Penname: Mr in A suit [Contact] Real name:
Member Since: June 26 2019
Membership status: Member
Bio:

Just a fan of gentle giantess stories. I like romance, the chracters interactions and the development of their emotions in doing so, not just the usual sadism (of the giantess) and masochism (of the tinies).


I most enjoy stories where th mc gets shrunk and has to deal with his/her relationship with family and friends. 


Thats it. Sorry for any misspelling. Although I am fluent in english, it is not my primary language.


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Summary:

 

 

Inspired by many of my favorite stories, and by current events. 

A virus is spreading across the globe, one that shrinks men, and makes womens breasts grow. 

This story follows a young man living with his mother and sister during these times. 

After amount of requests I got, I decided to make a kofi, and I will prioritize writing based on donations. However, I will continue writing regardless if I go donations or not and eventually write spin offs in the same universe following other people.

https://ko-fi.com/ittybitty926


Categories: Breasts, Breast Enlargement, Feet, Gentle, Incest, New World Order
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: FF/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 24980 Read Count: 158641
[Report This] Published: June 12 2020 Updated: June 16 2021
Reviewer: Mr in A suit Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 02 2020 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Writing is no easy task, it demmands time and dedication. I myself tried to start a story here on the site and ended up stuck in the middle. That said, my writing is nowere near as good as yours and this last chapter was amazing. I urge you not to give up.

I am also in the team that hopes Allison and John will grow closer. Loving every gentle interaction between them.

Thanks for sharing and, please, don't give up!

Summary:

A Mother is shrunk down to a 1/16th of an inch. Will her son be able to help her, or will she find her end underfoot.


Categories: Crush, Feet, Footwear, Humiliation, Incest, Odor, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: M/f
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences, This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2173 Read Count: 5704
[Report This] Published: June 21 2020 Updated: June 21 2020
Reviewer: Mr in A suit Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: June 21 2020 Title: Chapter 1: The Sole of Her Son

Really rare to find male giant stories. It was a fun and enjoyable story. Well, the end was... unexpected, but I am glad the son didn't end up killing or torturing his mother (on purpose at least kk).

Now I am curious about the big project you said to be working on. Could you tell me if it is anything like this story, but with more chapters?

Thanks for sharing and I hope to see more of your writing soon :)

P.S. Sorry for any misspelling. Although I am fluent in english, it is not my primary language.



Author's Response:

It's not really like this with more chapters. This is just a one and done story. I don't know exactly when I'll post next, but I'm hoping soon. I made this story very quickly so I could get something out, because I haven't release anything in a while. I'm glad people like giant male stories even though they are so rare. I enjoy them more than shrunken male stories, which are the norm on this website. My next story will be a shrunken woman story, as will all of my stories going forward, since that's what I enjoy most. The big project on I'm working on right now is closing in on 10,000 words, and I think it'll be 20,000 by the time I'm done. It'll be much different from what I've written so far, so I'm not sure if people are going to like it, but I've enjoyed writing it so far, so it'll be fine.  

Summary:

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Alex is a hard working man with a beloved wife an daughter depending on him. Having paid to keep them both normal sized, he is left bankrupt with no choice but to sacrifice himself to a new system set on shrinking 80% of the world's population to about an inch.

When he receives the dreaded phonecall, his wife offers to accompany him to the shrinking centre. However, not everything goes to plan- and a simple misunderstanding leaves Alex and his wife in for the ride of their lives.

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.


Categories: Giantess, Adult 30-39, Couples, Feet, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Lesbians, Mouth Play, Slave
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.), Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 3616 Read Count: 19703
[Report This] Published: August 27 2020 Updated: September 03 2020
Reviewer: Mr in A suit Signed
Date: August 27 2020 Title: Chapter 1: A simple misunderstanding [intro]

Interesting premise. And I am a sucker for stories with complicated family dynamics. Will wait for the next couple chapters to give a rating ;)



Author's Response:

Thank you! I look forward to reading your thoughts, though I'm afraid that we won't be seeing much of Melissa for a little while...

Reviewer: Mr in A suit Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 29 2020 Title: Chapter 3: Making the best of bad situation [ft. feet, crush, insertion, mouth play]

Both wife and husband shrinking and getting abused by another “tiny” is certainly different... From what we know, Hazel was willing to let her husband get the short stick for her sake (don’t know how the daughter stand on the matter), so I am interested to see how she will cope with the situation, specially because they now have a master (Kathy) to please to avoid unpleasant situations.

As you can see, I don’t like Hazel attitude. She seems bossy and the kind of person that would sacrifice just about anyone to get what she wants, specially if it meant turning back to normal size or avoiding pain. If she was bigger, I am sure Alex wouldn’t enjoy the experince of being in her hands.

About Kathy, it is implied she is going to be caried by someone else. I presume it’s going to be another Family, maybe she ends up as a pet for someone’s daughter or son. This offers many possibilities for unaware scenarios since Hazel and Alex are being smuggled.

Good story. Thanks for sharing! Five stars so far :D



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for the great review!

I was interested to read your assessment of Hazel's character. While I haven't had much opportunity to show this yet, Hazel is driven by overwhelming concern for her daughter.

Hazel's justification for letting Alex take the bullet is something I'd like to explore more later, but there's no harm in letting you know what my own thoughts were when writing the first chapter. In frank terms, Hazel believes that she is better equipped to care for their daughter than Alex is. As you've already pointed out, she is a prideful character who doesn't usually take much shit, and in this instance, there was no way she was prepared to let go of her position as Melissa's primary caretaker.

It's interesting to imagine how similar Hazel would be to Kathy were the roles reversed. Personally, I think she would be equally bossy, but maybe a bit more moderate in her approach.

I hope you enjoy the latest chapter :)

Summary:

The lone survivor of a horrific Shrinkee massacre is left dealing with the four giantesses responsible for the bloodbath as they compete to become her sole owner. 

 

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.

 

 


Categories: Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Breasts, BBW, Butt, Crush, Entrapment, Feet, Humiliation, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Lesbians, Mouth Play, Slave, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, FF/f
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 411107 Read Count: 244582
[Report This] Published: September 01 2020 Updated: February 18 2024
Reviewer: Mr in A suit Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 22 2020 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

WARNING: THE FOLLOWING COMMENT CONTAINS SPOILERS OF SOME STORY EVENTS SO FAR.

It is so rare to find some personality building in erotic stories and you managed to create some twisted dynamics between Annabelle and her four captors.

Some smut scenes as well as some dialogues, at least for me, highlights how twisted and confused the giantess train of thought and their view of what they are doing can be. Sure, now that she is shrunk they, as a group, treat her as a cute puppy, but alone the story can be very different.

Harper already stated (in a very dellusional way) that, if not shrunk, she would eventually date Annabelle. And that bath scene with Leah... that question of what if Annabelle imprint on anyone that isn't her... and that reaction...

These scenes and dialogues are obviously no accident and they make the reader wonder: what does each giantess really want from "their" Poppy? Do they just want to exercise power over the helpless or some are trying to prove a point to themselves?

Bottom line, the psycko and kinky group relation built aroud the tiny and her captors makes you question why each monster is a monster right now... Or maybe I am just overthinking the main cast. Who knows? I certainly don't.

What I do know is that, as of right now, this is my favorite ongoing story on the site.

Thanks for sharing your talent with us.

PS. Sorry for any misspelling. Although I am fluent in english, it is not my primary language.

Reviewer: Mr in A suit Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 06 2020 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

WARNING: THE FOLLOWING COMMENT CONTAINS SPOILERS OF SOME STORY EVENTS SO FAR.

Another brilliant chapter. It gave marvellous interactions betwen Anabelle, Harper and Naomi.

More and more we get glimpses of individual traits of each giantess through Anabelle eyes. And if they all seem in control, Naomi dialogues let it clear they are not as powerfull and as free as they want their "Poppy" to believe they are.

The "goddesses" have social and family expectations and if you ask me, it's preety clear this entire shrinkee torture is the result of each individual need to feel in control.

Harper is sexually and emotionally frustrated - she wanted to date Anabelle but never worked up the courage to even know her, so she planned to make her crush helpless and vulnerable. All in all, she is a coward, too afraid to get close on an emmotional level.

Than there is Naomi, who keeps a facade of punk-rock girl because others think that is cool, but really likes girly stuff and just want to let herself out. Being a coward as well, she is only able to do that with a shrinkee and as part of the sadistic group of Leah.

The problem is most shrinkees don't get to survive long enough. Even Harper was planning, at the begginig, to just get one off and kill Anabelle. But that is not the case anymore, Anabelle can survive and become their own permanently, wich means one of them will get to live her fantasy even away from the group. Someone gets to be Anabelle goddess for life, even at home and day to day life.

This chance is bound to bring competition, distrust and trouble as each individual desire and plans start to arise. It's what we have been seeing on these chapters but with no escalation.

So far their wasn't too much presure to crack the group because everyone would lose, but I am very curious to see how each giantess will react to a new Poppy, submissive and devoid of personality. Will everyone like? Will their atttude change and why?

As the story is, I think there are plenty of ways and plots that can be explored.

The giantess will meet Anabelle parents once more, and I am guessing she will still be in that sorry slave state of mind (Poppy in control). I wonder if learning more about how Anabelle life was before all this will raise some simpathy from some as well as annoy others.

Maybe not everyone will want to meet with Anabelle parents, but for apearances sake Leah, Harper and Naomi go, while Molly stays to keep Poppy company (they  are not taking any risks after this phone test or maybe Poppy strange behavior will worry them... I don't know! Too many possibilities here LOL). 

I believe this is a turning point, but there is still plenty of story to tell. As it stands, the protagonist has no chance of escaping without the help of at least one captor. The question is how to humanize the giantesses as well as humanize Anabelle to them.

All this is just me guessing and making assumptions. You, my good sir, have made a very compelling group of villainess. But I believe no one is 100% evil and now I am curious to see how you will develop each one on individual level. Now seems to be the perfect time - Anabelle is out of the picture with a mental breackdown, the group will obtain what it wanted all along - Poppy - so... what about what each captor had in mind?

Again, sorry for the long review and any misspelling. Your story and characters are just too compelling and I wrote this in a hurry.

Marvelous work! Thanks for sharing and, please, more!!



Author's Response:

Well Mr in A Suit, you definitely are an observant one. You've made some great observations and very entertaining predictions. Of course, I can't speak to their accuracy, but nonetheless they are very interesting to read. I love your in-depth analysis. It makes me feel great that there's someone out there paying attention to the little clues and details I insert into the text. Thanks for the review!


Reviewer: Mr in A suit Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 03 2021 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

I am really satisfied to see the story heading towards expanding on the backgrount of the giantesses. I am also curious about who taught the girls for them to end up the way they did, a.k.a their families. Annabelle reactions and question at the end were just perfect.

And I think Annabelle is way too optimistic if she thinks that just by getting away everything will be solved.  If she manages to escape, the families of her tormentors will intervain in any number of ways and things will just escalate from there.

Thanks for this awesome and huge chapter XD Can't wait for more.



Author's Response:

Yup, I can't for you guys to meet their families. We're still a couple of chapters from that, but I can promise that the build-up will be worth it. As for Anna's perseverance and mindset, she's very much always been a "where there's a will, there's a way" type of person.

Reviewer: Mr in A suit Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 08 2021 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

You’ve built such an interesting cast of villains, with such a complex relationship with the heroine that I simply can’t hate them, and that is proof of good writing.

 

It’s interesting to see the difference in the treatment the giantesses give Anna in comparisson to others, and how Anna is aware of the affection they have towards her. She became “a fixture in their lives”, so treating her with care and worry is now perceived as only natural by Anna and her captors. The shrunken girl even catches herself enjoying Leah’s caress.  

 

I saw some people wishing Harper or Leah whoped Zoey ass... I think the clash will happen, but it won’t be pleasant or easy for any of the parts involved. Much like themselves, Zoey’s feelings for Anna are twisted, and this is not just about making her unpredictable and dangerous, but also about looking into a mirror.

 

I am more interested in how each giantess will react upon seeing how traumatized Anna is because of her past. Some might not give it much thought and some might want to avenge Anna... and that will dictate the future of the story, because wanting to hurt Zoey for Anna’s sake changes the nature of the relationship – Anna will seize being just a slave and become something more precious, someone worth protecting from harm (past and future). Not Poppy anylonger.

 

Harper is the obvious choice, she will want to jump at Zoey, but more out of jealousy and spite than care. I picture Molly and Naomi going after Zoey only if their pride is hurt. But Leah, ice queen Leah, is another story. Her dialogues and interactions with Anna built up a kind of tension between the two that you just can’t put your finger on. 

 

And yet, you can tell is something more going on in Leah's mind when she is with her Poppy.

 

Yes, if I had to guess, I think it’s Leah the one who will want to step up against Zoey and find her match on a psychological level. They are the ones who really want Anna, they will try to hurt each other to the end. 

 

And what will make the difference for Anna in this traumatic reckoning with the past, ironically,  is the affection she knows Leah and the others hold towards her.

 

Least but not last, their is the type 0 theories and mysteries. Chapter 15 once more foreshadowed the four families deep interest in our heroine, while revealing type 0 is regarded a myth even among shrinkees. Her abilities and their extent (even the imprint) are, therefore, unknown. This is a really good plot device to push the story forward.

 

Two last questions:

1. I am not saying the 4 spoiled and cruel girls shouldn’t pay for what they did so far, but what you think? Is redemption for any of the giantessess possible? 

2. How many chapters do you estimate the story will have?

 

Well, that’s it for now. Hope some of my ideas can help you in the writing process. 

Sorry for the long comment and for any mispealling or mistakes.

 

Thanks for sharing your talent with us. Already eagerly waiting for the next chapter. 




Author's Response:

Okay, first of all thank you! Sometimes when I'm writing this story, I'll put it in the back burner because it is more of a way to get some creative juices flowing, but then I'll come back to this site after a week or two and see all the fantastic comments. It helps me remember that there's actual people who are reading this story and care about how it ends. 

Once again, I really like reading your comments, Mr. In A Suit. I can't get into the accuracy of your observations, but I like how you think. 

As for the questions:

1. I love all of my characters, so they'll never need to be redemed in my eyes, but as for the readers?  Who can say? I have an ending to the story already outlined, so you'll just have to see if the FF are "redemed" by the end.

2. Oh god. If you recall, I said that we would be going into the giantesses' backstories soon—I believe that was three months ago. Like I said, I have an outline, but often the chapters end up becoming too long, or I'll realize I want to include a scene that delays my time frame. For example, I thought the funeral scene and the (spoiler for chapter 16) visiting Annabelle's house scene was going to be in the same chapter—and you saw how that turned out. I'm not a fan of stories that are drawn out, so I'll tentatively say I want the story to be finished in under 30 chapters. 


Thanks again for your continued support!

Reviewer: Mr in A suit Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 22 2021 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

More and more the story portrays Anabelle as special for all four giantesses... As for what they represent for Anna... it’s complicated.

 

This line about Naomi picked my interest:  “She'd actually preferred it if Naomi dialed back on the affection, but she didn't understand why she was so insistent on maintaining her bad-ass persona.”

 

That line reminds of the interactions Annabelle had with Naomi in ch. 11 – “All of the giantesses treated her with cloying affection, but Naomi seemed to up it to 110% when they were alone. Annabelle figured it was because her public persona of bad-ass, cold, aloof punk-rock princess didn't allow her to show her girlier, more affectionate side. Unfortunately for Annabelle, that meant she received the full brunt of it whenever they were alone.”

 

With that in mind, I think more interactions with Naomi would be interesting – for example: Molly mockers Naomi sense of style and true behavior, but Anna later sooths her, saying she prefers that side of Naomi over her public persona.

 

Also, the part Where Zoey’s size is highlighted and Anna cant help but imagine how it would be  “to be down on the ground near a gigantic Zoey”.... marvelous! I too want to see these reactions - of Anna, of Zoey... and of Poppy!

 

Thanks for all the hard work, answering comments and continuing the story. Right now, this is my favorite on-going story on the whole site.



Author's Response:

Your comments are always so dangerous, Mr. Suit, because I am always tempted to give some things away. I love how you notice the little lines I leave behind for the future development of the plot. I had hopeed that future chapters (and the ending) would spur people to re-read the story, so they could pick up on all the clues I dropped, but you seem to be ahead of the crowd. Thanks again for commenting! 

Reviewer: Mr in A suit Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 22 2021 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

I also think some Leah/Naomi or Leah/Harper interactions would be interesting... But what I really want to see is Harper, Naomi and Harper dealing with crazy Zoey while Poppy is lost at their feet XDD... yeah, I like all characters, but Molly is not my favorite. 



Author's Response:

Ha! I also enjoy those pairings, but curious to see in the next coming chapters if you (and others) will have a change in rankings.

Reviewer: Mr in A suit Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 05 2021 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

First, let me start by saying I can’t remember any story discribing a vore experience like yours. Anna’s awe when confronted with the noises of Naomi’s organs was magnific.

Also, the size comparisons When Zoe is presente are a good touch. Leah and cia. are scary and powerfull from Anna’s perspective. But Zoey is a monster, a mountain, a force of nature... a titan like you put it.

Poppy can come out and play with the giantesses because Anna is still able to make the distinction and see them as humans, really big, really messed up human beings. Zoey is different, she is a monster, a demon to her sister.

Now, for the meat of this chapter.

If you ask me, we witnessed some really deep bounding time between Naomi and Anna. Why? Well, because Anna was inside of her! You can’t get much closer on a physical level... but then she is bathed on Naomi’s puke!  I am curious to see if this experience will have some after effect on either of the two.

Fingers crossed to see more Naomi x Anna momments.

Anna is a special existence to Leah and cia. They probably never had so much interaction with someone outside their circle and a tiny nonetheless. But it will all come down to how each one will react once their respective families act, because to their fathers and mothers, Anna is just a special type of tiny, a precious lab experiment.

About Oliver... I think he should die. Seriouslly. He Always ends up being a light of hope, a good memory to Anna... what if he ends up dying without ever fiding out she was alive? Just a tought... I don't want him and Annabelle to just end up together like a happy couple kkkk

 

 

Your story is always worth the wait. Thanks for sharing it with us! 

 



Author's Response:

Thanks, I had never written vore before so I was a little nervous. I'm glad you noticed the difference between how Annabelle perceives the FF vs. Zoey. As for Naomi X Annabelle...well there will be a lot of one-on-one moments with each giantess in the future. 

 

Again, thanks for reading and reviewing! Glad to know someone's reading

Reviewer: Mr in A suit Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 04 2021 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Wasn’t fully satisfied with my first comment, so I deleted and changed it a bit. Now it’s good. Sorry for any confusion.

I don’t usually write about the sex scenes... but boy the depiction of Anna and Molly having sex was HOT!! And that’s because you prepared the mood so well, making a perfect transiction of a sentimental part (Molly genuinely opening up to Anna) to a sexy (Anna tickling and turning Molly on). Perfect. Just perfect.

In a past comment  I said didn’t like Molly Much... I FULLY TAKE IT BACK! The depiction of her room as lacking personality and seeking approval and carnal attachment from HER TINY! So much emotions in only one chapter.

I think this story is especial because you are playing with appearances and expectations, and it all culminated in this two chapters, with a Molly full of lust and adoration saying “ I don't think I really understood what being your Goddess meant until recently” (great dialogues by the way), with Harper and Naomi expressly saying Poppy deserves to be WORSHIPPED!

They started as cinics, answering the espectations of society, while internaly fancing themselves as goddess allowed “breaking” in ocasional sprees of violence disdain and hatred for tinies, But see them now. They still think They are superior? Yes but they are showing outside signs of turmoil, to and for a tiny nonethelss. That, i see as the irony of the story, as well as kind of the tragedy of it’s antagonists.

You can theorize the giantesses inprinted on Anna, but I think it’s too early to draw conclusions about what imprinting really is and about the feelings of each character. It’s twisted relations all over since the beginning, with Harper “crush” and Leah’s amusement of Anna wits, and that’s what is so good about writing: you can portray any relation in all it’s complex contradictions (also why I don’t like Anna x Oliver. Too predictable kkk).

The giantesses are opening up to her, they love her. What about Poppy? She has to open up about Zoey, but not before coming clean about her fears about the 4 themselves. As I see it, Zoey and the mighty families are the true villains here... and will be instrumental for bounding Poppy to the giantesses even more than imprinting.

Sorry for any mispeals. I can’t imagine how much work you put into these long chapters and I thank you from the bottom of my heart. Been waiting all week to read this. You always manages to surprise me!  

About your question, I like long chapters - you can work more than one storyline at once, mixing many elements without rush - and think the length of this last chapter was good, it ended right were it needed... I ended already wishing for more Kkkkkkkk.

 

On a side note: any chance of a scene where Anna willingly ends up under a giantess sole and tickling her feet? Than, as pay back, Anna has her own feet worshipped... kkk



Author's Response:

Thanks Mr. In A Suit! I'm glad you're warming up to Molly. I may be a little biased, but I firmly believe that all of the giantesses have something special to offer Annabelle. Now whether she'll end up accepting it or not is another story. 

As always, I love your analysis. I can't say much but both Annabelle and the giantesses are going to be forced to open up and get vulnerable in order to achieve the things they want. How each character will react to one another's' past? Who can say? 

 

As for your side note: we'll just have to see, won't we ;)

Reviewer: Mr in A suit Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 14 2021 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

A lot to unpack here, so I just let my imagination run wild with theories a little. Sorry in advance for any confusion and/or mispealing.

First we have the inner dialogue of Annabelle but it’s different: the voice adresses giantesses, not as masters, but as passionate, fearsome protectors, a role we’ve seen the “goddesses” fully take on the last couple chapters - and this ch. 19 cements that.

While Bennet highlights the gentleness and care the four have - and that usually goes unseen by Annabelle – Leah getting aroused on such a tense situation just by having Anna betwen her toes (great scene by the way) shows how deep her lust for Poppy really is.

Also, this chapter leaves beyond any doubt the fact that the four have every move carefully surveilled to a suffocating degree (and I am not just talking about that huge ass security team) as well as the fact they straightout fear their own parents, highlighting the bubble they live in... maybe a bubble the four built around themselves to protect each other.

The story had already hinted sometimes that Leah, Naomi, Molly and Harper feel loonely and are forced to act roles they did not necessarily choose... but they choose to keep Annabelle close and have her inprint, they choose to take the role as her goddesses. And I think if the Type 0 is affecting them, it’s because they choose Anna... and now Anna has to choose them.

Anna has to choose, not Poppy (whatever she really is). But what does it means to choose? With the long awaited introduction of the four parents their is a window for Annabelle to see her powerfull goddesses in a fullblown vulnerable state, more in need of her worship than ever before... and so she will try to help and choose... choose to worship them! This will be the final twist for these twisted relations. What will happen after? I don’t know, but if the families are willing to spend billions on researchs about type 0, it’s damn important and incredible to them.

I am guessing we will see more of the giantesses alone with Poppy and their respective families as each one will be eager to see... their daughters? No! The most wanted type 0! Take that for guilty Anna kkkkkkk.

Last but not least, I would like to point out the sweetest scenes of the chapter are with Naomi... call me crazy, but Anna clutching her thumb with Naomi gennuinelly concerned for her safety is just too cute. Also Harper punching Bennet, even fighting John so she could finish the bastard. Beautiful, Harper at its best.

As always, I can’t thank you enough for sharing your story with us. I am loving every chapter and how you are developing things. Long or short, if there is an update I will read and review it until this story is over.



Author's Response:

I love reading your reviews Mr. in A suit! Your analyses are always so interesting to read. You're picking up on some characterization that will be explored in further chapters (part of the reason why the parent chapter is taking so long).

Like always, I can't speak too much on your theories, though I will say when this story is over, it will be fun to re-read your comments. 

Also, I'd like to mention that your little comment on Naomi and Annabelle's interaction was the catalyst for the little scene I just posted--so thank you!

Reviewer: Mr in A suit Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 26 2021 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

While reading this ch. 20, I confess I felt like Anna and I just couldn’t believe Naomi's madness was... making sense! LOL!! It started with a very romantic mood and by the Middle I was like “WTF?! I can’t agree with her!”. Yes, I was preety much feeling as guilty as Anna by the end of the chapter. And that is the result of very good writing.  

Good work with the moonlight and Naomi’s description. Anna is scared and confused about the changes that keep on happening with her and the giantesses – in a short span they went from sadistic killers to her owners and now to some kind of deranged guardians – and she is conflicted about how to react. So, she is making a escape her top priority.

Annabelle questioning if she is loving monsters and becoming a monster herself because of it is the logical conclusion of this inner conflict, and illustrates perfectly how Anna is someone that tries to shoulder the world, taking responsabilities even in this situation.

A smaller but powerfull chapter, can’t wait for the next one. And thanks for the kind responses to my comments, they mean a lot. Really glad the reviews are somehow helpfull and interesting.



Author's Response:

Yeah, thanks Mr. in A suit. As a chronic lurker, I understand that most people don't comment, but sometimes it can feel like I'm submitting my writing into a void lol. That's why I appreciate the comments (especially the ones that let me know what you're liking/what you'd like to see). 

Speaking of, about the tickling—I've been working on another story and I may have added a scene that is very similar to your request ;)

Also, I cannot wait for you guys to read the chapters where Anna's psyche is explored.

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Date: October 22 2021 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Took me a while but better late than never. I know exactly what you mean, writing takes courage and patience... I have none, so I thank the heavens for blessing the world with people like you XD

About the latest chapter, Leah’s father really steals the show, forcing a full honest reaction even from Anna. And, yes, they all have serious issues - treating a meeting with there daughter’s  as business trade is just sad.

But, we got to see the 4 once more stand up for Anna and even defend, in their own twisted sense, her status as a living being. Moreover, They proved They want her more than Money and that’s interesting because it got me curious about how far each one is willing to go to be with Poppy.

 I would like Anna to give the giantessess some credit. They clearly care for her, even turning down their parentes offers. Which brings me to the aftermatch of what happened in this chapter.

First things first, 3 giantessess will be angry at Poppy for reacting the way she did, all except Leah. As unlikely as it might be, I am betting she will empathise more with Anna’s angry towards her father nasty low blow of using her own mother as bait. Leah is probabily familiar with the governor ways and be more understanding because of some bound feeling, and will get the others off Anna’s back.

There is also the problem with the tinies. What will be Anna’s reaction after seeing yet another carnage? Will she finally break? Or will she try to reason with the 4 and convince them not to take part in the parents madness? After all, the feast is just another move to smooth them laid by the governor.

 But the most exciting is the file. It’s obvious the governor has information about all the hardships in Anna’s life, and the giantesses reaction to her past is another chance of bounding and being redeemed, at least a little, in her eyes.

Yes, I am gonna bet the 4 can be redeemed and trully love Anna... as warped as that might be it’s not impossible... I think... I hope... I don’t...know kkkkkk

Also, before I forget... DIE OLIVER! DIE! JUST DIE! WHAT A BORING CHARACTER!! Sorry, but I just find him infuriating as some sort of romantic end game for Anna, simply plain and annoying.

Sorry it’s not as detailed as some of my other theories, but it’s been a rough couple of weeks. Your chapter is one of the few good things that happened, loved Anna swearings. I didn’t realized before, but are you perhaps familiar with portuguese?



Author's Response:

Mr. In A suit, your hatred for Oliver will never not make me laugh. Though if I were in your shoes, I would probably view him as a hindrance also. 

I also love how you see the giantesses as defending Annabelle--something she has yet to acknowledge. I can't say too much, but I'm really excited for the next few chapters.

As always, your predictions are fascinating. Sometimes your ideas are honestly better than what I have outlined. And I am familiar with Portuguese, but not enough that didn't have to check with some friends and google translate, before I wrote the dialogue. 

That's the thing about making characters ethnically diverse, I end up having to double check everything. I'm not complaining though. When Annabelle's familial background is delved into a bit, it'll have (hopefully) all been worth it.

Thanks again for your review, they're always so interesting to read.

Reviewer: Mr in A suit Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 11 2021 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Everything in this late chapter, from Rachel to Nell, is perfect. Many revelations, many possible implications. Perfect job creating the game and the gore-y part, it made Annabelle and Poppy’s character shine and colide, while foreshadowing the endless hopelessness of their situation and own nature.

First and foremost, we have confirmation about the type 0 true capabilities, and I LOVE how you did it! Rachel’s wanting to lick more of Anna’s blood, her instant adoration after tasting it is strange and - dare I say it? – cute. It isn’t exagerated, the scene isn’t dragged too long and Anna’s assumptions that the girl has a concussion or is just expressing gratitude feels natural given their situation.

We also have confirmation: Poppy is trully overpower, proving our greatest enemy is inside kkkkkk. No, really, for majority, the power of a type 0 would be a blessing. To be the most important thing in the world for a person is often people’s idea about a perfect love. Poppy literally makes it a reality for Anna, for the bullied girl that always felt unwanted and unatractive even inside her family.

It’s a blessing for her and for the giantesses – she is desired by them and they also fell desired by her. And it’s also a nightmare because she is desired by them and they also fell desired by her, either that is true or not. Tiny Annabelle/Poppy is, quite simply, the one True Goddess of all goddess in the plot, what for someone like her, is quite a tragedy. She isn’t human anymore and she never will be. She can’t come back and neither can the ones that imprint on her.

From here on, it’a all my especulations. As far as I can tell, it’s not automatic, but every girl that has too much contact will imprint. First, by looking comes the urge to touch and hold. Than comes talking and breathing the same air as her. After this first contact, lust will eventually overcome the person.

Since Rachel came into direct contact with Anna’s blood, the effects were very strong and automatic, but we can also see these syntoms with Penellope (Nell) now that we know the real nature of Poppy/Annabelle imprint.

Nell lacks the lust and is resistente in helping Annabelle, but, since the beggining is fascinated by her figure and wants to hold her. Moreover, she doesn’t pay attention to Anna’s correction about her name not being Poppy, almost as if her brain was unnable to make the difference.

Annabelle doesn’t realize she is Poppy or a side of it. That is the true nature of the One that is Annabele but isn’t at the same time. The type 0, who has three sides and is able to control both giantess and tinies. We have Annabelle (the kind and lonely one), we have Poppy representing lust and insecurities, and we have a third side – the side of angry and control.

Back to Nell, when Naomi implies she won’t be meeting Poppy again. The shy girl gets aggitated, eloquent and curses at her sister and friends. I think this will only get worse, she will worry more and more that she let her friend Poppy down, she will want to talk more with her one friend... than she will want to play with the only friend she needs.

Yes... Poppy said herself Naomi doesn’t treat her well. And Naomi already have friends, she should be the one with Poppy, the one to hold Poppy... the one to have Poppy at her feet like Naomi has the world at hers. Maybe... maybe Poppy is her world?

Just some theories and na inner dialogue I imagined. I will stop here. This is probably the longest comment i have ever written, so its bound to have mistakes. Sorry T_T

I know this site is most about erotic fiction and I love the kinky parts, but you are managing to bring us a beautifully tragic story together with it. Thanks for writing and always repling, I am really happy if my reviews help you. Your storytelling sure helps me.



Author's Response:

Mr. In a Suit, as you know I always look forward to your reviews. I read them multiple times as I write. However, they're so dang dangerous because I just want to discuss theme and plot with you. There's still a lot of plot points I have to hit, so I have to refrain from typing something that may be a spoiler. 


That being said, your predictions are always fascinating to read. I like how you really analyze the characters. Very astute.


Thanks again for always commenting! 

Reviewer: Mr in A suit Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 13 2021 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Naoru's comment made me realize I left out a important thing/explanation. In my opinion, the feelings the people that imprint on Anna have are not fake. The fantastic four already proved beyond doubt that they holyheartedly care for her and would not be able to cary on without her – and that’s the catch. The imprint maxxes out everything – not only care and tenderness, but clyngness, lust and possessiviness – Annabelle herself questions if the 4 girls bound would be able to withstand a fight for the type 0 and I think the answer is pretty obvious (no, it would not).

When I commented the type 0 power is “a nightmare because she is desired by them and they also fell desired by her, either that is true or not”, I meant if it’s true or not from Annabelle’s side. The adoration and love of an imprint are always the true, her true and only self after rhe imprint, They can’t imagine how meaninless their lives were before Poppy.

And I will take this chance to point out another thing: Poppy high healing abilities might mean that, on a celular level, Annabelle is not aging anymore since her cells heal and change all the time. Yes, I think she is unable to die unless someone blow her head or entire body in a quick swift.

Oh yes, I want to see Anna strugle. She might think Nell will help her... and she probably will... but only if it means she will be her friend from now on... after all, Anna is so smart and kind... They were made for each other... (that’s me imagining inner dialogues again... and kind of wishing to see Anna despair and love her situation at the same time... am I evil for that? Kkkkkkkkkk)

That said, I don’t think her powers are unlimited – I therize her powers are limited by gender – a male type 0 has power over giants and male tinies; a female type 0 has power over giantess and female tinies – there is also the time (it’s necessary one afternoon or Half a day of direct interactions for the imprint to start.

That would explain why Rachel’s sister and Bennet did not imprint.

Well, thats about it. I thought about some scenarios involving Nell x Annabelle and Molly x Annabelle (their selfconscious and inferiority complex really hits me on na emotional level), and I can’t wait to see were we will be going from here.

Thanks again for the kind responses, for all the effort you clearly put into writing and for sharing your story with us!



Author's Response:

I for one love the diversity in theories over the story. Sometimes when I'm looking over my outline, I think about the theories you guys create. Sometimes I'm shocked when they're right on the money, and other times I'm impressed with how creative they are. My outline is pretty much cemented (i.e. Annabelle & the FF's fate, several major plot points, etc) but I'm definitely taking notes if I ever do a "What if" series. 

Again, I can't seem to comment of your theories without giving anything away, so I will just say they are very fun to read, and I hope you will revisit your reviews after the final chapter has been published. 


 

Reviewer: Mr in A suit Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 22 2021 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

If I am not mistaken, it was stated that there are only 200 type 0 in the world... so I’ve thought about it in the past, it was just a vague feeling, but this last 3 chapters made me more sure that Annabelle/Poppy IS NOT JUST A TYPE 0.

It’s cannon that people imprint on Annabelle/Poppy, but it’s the other way around with Cookie and Bitsy. They display the same unweavering happiness and loyalty Rachel displayed for Anna. Moreover, their owners are clearly uncaring, not displaying any concern if they get hurt or not, the exactly opposite of the FF towards Annabelle/Poppy.

It makes sense if you think about it. If there was 200 shrinkess who could do what Anna does, someone would have already noticed. Moreover, Anna’s mother is still shrouded in misteries. As I said, I think the story is progressing towards establishing Poppy as a true different being.

This different being will be seeing as the most precious thing on Earth by the imprinted ones... and as a vĂ­rus or a tool by those who haven’t imprinted. We can’t forget that Dr. Sano probably got the blood sample she wanted (which is why Annabelle was covered in blood When she meet Nell) and is analysing it.

Yes, she may share some common traits with those type 0, but it’s a new species, a mutation. A dangerous and powerfull one. I can see even Governor Windsor obsessing over it.

With that said, Cookie and Bitsy seem to be very narcisistic and proud of their... status. I don’t think they will help her, but will try to compete with Poppy... and I hope her darker side eat and chew them out. HOW DARE THAT INSECT ADRESS ANNA AS A SISTER? KILL HIM POPPY! KILL THE BASTARD!

Harper and Naomi steal the scene on this chapter. Harper’s over the top feelings make the sex parts even more tense and hot (you are a master teaser making Harper touch Anna’s foot!!).

Naomi, while intense and rough, her hesitation and fear of admitting she loves Poppy, evoke a shyness and cuteness I already felt on other chapters. I guess each one shows affection and desire in a different way, the imprinting maxing those especific traits.

I hope we see something like that with Molly and Nell, they are the most insecure about themselves and Annabelle could pump their self esteem, bonding with them in a steamy way... Like I said in my other comment, I fell Poppy will become like the world to Nell, and she would love to have the world at her feet just like her sister has 😉

About Oliver, most of what we see is Anna’s idealization of him. Well, now we saw a glimpse of how he really is and he is a coward, someone who, in fact, wouldn’t act much different from Nick if he knew what Annabelle became or if put in the same death game from ch. 22. Yeah, he isn’t worth of Annabelle/Poppy - I don’t think any man or shrinkee is.

My God, I might be tripping too Much but those 3 chapters were heavy on plot points and foreshadowing in regards to Poppy’s nature and abilities.

About favorites, I’d say my giantess ranking changed a lot these past months. From top to bottom: 1. Nell and Molly - 2. Harper - 3. Naomi - 4. Leah - 5. Zoey.

AAAHHH!! I too would love to talk more about the plot and characters! Curiosity is killing me! I can’t wait for more of the giantesses development and backstories! Maybe then Annabelle will open up a little to the FF... maybe Nell will appear again... maybe... maybe... too many ideas.

I will have to lay down after this. Maybe read some old chapters again and think.

Thanks for always reading and responding the comments and for sharing your wonderful imagination and characters with us!



Author's Response:

You and your theories, Mr. In a Suit. I remembered you said you haven't written in a while, but have some really innovative ideas. 

Ha! I did mention the foot part because of your comment! 

Don't worry, everyone is going to get a lot of individual time to shine in the chapters coming up--including Molly and Nell. 

Your comments about Oliver always make me laugh--we'll just have to see what he's really made of, huh. 

Lol, I love reading your comment about Annabelle's imprinting abilities after I've just published chapter 24. If you've read it you can see that you're not "tripping". Now I can't confirm or deny if you're right about her imprinting nature--only that it is a plot point.

Thanks for always commenting, Mr. in a Suit! Your reviews are so fun to read!

Reviewer: Mr in A suit Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 16 2021 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

This story begun with "Annabelle would you like to share something?", and now, 24 chapters later, Anna is cornered, she has to open up. The question is to who and what will be the consequences. Trust and love (for others and for one self and the power that comes form it) were and are central to the story - the dialogue betwen Steven and Anna summing up those plot point.

If I had to say, Naomi and Harper are the most likely to whom Anna might open up... but Leah is very skilled in reading and manipulating people.  Molly is someose who is eaasy to feel empathy, so it’s difficult to place a beet here.

I am more interested in the consequences. Our heroine believes she can stop her type 0 gene from making HERSELF imprint. That doesn’t mean others won’t imprint on her and doesn’t mean jackshit for the ones who have already imprinted – I think it’s pretty much semmented that Naomi, Harper, Molly and Leah are imprinted and there is no coming back from that. Once your brain changes, it doesn’t come back to what it was. And yes, I am thinking about Nell and her imprinting process – which I believe is already in course.

Anna has to find someone to trust, to open up but also that makes her feel worth, and by interactions alone Nell is the obivious choice. Ok... but her gene and imprinting doesn’t seem to be exactly the same as Bitsy and Steven. That means Anna is making conclusions under the assumption her process is the same as Steven, except it’s not.

So anything can happen if she actually chooses someone, including her pheromone getting stronger and with more side effects. Someone said the voice Anna hears might be the voice of her race... if that is it, it’s clear it wants to accomplish something, something BIG.

Annabelle could be very wrong about how to solve this situation, because Poppy already said she wants Anna to choose someone to become her goddess, her ultimate protector who will shower her (and Poppy) with “unadulterated love”. So, to open up to someone bigger is what Poppy needs her to do.

But, what if Anna can’t choose one among all? Poppy might interpret this as a sign that all 4 or all 5 (Nell includes) are to become her true protectors.

But what does that even mean? We know about the imprinting, but none of  the girls stand a fighting chance against the heads of the 4 families, not even ruthless Leah or crazy Zoey... at least, not in their current size... not while Anna and Poppy don’t reach a clear decision.

For now, the titans are only in Anna’s nightmares... and without a clear face, just lurking in wait... For now, because imagine how bad the Governor and others will want to control her imprinting powers? Anna and no one she knows will be safe. Leah and cia. will be puto n the sidelines by their parentes – this new type 0 isn’t a toy after all.

Really, only a true giantess... or five giantesses to protect her then.

That’s it for theories.  Now I have a sugestion: unaware scenarios, for example: a sibling fight between Nell and Naomi where Anna will be on the ground, maybe on the beach and having to evade their feet while trying to get their attention... this way you can enphasize size diferences, Anna’s feelings of powerlessness (like you did with Zoey in ch. 17).


Well, we are reaching the end of the year, a especially difficult one, so I'd like to thank you for all the hard work you've done and are doing in writing such long and rich chapters.

May 2022 come, with new chapters and, hopefully, the conclusion of the misadventures of Goddess Annabelle!

Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year for us all!



Author's Response:

Ah, Mr. In a Suit,

Once again, your analysis and theories make me smile. You should really think about writing your own short story. Case in point: I had that specific scene already in my head--although it was with a different set of giantesses. That scene is still not set in stone, so I'll think about maybe changing some things. 


Thanks again for your comment, Mr. In a Suit. I hope you had a great New Year! 

Reviewer: Mr in A suit Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 16 2021 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

I know the question wasn’t made to me, but I will give it a shot because it’s interesting and fun LOL - Leah: political sciences and economics; Molly: law and business; Naomi: fashion design and arts history; Harper: ...?

Also, some questioned why the families didn’t simply took Bitsy and Steven. This is just my especulation, but they might have had plans, but choosen to abort because Annabelle entered the scene.



Author's Response:

Ha! You actually got some right. Impressive. 

Again, I'll discuss the whole existing-Type 0 in further chapters. I don't think this specific question is answered in 26, but it should be in the upcoming chapters.