I've been reading and writing the genre for a long time. I'm a simple author and stories that hold my interest best are those that are long and centrally gentle and funny. I tend towards that direction when I write almost all the time so if you're looking for something to chuckle at that may be a tiny bit mushy and something that'll take a little while to read you've come to the right place. Drop a review or a message and let me know what you think of what I've got if you have the time too. I love feedback.
Like I said before, i've been reading and writing stories for a while. So if you need a beta reader to check for plotholes or grammar errors you missed I'll try to help out with that too. Send me a file or link me to something and I'll do what I can to help, be it plot advice or just a second opinion. After all, authors have to help each other right?
I also do requests storywise on anime and games I'm familiar with. If you've got an idea for a plot or story drop me a line and I'll see what I can do. Inspiration is hard to come by so give me some if you've got it and maybe I can work with you.
A scientist finds a way of communicating with a woman from another world. He transports himself to her world without her knowledge, the only catch being that everything in her world is on a far larger scale... But that's just the tip of the iceberg.
I like this story. The way it's done is simple, yet leaves me satisfied that a tale has been told. It didn't drone on or focus on non-relevant content...it was just a good story. Good job.
Author's Response: Thanks, Ex. My stories have probably gotten a little more complex since I did this one... but hopefully they don't drone on.
I like a good pass around. This one managed to skip all the adult content that is blatantly not even realistic given the storyline. That's what I liked about this story.
Author's Response: thanks, I am not big on blatant adult content.
In a near-future where magic has returned in force to the world, one man gets more than he bargains for when he agrees to be the boyfriend of a 5 inch tall faerie.
This story was freaking super cute. I mean really. You captured innocent so well that I'm stunned. No inappropriate material and creative with what you did use. It came out kind of short but well done.
Author's Response:
Glad you liked it. Innocent and playful was exactly what I was going for with Tala.
A young lady, loving girlfriend, a kind protector and a genocidal monster. All these words could be used to define Kate. Part of a government experiment in genetic manipulation Kate surprised everyone when she responded far better to the treatment then anyone could have expected.
The story of this young lady finding love, leaving her home and how the world responds to her.
Very well done. It took some time to read but I enjoyed it immensely. You seem to have taken time to develop
each character. Not only is this story far and away the longest I can remember reading I haven't run across one with a slower pace and detailed character reaction base. It's all so...simple yet...
Of course I have to mention all the creative gentle interaction you used as well. For gentle stories it tends to be limited and for violent it's limited up to excessive blood and gore. You found a couple plausible ways that weren't forces plus all the different games are just fantastic. Not to mention functional in the developement of Kate as a character.
All through the story you remained creative and realistic emotion-wise.
Between that and keeping the story in second person and leaving an open window into Kate's and anyone else's mind is good as well. Like the first review some of your typos (seen/scene and the like) are just simple mistakes but I don't mind. I can't be the grammar police, I do them too. And it's only to be expected in something of that length, it's all the more time for a typo. It's a long review but it would have to be given the size of the story.
Though you seem to have left it unfinished...I would love to see it continue.
Author's Response: It seems that I only uploaded chapters one and two here which is kind of shocking. I believed that I had uploaded all of them until I checked today. All well chapters three through ten are now here.
I'm glad that you enjoyed the interaction. The scenarios were quite fun to dream up now if only they wouldn't leave me with such a strong wish that they could really happen.
Thanks for the review feedback is always appreciated.
I like the analogies that fit from the nineteen sixties. It gave the whole thing that blacka and white movie feel. Nicely done.
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I liked this story and the other one in the series. I've read them a few times actually.
But, I have one question. Are you registered as a female at a website called deviantart.com? If you are not, someone has submitted these two stories under their own name. You can contact me if it is of any import.
Interesting series. It's really hard to put non-cliche twists and go for a not "happily ever after" ending with gentle stories.
I give you your due on that.
I really like this story. The first 50% or so really addresses some of the more feasible sounding reactions and possible issues. Mostly though, it made me think. I like how it was done in all honesty. You made Tom into a believable character
The gentle giantess, Rowena, and her miniature boyfriend return in this fantasy adventure. Together, this mismatched couple plans the strangest wedding in the ancient world.
Cute story. It was just long enough to hold attention and have the right amount of beginning, middle and end.
It was well-written and a nice amount of adult joking that gets the points across you want without being graphic. That is always laudable.
Nicely done.
Humorous. Such a simple silly tale. *chuckles* Really worth a laugh.
I like the dry sense of humor you used. I'm curious if you're of United Kingdom descent, it's eastern European jokes if I'm right. *laughs*
As for your story, it's a good read but you'll get some complaints on lack of giantess content. Not from me since I like a good story with or without it but around here you may since you didn't make her as central a character from what I read if you ask me.
