Excellent chapter! Gosh I hope there's more. 

Love your work. All the information presented on technology and scale of the giantesses given to the audience is fantastic. Can't wait for more!! 

I loved the giantess sequences in this chapter. The body-scape sequences are top-notch. They are a great read. I love the differences between the sizes, micro is my absolute favorite size. 

I noticed a parallel between Maria negotiating deals at work, and with Tom. It’s interesting how Maria maneuvers her way through “deals,” in her crazy life. Intriguing how the story builds her up and treats her as a main character. The gigantic hot chick gets some development, while we are also rooting for Tommy to survive too. It’s sad to see Tom slowly lose everything around him, but sharing Maria must truly suck for him. 

The Cassidy/Rebecca sequences are awesome. I was going to ask if we could get more action from those two. And then I read the new chapter! Great stuff. I thought Cassidy’s curiosity towards Tom was a one-off thing. But it turns out she wants more!  I’m hoping for more action with them. Maybe we can see some action with Tom’s gigantic sister too! 

It’s cool to see new technology at play. The PAV ship is so awesome. It reminds me of the spherical ship from the movie “Inner-space.” A metallic gray-colored bead, is what I’m picturing every time Tom flies around in his pellet. I like when this 0-88 mile-a-second, ultra-durable ship, smacks into the skin of a lady; it only causes them to itch.

I’m really reaching here. But I had this idea how Bill can get his comeuppance for messing with Tom’s super hot babe. A Micronaut-sized super hot (let’s say, almost a copy of Maria) female Micronaut scientist has to show Tommy how to use tiny technology. She uses a shrink ray to shrink human scaled tools/advanced space machinery, down for Micro use. Maybe as a way to get back at Maria, Tom has sex with the female scientist. And somehow Maria is aware of it, (maybe Tom leaves the microphone on, and Maria hears them fucking, something like that) and she starts getting jealous. How a random chick gets to enjoy her buff husband, while she is stuck with him as a speck of dust. This prompts Maria to compete with the speck of dust in order to, “win over Tom.” And maybe as the female scientist is working at their home, teaching Tom about Micronaut tech (and sex), Maria gets a hold of the shrink ray. Since she feels she’s going to need it against Bill. Maybe he goes off the rails and tries to take advantage of Maria, (Or Maria finds out that Bill is plotting to kill Tom, to get her to stay with him) but she uses the shrink ray, and Bill slowly shrinks down into a micronaut, over the course of a week. Maria then gets the upper hand and swallows Bill out of spite; and because I love me some vore. (That chapter with Tom climbing inside Maria’s mouth to get the piece of shrimp is awesome)

These were just some ideas flying around in my head. I am of course, actively anticipating how you continue the story

Dude that was totally awesome! This is probably my favorite chapter so far! How Lindsey swallows both Alice and Monica, at the same time! That was an excellent idea. The Dune reference was funny, and very cool how a giantess can have giant creatures inside of her. But then there’s Lindsey, how can have entire giantesses walk around inside her. I had this idea how Lindsey is so large, if Andrew is ever eaten by her. He would stumble upon another tv show going on inside of Lindsey. A sort of “Lovers Island” sort of normal tv show, but inside the stomach of a gigantic. I thought that would be a silly concept. How Lindsey enters a tv show, while she already had a normals tv show filming inside her. And she forgot about it, or something like that. 

On a different note, I think it’s awesome how you are writing more about the world you created. I loved “The tallest MILF.” The details you gave about the Gigantics in that world was excellent. I really liked the idea that inside the gigantic, there are worlds. They are just that big. That’s awesome. 

Andrew is probably the luckiest guy on the planet right now. He has a super hot, gigantic goddess, possibly obsessing over him. Who wants him to explore her worlds. I like the irony in Lindsey, who has entire worlds inside her, has a crush on a speck of dust. It really gives that line Lindsey said in the park episode (episode 5), a new meaning. I think near the end of that episode, she says how she wants Andrew to explore her parks. I think she was implying her boobs, but after episode 14, we learn how Lindsey also has miles and miles of parks inside of her! Awesome. 

Lindsey wanting Andrew to explore her lands is similar to an early event in U.S. history. There was miles and miles of land that needed to be pillaged and explored. This was called the Westward Expansion. This was personified into a giantess, in a piece of artwork called American Progress by John Gast in 1872. If you google that artwork it could possibly be the earliest piece of giantess art, for the United States, I think lol. Just like how all the virgin land was calling to the young nation, Lindsey wants Andrew to explore her lands. I just thought that was a cool similarity going on there. 

I had idea that Lindsey swallows Alice and Lorena out of anger or jealousy, because Andrew prefers people his own size instead of Gigantics. So now Andrew has to go in and rescue his normal friends from the belly of the beast. When inside of Lindsey, they find out she has normals living inside of her, and these people give a feast to our normal characters, similar to what happened in Thanksgiving, almost a hundred years ago here in the U.S. The Indians gave food to the starving English when the English were at their lowest point. And this act of selflessness could probably inspire Lindsey to be nicer to those who are dust around her. It was just an idea I had while thinking about your series. Hopefully in the next episode Lindsey and Lorena are chosen, it would be a great set up for a rescue mission Andrew goes through.