What a pleasant way to start the year! Really happy you are continuing this story. The interaction with the mother was really good, liked the description and how playful Jessica showed to be. And I would love to see or tiny protagonist trapped in his sister flip flops kkkkkk. 

Thank you for keeping the good work and happy new year!

Haven't read anything other than Downtrodden yet, but I liked. Good set up chapter. Definitely want to see where this is going :))

Alright. I am angry at myself for taking so long to get to this story. A lot of problems are keeping me busy right now so just managed some time now. Let me say you got me invested in all the main characters and I love the way you build the story line.

On a side note, I am also happy it took me this long to read.

One thing that always bothers me in this kind of story is the way the family treats the main character after he shrinks. Although he is her son, the mother is always cold towards him and even sharing almost all their youth together, the sisters treat him as little more than a bug, only ever seeking revenge or pleasure. That is common in giantess stories revolving around families.

And oh boy, you got me worried for some time this was going to be the case in this one: Giantess without any real emotion. But then, ch. 9 and 10 happened. We and Paul got some information on the stoic Sarah personal life - namely that the boyfriend she bragged so much prefers a tiny over her and she probably uses Barney to compensate, giving him more "freedom" in exchange. This is a turning point.

This kind of insight can be used by Paul to bound, both with her sister and Barney. Maybe, behind the stoik mask, there is a young girl who only seeks company and the approval of her mother. Maybe Barney is more than just a pimp.

Someone like Hannah might try to help in the future, but, as long as he is a tiny, Paul is his family (and mainly Sarah's) property. I believe at least one family member is going to have a change of heart and see Paul as her flesh and blood. I don't believe is the mother, who is far too involved with politics to get in touch with her emotions. Sarah is my first choice because of the mess her personal life appears to be (and thats why no tiny dares to talk about it), but judging by the last paragraph on ch. 10, the change of heart is still far ahead.

Sorry for the long review and for any grammar mistakes. English is not my primary language and I wrote this in a hurry.

Thanks for writing and sharing with us. Keep up the good work.

PS. Added you and your story to my favorites :)

I am horrified by the treatment that Paul receives from the whole family. I understand that one or two members might not get along, but mom and Sarah are two ice-cold bitchs, while Brie is a nymphomaniac who uses tinies for pleasure - and I totally hope to see Paul getting really intimate with Brie and her feet XDD, after all, she is the opposite of Sarah, so I am guessing she isn't as cold and uncarrying but quite impulsive and reckless.

Someone sugested and I liked the idea of Paul turning out to be really good at soccer, becoming the ace of the team. In other words, find his place as a tiny. So much that he starts taking over as Brie favorite. That might bring in some conflict, and I don't mean only for Paul. While Brie might tease, Paul is still her brother and feeling aroused for him is bound to invite a mix of guilty and pleasure as well as possessiveness over him, witch can collide with other bigs like Hannah, Jen and even his mother.

Oh yes, his mother. It would be quite scandalous if someone got wind that her daughter is 'forcing' her shrunken brother into an incestuous and bussiness relationship. The mother would have to step in again, blame Sarah for handing Paul to Brie and agree to hand Paul to Hannah for the time being - against Brie and Jen will, obviously.

Also, if the shrinking virus still affecting the population, we can assume a cure is being researched, right? I thought about this when Paul confused Sarah for Katelyn.

Great work. Thank you for always updating so quickly and for sharing your tallent with us.

Really happy you are still planning to finish Paul's story, and what a great chapter! We got to see some psychological insight of Paul after all the recent events, especially with Brie, and some interesting questions were also brought up.

I am guessing we will have some insight on Brie's side on the next chapter as she and Paul will be all alone, no team, no Sarah or Doris.

Thank you! Can't wait for the next chapter.

I was going to comment on ch. 4 about the mother "hungry" eyes, but thoght it would be better to wait and I was not wrong. She clearly has feelings for Thomas and wants him under her sole, probably because of what happened with her husband. She rationalizes her craves by using the predominat ideology, hence her statement: "It's only natural".

The question is if the sister will internalize such ideology and manifest similar desires. We know they are bonded and Thomas is influenced by her pheromones because of the shrink procedure. We have yet to see if this bond will affect the both of them.

These are my thoughts so far. 5 stars again. Your writing is superb, the descriptions are good and you are very creative with the plot. I can only praise and encourage you to continue! 

GOD!! Finally managed to catch up with your story... and you stay true to your synopsis. Camilla and even Kerri are two sociopaths. But I love the brief foot plays you put here and there and, as your last work, you remain very skillfull when it comes to torture envolving ass and fart descriptions. I envy you mate XDD

Now, an idea: maybe young Jack isn't a fool and before Camilla can shrink only him, he realizes what she means and jumps on her. In the end both end up shrunk somehow and at Kerri's mercy. Oh yeah, karma my friend. K A R M A kkkkkk 

Another great work :)

I would like to see where Camilla is going with her unhealth fixation and bullying. I am impressed by how you can manage several characters story lines at once, maybe Zack and Adam will figure out a way to help each other in the future...

Thanks for all the hard work.

You write the best unaware and foot related scenarios in the entire site. Thank you! Thank you!!

So glad to see Alisson actually showing signs of love and care for her brother. Most stories just turn the family into a group of narcissist psychopaths  that torture the shrunk protagonist.

I don’t think either Janet or Allison are evil. On the contrary, I believe both deeply care for John, but don’t realise just how powerfull and overwhelming beings they are from his perspective. The same could be said for John, now that he shrunk even the most innocent acts can stir fear and helplesness in his heart, which results in the feelings of alienation in relation to his family (the “goddesses”) that we saw in chapter 9.

Also, judging by the way she was reminescing their experiences together and got aroused by it, I would say Allison is attracted and lust after John (although it appears Allison herself has yet to realise these feelings). So, I am curious to see how their relationship will develop.

I can’t thank you enough for sharing your story. It’s really good and I am invested in the characters. Can’t wait to read more.

P.S. Sorry for any misspelling. Although I am fluent in english, it is not my primary language.