Anna stay interested in him? WHat does she do next? I'm wanting more, which is the sign of a good story!