I was hoping they'd talk to each other. The woman didn't find it odd that a tiny person was walking around in her kitchen? This felt like an "unaware" story, but it is not tagged as such. The story was alright though I suppose, even if I disagreed with some aspects of it.

This was a good read. I definitly agree with this: woman is your equal or superior. More so equal. I here about things in the news and it makes me sad...

There are no qutation marks in the story. "Speech should be within quotation marks," he said.

I like the story so far though there are a few things I noticed. In the first paragraph you mention the name Mikey before telling the reader that's Steve's (Steven's) nickname. Also, you sometimes forget to give the names of people capital letters. I also think it would be better if the chapters were separate rather than both within the same chapter.

This was better than I expected. The description was good, but too much, although in many places the speech was on the same line as the description and this sometimes made your story hard to follow. Overall a decent story.

I really liked the story though the ending was somewhat sudden and it would have been nice to have to have more development instead of the tiem skips. I find it odd that these people can randomly shrink people and whole boats and go unpunished although I have a feeling that this story could serve as somewhat of an insperation for him.

While I enjoyed the story it does seem a bit unrealistic. I'm pretty sure they would have phoned his parents becase I'm certain they are a bit suspicious by now. There are some grammar/structural issues but it's not too bad. Not sure how the aliens will fit in though.

I liked it, but you really need to split the separate chapters. Having just as one chapter isn't ideal, and when I came back to read it I lost my place because the single chapter is so long.

Well it was ok. I think it would be better if you split it up into chapters though. If a chapter is too long I tend to get put off because I can't know when to stop. Whereas if the stoy has seperate chapters I know I can come back to it later and know where I left off without much trouble.

Plus, if someone favoruated it they should get updates upon new chapters and if everything is in oen they can't . Not to mention it doesn't get updated to the recent submissions list so you get less views.

Dam, I'd hate to be that little person. The thought of the freezer sends chills down my back... Fun story though. Shame it was a little short.

That was a very quirky story. I liked it. Not much else to say really.