Well, after ch. 18 and the new ch. 12 (memories), I must admit feeling much less simpathy towards Megan. In truth, I think she is worse than Alexis. She might say she cares for Max and doesn't really want to hurt anyone, but her actions tell otherwise and I can't imagine someone really fallen in love for her (to have sex does not equals to fall love - in my oppinion - and, for what I can see, she doesn't really care for being loved).

Really curious to see how you are going to play out her relationship with Max after this nightmare.

Yes! Drama with giantess and there feet! Thank you! Since the last chapter with memories I keep thinking about the part where Megan grows to giant size... and I think it would be an interesting if Max where willing to play along with her... they even build a city together so that they can role play... So, about the two new chapters (21 and 22) 

I was imaginig things differently, I would have done things differently... AND I AM SO GLAD YOU DIDN'T DO AS I WOULD! Let me explain

This is more of a theory than a review. A little of both. And, I must say, even I didn't expect to come up with those ideas but, these last two chapters where, in my opinion, a game changer. I even changed my initial outllok on the barista kkkkk. Hope you find it usefull as to draw inspiration. I am just having too much fun imaginig diferent scenarios for your story!

This two chapters gave a lot to think about. At first I thought that Alexis would be the 'goddess' cliche character, finding pleasure in power... but this passage - "“If only I were a little shrinky. Oh well.” Alexis laughs." - rises many questions. Maybe the pleasure she fells doesn't come directly from the sensation of control but of whatching said control while she fantasize herself as a tiny person.

About Megan, I am pleased the first thing she does after getting her hands on the toy she so eagerlythought she wanted, is to start looking at and worrying about Max. Why? Because, there is obvious tension betwen all 3 main chracters. Max find both Megan and Ashley more than atractive. There are times where he simply puts Ashley in a pedestal as every lover would do. For Megan, the scene where he peeps at her in the bathroom (ch. 3 if i remember right) speaks volumes.

Meanwhile, the sisters clearly compete to see who is more loved as to who Max prefers most. We can se that in the latest chapter, but also in the times Megan makes fun of how Max thinks Ashley is perfect. We can see that since chapter 1, specially with Megan, but now also with Ashley. She gets upset thinking that Max prefers Alexis or Megan over her and is starting to have fantasies with him, all while fagging ignorance and inocence. All that amounts to an interesting confllict. I started this story thinking that Ashley would get jealous of Alexis atention to Max, BUT, it could be the other way around!

We can not forget (if my memory is right - I need to read the chapters again to be 110% sure) that Max choose to go living with Ashley and Megan followed in their footstep. As I said in another comment, the Devil is in the details. 

Only time will tell, but I am willing to bet this wasn't the last fight (nor the first) fight Ashley and Megan have over Max. Wich brings me to my last two points: the barista and Megan ex-boyfriend. I thought I disliked her. I WAS WRONG (MAYBE). She will eventually try to take Max out of the house and I don't think that is something the sisters will allow. Yes, I am thinking of antagonisms and deep revelations for the future, where the focus of the story may shfit, from Alexis playing the sisters, to Alexis shrinking and becoming a paw in a game to see who will get to rule over the protagonist life.

There are two parts of the chapter very important that weren't shown: Alexis talk with Megan and the first part of the fight between the sisters. But, it was hinted that Alexis wanted to stir drama. What drama, remains unclear BUT I wouldn't be surprised if at the center where the tension all 3 main characters don't want to adress. This drama, this tension, I believe caused Megan to break up with her boyfriend. Yes, she got what she wanted and then the trill was gone, just like it is implicit in ch. 21: she did all sort of things with Max to get a tiny slave. She got. And the next day she just wants to go back home WITH MAX? Shoundn't she rejoice and just enjoy the moment, seeing everything in a good mood? But she doesn't. She looks guilty, she doesn't want that anymore and, without a good reason, starts to dislike Alexis. Why?? She did all she did and now wanted to just leave with her tiny brother? I am with Max on this one: although the worry was real, she had ulterior motives and the fact tha she didn't got it rised the stakes and lead to an emotional outburst.

Thank you for the story and the answers. Hope you enjoy this comment as much as I enjoyed writing it. It has been a long time since I have found a story on this site that got me so invested in the characters!

First, thank you for your response on my last comment. Very glad to know you are not annoyed by my theories :D It's incredible! Your story and characters are just so good and I am reading since day one. And now we approach the final arc! And, oh my God! What a emotional rollercoaster those last chapters were. Both thumbs up!! 

I know it might not be your intention (or, maybe it is), but, with each chapter I come to hate Ashley and Megan more. You see many people might not like Alexis. Well, she is the villain. But, with Ashley and Megan, it already surpassed the mere fact they are family. Max did absolutely nothing but love his sisters, doing absolutely nothing to deserve this kind of treatment from both of them! Family or not family, right now both only seem as evil and nuts as Alexis to me.

Megan tortured 3 innocent people along the story for her own pleasure, one of them being her own flesh and blood which she just abbandoned with someone she knew was dangerous to him, without not even bothering to look back! No! She picked her payment for seeling Max and went home to have some fun with a complete stranger. Her slave!

As for Ashley, after this chapter, with Max opening his heart to her, pratically confessing to her, and she... tortures him! When he is hurt! After a almost death experience! I know it seems I am just venting my angry, which I won't deny, BUT, there is a reason, and this reason is a question that have been bugging me for some time: why Max loves his sisters?? Why bother answering them or doing anything?

Save his twin sister? The one that will torture him for her own selfish interests all the way home? Or the one who abbandoned him at the cabin? After all this, how he don't just disconnect from himself?

God! This last chapters! I just hope some major character development happens to Megan, like a really big change of heart. Why not for Ashley? Simple, because even though all the talk about Max being her twin brother, she choose the villain, so she is also a villain.

How Max could reconect with Megan? By helping the little slave scape. After the trip back with Ashley, he will be broken and, in an joint attempt to scape his own house with the slave, he ends up getting the short stick, being caught by Megan while the other scapes to ask for help and end up finding Liz. From here on is that it gets trick, because I don't believe only crying or talking will be enough. After this last chapters, it is clear that his suffer, plain and simple, isnt enough.

What do I mean? That Max will have to go a little crazy. His sisters don't care for his humanity? Good. Than he must be an animal, right? Not a brother, but an animal. Maybe he was an insect all along dreaming he was Max... this kind of thing, to the point he starts acting like an actual insect (charging at cockroaches and spiders, eating dirt from the ground, maybe attempting to eat Megan shit when she dumps him in the toilet again (so much for her speech, saying she went overboard and felt sorry at the cabin).

Now that we are nearing the end, I just can't thank you enough for your dedication, always posting and answering the reviews. What I can do is asure to you I will read until the very last chapter! :DD

YES! YES!! YES!!! BOTH CHAPTERS (32-33) DESERVE 10 OUT OF 10!!! 

As I said in past comments, I had the feeling you were cooking something big related to the sisters. Their relationship with Max, in my opinion, always was (and is) the main driving force of the story. Not Ashley x Alexis, but Ashley x Max x Megan, Alexis just playing the role of a catalyst in the barrel of gunpowder that was Max's house prior to her arrival. And I think only half of the barrel exploded.

On ch. 32, Ashley is hell bent on making Max admit that he loves her (third lesson), but she is not sattisfied with words, she steps up to the next level and in this chapter (33) openly admits he is hers and only hers. I've seen someone asking what would Alexis have done if Max had choosen to go with Megan, and my guess is: she would have gone for another tiny, but that wouldn't be the same experience for Ashley as it was made abundantly clear that, whyle Alexis enjoyed whatching Ashley torture Max (she is a sadist and a voyeur), the one getting trilled with having Max all to herself was none other than Ashley.  

Than there is Megan, who right after getting what she wanted (a tiny to worship her as a goddess), came right back trying to take Max with her. Why? For the same reason as Ashley - you can have sex with any tiny, that won't mean a damn thing without the feeling, and she has feelings for Max. That is why I think she is able to conciliate the fact that she doesn't care about having other tinies suffer for her pleasure, while also deeply carring for Max. In her eyes, as well in the eyes of Ashley, theri is the tinies, the people like her and there is Max.

Right now the roles are reversed, but we can't forget she paired up with Alexis at the begining. I doubt Ashley will let it slip as she is desperate to find some justification to run from reality. I think the fight will just escalate from here.

You even titled the chapter "savior" BUT, I think there is more to it then meets the eye. Megan is not strictly speaking a savior. And it's not because of the barista (I am not in the barista team kkk), but because Megan motivations are the same as Ashley. She loves Max and wants to have him all to herself. Thats the main reason she came live with Ashley (she doesn't want to be without Max, even if she has a boyfriend or a slave that worshps her everyday) and now her chance is here! She saves him and becomes the good sister, the goddess he puts up in a pedestal. She doesn't have anywhere to go? But she has! Don't they have a mother? Yes, she will bring him back to where he can be only hers.

The problem? The tiny slave and the barista. In my opinion he will scape, taking advantage that both sisters are just too flustered over their brother condition, and call for help as Max sinks into madness. This help will be Liz, who will get just in time to unmask Alexis that gets arrested or kicked out for good (I would love to see Megan kick her ass). That part settled, the conflict is not over. Far from it.

Seeing Max condition, Liz or even Dr. Tailford might suggest he be taken to a RP community for treatment. That is the main conflict I think will develop in this final arc as everyone will have to face their true feelings and motivations. As I said in another comment, neither sisters will want to hand Max over, and a battle will issue for the broken heart and mind of Max. How, if it's obviously Megan and Ashley won't let Liz near Max and she is a tiny? The University. Ashley is Max legal guardian and has to maintain a facade of normallity. To the rest of the world, she and Megan still just Max sisters.

Then there is Max, who is obviously attracted to his sisters but lives in conflict and denial. Part of his growth has to pass through this question: does he love his sisters only as sisters or there is more... man! this could even be left open in the final for a second part of the main story!

There is another possibility, as I don't think Alexis will fall without a fight. Both sisters made a ton of ilegal things, be it with Max or the tiny she gave to Megan. It would be just like Alexis to have recorded all Ashley adventures with Max. As for Megan, she just picks her tiny back and he is a living withness that will be willing to testify against her. But wouldn't he testify against Alexis too? No, either because he is more scared from her or because, different form Megan, Alexis doesn't have a history and would be more difficult to process. That is when Liz comes in, willing to help the sisters for Max sake.

I don't know if you already finished writing the end, but I would love to see a showdown between Ashley, Megan and Liz over Max, which would have to make his choice. If it isn't possible now, maybe in a sequel? A part 2? I think these conflicted feelings within Max (who also fells atraction for Megan and Ashley, it's undeniable) and his sisters are just too interesting and complex to resolve in a chapter or two.

You have writen a master piece!! It has all, emotional turmoil, the sexual parts play a crutial role into understanding the characters (you can't just skip them) and, most important, the characters!! You made me love them, than hate and then love again. You got people invested! Congratulations!! I haven't had so much fun with a story in quite some time. If just everybody could keep this level of quality while also updating daily! I sure can't! You have a talent! As always, thank you and, please, keep up the marvelous work :DD

And my ship has sunk. R.I.P Megan x Max kkkkkkkkkkkk

I can totally understand your struggle trying to redeem such a huge character rsrs. And, in fact, I can tottaly understand Megan arc. I would have done differently, but thats because I had a completely different understanding of the dinamics revolving around her character, be it with Max or with Ashley.

Obviously I loved Megan being assertive in protecting Max and humiliating Alexis.

You said theres two more chapters to wrap up the story so I am gonna wait to say more. The only thing I felt it was missing in this last chapter was more dialogue betwen Max and Liz.

As always, thank you for your hard work and dedication to the story.

PS. Would it make me evil to say I hate Ivan and I hope he and Megan break up? C'mon! No one is so goddamn perfect!  XDDDDDDDD

Again, R.I.P my ship TT_TT

WELCOME BACK!!! AND WHAT A COME BACK!

Ideas are already popping up! How will this new Reed family dynamics be on the long term? And how will Max relationship with Alexis be from now on? Will it affect his sisters? I am on fire!

But, most of all, I am happy to get back to these characters I like so much! 

I am gonna wait a couple more chapters to post a more extensive comment. I also want to reread some chapters...

Thank you! I missed your writing!

I just finished the first chapter and had to comment.

You have made a very good start stablishing the two main characters and the conflict of the story. It's also good that you choose to make both protagonists relatively young as it leaves a lot of space to work and grow. 

About the characters, I just loved Cashell, from his name to his innocent remarks and reactions. I think this innocence is most important, specially if we think he will interact with not so friendly Devex and with Zara instincts (oh yeah, she is sweet but surely salivated at the sight of human flesh. It is a promising interesting dynamic). Also, what a remarkable attention to details, specially when describing Zara's design.

I will not say much more as I have yet to read the second chapter. I will try to read and review as soon as possible.

Thank you for the hard work of putting up such a good and long first chapter. Also, sorry for any misspelling. Althogh fluent, english is not my primary language.

" Because it normally takes nothing short of catastrophe before seeing any Devex admitting error in their ways". 

I feel Cashell is in for a lot of trouble... I thoght Zara would end up losing him in the forest. That is a cool concept. She loses him and almost stomps him to death.

For one moment I feared you had given up on this series! Thank you for not abbandoning it! Please, keep up the good work ;)   

PS. Forgot to rate the story in my last review. I am not sure how the site system works, but I hope I gave you 5 stars.

Things didn't turn out as I expected and I fell a little sorry for the Mr. Tiny. But, your writing is very enjoyable and you were fast to upload everything.

Thank you. I will read more of your stories :)

Interesting foreshadowing... Let's se how he will survive the ordeals that are to come.

The beach is a dangerous place. Maybe he will meet Valeria again. Or maybe Lisa is the one that ends up steping on him without realizing it.

 Thank you for sharing your story. Can't wait for the next chapter.