Penname: Bigdawg K [Contact] Real name: David
Member Since: September 13 2018
Membership status: Member
Bio:

Lurker who is starting to write. working on a Titan/Battletech crossover, at roughly chapter 15, when phase one is done I will likely post to GTS City, Dev and here.


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Summary:

Air force test pilot Lucas Estrada meets a young woman after he is forced to eject out of his orbital jet. She is beautiful, intelligent, kind but out of his league in all ways... and yet...


Categories: Giantess, Adventure, Breasts, Body Exploration, Couples, Fantasy, Gentle, Humiliation, Insertion, Mouth Play, Odor, Sci-Fi, Unaware, Watersports
Characters: None
Growth: Brobdnignagian (51 ft. to 100 ft.)
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: Lur saga - LoTG
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 29073 Read Count: 129152
[Report This] Published: August 04 2018 Updated: December 18 2018
Reviewer: Bigdawg K Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 11 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Lucas

Oh Lucas look out my brave lad, Melina has a 'taste' for you (in both ways!)

Reviewer: Bigdawg K Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 13 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Lucas

OMG! Amazing, keep it up.  Now that Melina has 'taken care of' Lucas's issues, it maybe time for him to do some more cave diving for her...

Love the Gentle, playful yet dominate and mischivous Melina, she is well paired with the brave, daring and rougish Lucas.  Awesome story!

Reviewer: Bigdawg K Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 07 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Lucas

You are batting a 1000!  Lucas and Melina are awesome together, though Lucas now has to be careful, he may of been 'too' sucessful in pleasing his gentle giantess...  Hopefully Melina will adjust quickly and not bruise/turn to paste Lucas by accident...

Thank you for a wonderful story so far!

Reviewer: Bigdawg K Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 19 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Lucas

Great Story, good well thought out characters and reactions,  Please continue, also noticed you have done Mark and Zava any chance of that story continuing as well (please say yes).  Thank you!



Author's Response:

Hello and thank you for reading and taking the time to review. Indeed Mark and Zava will continue, and I have another chapter half written. Keep checking for updates!

Summary:

A rude college student returns an ancient text past the due date, and discovers too late that fees are not paid in money, but time spent shrunken inside the owner's stockings.

Written for the same commissioner of "Another Day at the Office."


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Entrapment, Feet, Footwear, Humiliation, Instant Size Change, Legwear
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: Jacksmith Commission Stories
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9208 Read Count: 60226
[Report This] Published: August 18 2018 Updated: November 25 2018
Reviewer: Bigdawg K Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 27 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Come on Dylan gets to spend the rest of his life as a insert for a woman's shoe.  I am tempted to commision you 'fix' this.  A week late and being stupid should not end in life imprisionment, Morgan Le Fay would be more merciful...

With that said great story, depending on what your other patron has as follow up, well we will see.

Thank you for your time and effort with this story.



Author's Response:

Well, you're welcome to commission an alternate version of the story. Thanks for reviewing

Camilla by little mikey Rated: PG starstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 33]
Summary:

Society is changing rapidly, and Mark Lawrence has fallen behind the times.  Looks like someone will need to catch him up … but who??

 


Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Adult 30-39, Humiliation, Incest, New World Order
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 47101 Read Count: 61416
[Report This] Published: August 20 2018 Updated: February 10 2019
Reviewer: Bigdawg K Signed
Date: October 07 2018 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

This is getting to be an large bit on the dark side for me, the first two chapters were good if not very good, but at the end of the fourth you are starting to lose me.  From implication Phil at best had his head yelled off by Lynn and at worst was beaten within an inch of his life for what raising his voice to his own child?  Did Lynn the disciplatary punish her wonderful Mia for not follow her instructions?  Does she care that her actions will lead to Mia hurting, raping and/or killing poeple cause nothing happens to her, but she makes the least sound and mommy beats the living Sh!t out of daddy so it's ok!

Camilla knows Lynn is wrong, next chapter or one after I would like for her to see what her go along to get along attitude created and see Phil as hurt as he is, perhaps even take him as a morality center on how far to go while estiblishing domanince.  It's too easy to say men are meat targets without rights and any assult wouldn't be followed up by the police, if men did that there would be no civilization.

I am hoping in the next few Chapters Camilla at least gets to grey anti-hero status, in that yes she's moving her father to reality, but she also sees things she can change (such as Phil's status) and works to help men at least land on a pillow rather then spikes you seem to have set up for them.  That she moves Carly and Hannah her way and possibly moves Lynn to a redemation arc.

It stared great and I will withhold judgement for the next couple of chapters, but if I want burtality and humans being treated worse then slaves and/or stray animals I will watch cows being butchered...

Reviewer: Bigdawg K Signed
Date: October 23 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Great, I'm done, no point in reading further, just because Mark is Mark he can be burtalized, I doubt he did anything like that to Camilla, and that he used that level of strength, this is just men getting shafted cause they are men, no redeeming attrubites to the women. 

I may as well throw myself into a volient crimals cell or see if I can't use a hammer to break my hand into meat.  It started with some potentail it's a shame that all the author can do is write an ever darker universe, I fear for his sanity and well-being.

Summary:

After years of torment, a tiny man finds himself back at the feet of his ex-girlfriend who originally shrank him while she tries to provide him with a meaningful life.  Meanwhile, his former tormentor is humiliated and tortured by her former friends now that she is the tiny one.  Though their lives are different they are not yet over, and may still come to blows again.

 

Sequel to I Dream of Gina, and final arc in the story started in The Prom Incident.


Categories: Mature (40-49), Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Body Exploration, Couples, Crush, Destruction, Entrapment, Feet, Footwear, Gentle, Growing Woman, Humiliation, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Legwear, Mouth Play, Unaware, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.), Giant (31 ft. to 50 ft.), Mini GTS (16-30ft)
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, FF/f, FF/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 84502 Read Count: 177366
[Report This] Published: August 25 2018 Updated: December 09 2019
Reviewer: Bigdawg K Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: November 27 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Going Out Tonight

Good story so far, Fulda is ZERO for TWO in the date department for our HERO.  Old saying "once is radom chance, twice is Happenstance, thrice is Coindendence, and more is to a plan."  Fulda seems half way to a plan right now...  As for her 'inablitly' to grow the lead, She has taken some pains to take care of him, if he wasn't an inch high after I dream of Gina, he would of likely thank her for her hard work and effort and gotten the hell out of shrink range and her life.

Fulda maybe carrying more guilt then she realizes, maybe she feels that she owes him so much more and maybe seeing him an inch high messes with her like his aversion to stockings.  I need more data but my sense is that she's going to do her best for him, but not in the way he thinks she is.  Likely not even in the way she thinks she is. 

I could see at the ending the hero and Fulda back together and just as she hurt him and let him be torutured for six years the ice will crack and she will heal the damage she has been trying to heal but wasn't sucussful till the end.  Will he be normal size, that's the author's call, but maybe Fulda is able to make him that way when both are ready?

Thank you for a good chapter.



Author's Response:

I'm glad you're so invested in the story!  You'll just have to keep reading to see whether any of your predictions pan out, and there's still a lot of writing (over 15 chapters!) to be done before we're at the end.  Hope I don't lose you before then!

Reviewer: Bigdawg K Signed starstarstarstar
Date: December 24 2018 Title: Chapter 13: Some Hard Questions

Yeah dude is just going to be crushed by Fulda (or otherwise killed) at the end.  Would hope that her Gina and her sorority would get some justice despinsed to them, hell I would hope Fulda would acknowledge the errors of her ways and bring in all of her sisters herself.  Dude is done-realistic view point and the one I am sticking with till the end.

Hopeful (hopefulish) viewpoint, Dude and Fulda can love each other, dude can help Fulda realize her sorority sisters need to be 'contained'(thier going to make mistakes that will lead back to her), that shrinking and crushing people is wrong(she may one day do it the wrong person and she will wish she was 1,000 feet tall and dealing with the military) and since she has a book on witchcraft there has to be a spell that brings all the people she has wrongly murdered back.-Hopeful

That if there is a such a spell, and to make sure her real sisters/sorority sisters don't harm anyone as well as Fulda herself, but it requires a sacrifice.  The spell like a wish or time travel makes her kill the thing she loves most to accomplish it and even if they are brought back due the spell, they always remember who killed them.  So Fulda ensures she doesn't kill starting at 14, she avoids the Prom indicident, she shrinks dude for fun and restores, both do wonderfully in college but every night dude is reminded how Fulda killed him, and Fulda has to live with that massive sin on her conscience.-hopefulish

from all the stories in GW hero goes down, murders aren't punished and logic is at least susspended if not thrown out the window.  Would be nice for a happy ending, but those are rare here and it seems authors just want to vore or crush.

It's been a good story so far, but till Fulda's sisters get  justice, until Akane returns every one back to normal and when Fulda casts the spell bring back her victims I am squarely in the Dude's dead, Gina's going to get away and Fulda's going back to mass murder if she hasn't already.  Would love it to be otherwise but something about this forum seems to reenforce it (like Fulda's sorority).  I will not read more if it goes down that path of murder, crush and vore.

Thank you.



Author's Response:

This is a perspective I never expected to see, and a bold statement about what you hope happens.  I try to maintain an air of suspense about what's coming up between now and the ending, but I will say that there is no such wish spell, and if there were using it would effectively negate the past 60 chapters of this storyline and 20 other stories I've written.  While that would placate you, I don't expect that would satisfy any of my other readers, no matter how guilty Fulda felt each night.  Everything else is still in play - the main character may die, any number of women might get their just desserts, someone could take issue with them all at once (though that would really be outside the story's scope), but I'm not going to undo everything that's happened since before this story even started.

 

All that said, I'm flattered you're this invested in the story.  It's got a little longer to go before its final wrap, but I think the climax is really going to be something.  Please stay tuned, even if it swerves somewhere you don't like, since the winding road can go in all sorts of directions on its way to the end.

Summary:

Titans are on average 24 times bigger than humans and look exactly the same. The Titan Empire is vast, spanning 1/5 of the Milkey Way Galaxy. A warp capable species. Earth is seen as a reserve and Earth humans don't know of the existence of Titans or other Alien life. Humans(abducted or bread) in the Empire are seen as pets.

Enjoy this exciting adventure.


Categories: Giantess
Characters: None
Growth: Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: FF/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 3452 Read Count: 8603
[Report This] Published: October 22 2018 Updated: December 20 2018
Reviewer: Bigdawg K Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 23 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Humans, Pets ?!

I like the setup and the pacing, also it doesn't hurt to have a character name Wendy :-), keep up the good work.  Will look forward to this and Island.  Thank you.



Author's Response:

Thank you, Bigdawg K. This story will have a lot happen in it. Thank you for supporting Island too with reviews. :)

Reviewer: Bigdawg K Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 20 2018 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - A Secret Mission?

Like the set up and you captured the characters well, great follow up on chapter one.  Wendy seems to like Earth's space program wonder if her curisotity will have any impact :-).  Great work keep it up!!!



Author's Response:

Yes, Niall probably showed her a docu about it. ;)
Hope I can write chapter03 very soon. Thanks!

 

 

Summary:

The Flare, a massive solar eruption that hit America's West Coast, caused the death of a million women. Not everyone affected by the Flare developed terminal cancer, though. Four women woke up, after three very painful months, turned into something else. Over eight feet in height and possessing supernatural strength, Jennifer, Susan, Nathalie and Nicole will have to learn to live their lives in their new condition.

The Phoenix Initiative is the military project that takes care of them, studies their possibilities but also tries to replicate the process in the background. It has been going on for over a year... when one of the girls decides that she has had enough of being treated like a lab rat. 


Categories: Sci-Fi, Giantess, Destruction, Muscle
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 37085 Read Count: 22544
[Report This] Published: November 04 2018 Updated: December 02 2018
Reviewer: Bigdawg K Signed starstarstarstar
Date: December 02 2018 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4

Decent story so far.

Why does everyone look for the kentic kill?  The government needs to take a page out of 'the Rock' and use some VX or organic Hg on Nicole, her metalosism and mass might up the dosage needed , but consider a gram can kill dozens a shot glass worth should be able to put her six feet under.

Both substances appear to be what the body wants, so it takes it in without any defenses.  Wont matter how dense the skin is or defenses against poisons that the body attempts to fight, it looks like something the nerves need to transmit so they take it in, unless Nicole kills all her nerves and removes them (unless you go with insanity level 10+ Plot armor) Nicole shakes, quakes, shimmies and DIES after being exposed.  Those compounds are ninja's with your key, pin and look like your best friend, by the time something is wrong you have recieved a leathal dose.

Evolution doesn't happen in a vacuum, prehaps having been exposed to the flare and regularly being exposed to their 'partners' phermones and personal radation, the nurse's and cheerleader's handlers slowly become more durable (and a touch stronger) until the women know they can 'survive' them.  At which point the girls have thier way with them, only to speed evolution making them and their seed durable enoungh for progeny...

Just some ideas, decent story, thank you!



Author's Response:

Thanks! Glad that you like it so far.

Nicole is far from immortal, even if her change makes her incredibly tough to kill. This is the reason she has been lying low after escaping, because she knows that she needs more than just her strength to eventuallly prevail. I agree that a chemical or organic component could do the trick, even if her metabolism would require a much, much higher dose than the one needed to kill a normal person. For the government, using the gas while Nicole is in the open would be just too bad on the collateral victims side, so they need to subdue her first and kill her later. More on this later.

As for the possibility of this affecting the girl's partners... that's not the way I envisioned the flare to work so... not gonna happen ;)

Summary:

Things in my life became weird rapidly. The funny thing is, they were always weird, but they weren't. Or, at least, I didn't question if they were. Or did this just start happening? I'm going to have to go through a hell of a lot to figure it out, and at the center of it all is one woman who holds my entire world literally in her hand. Whereas I'm usually unnoticed by most everyone else, she now has all of her playful attention aimed right at me. What does that mean is in store for me, and will I live?

Whatever happens, I intend to do my job.

My name is John Loya, and I'm a story teller. Whether it kills me or not, I intend for this story to be told.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Giantess, Adventure, Breasts, Body Exploration, Crush, Destruction, Fantasy, Feet, Butt, Gentle, Growing Woman, Insertion, Mouth Play, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.), Brobdnignagian (51 ft. to 100 ft.), Mega (501 ft. to 5279 ft.), Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 73124 Read Count: 164512
[Report This] Published: November 15 2018 Updated: March 09 2020
Reviewer: Bigdawg K Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 02 2018 Title: Chapter 5: I Signed Up For This . . .

Awesome chapter!!!  Like Jenny as giantess made compartively larger by shrinking them all.  Also drawing our protaginist closer by moving him into her 'mountains' maybe she knows about Monica?  Maybe she might want him as more then a friend later (no one to relate to her, no one knows her, but he is beginning to, even a popular goddess get loney...(since those that 'worship her' don't know her)).  Do love that she was encouraging them and being gentle, you don't have to crush, and slam to be domoniate, even her encouraging them shows them just how superior she is to them in stature, you can be nice and in-charge at the same time and Jenny was owning it!

Again Thank you for an awesome chapter!



Author's Response:

You make some insightful observations, which I'll refrain from confirming or denying. I appreciate your eye for detail, as well, in regards to Jenny's personality. It's always really cool to read about how you guys pick up on certain things that I'm trying to reveal in as natural a manner as possible. Thank you for the comment

Reviewer: Bigdawg K Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 07 2018 Title: Chapter 1: The Chapter Where Nothing Out of the Ordinary Happens

Another awesome chapter!  Looks like Jenny is 'liking' John (John don't fall for the friends with benefits, if she's already there she DIGS you!  Monica, she and her folks maybe moving to the other side of the country soon...  Jenny won't hurt or kill her, but dad being promoted to clear her playingfield...) yeah Mr. Loya needs to be careful about Jenny's heart or he maybe working in a Mike Rowe job...(I can see Jenny being nice, gentle and playful while playing dirty...)

Again great chapter, can't have too many great gentle giantess!!!



Author's Response:

You make some cool speculations, and it's entirely possible that the story could go that way, or another. I'll get working on it so you won't have to wait long. Till then, thanks for the comments, they keep me motivated. 

Reviewer: Bigdawg K Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 13 2018 Title: Alright I'll Go With This

Mr. Loya seems to be drawn ever closer to Jenny's 'gravity' and Jenny seems to have an ever greater attraction to her satilite...

Awesome chapter, remarkably cute and inspiring in that John can bring forth such wonderful things from Jenny, as with Misecounters on this same board he needs to be careful how much joy he gives her (both are gentle and careful, though unlike Melina I don't see the powers Jenny have being able to harm John, unlike five tons of woman going the wrong way in the wrong place with Lucas...).  Jenny won't hurt him, but she could become a John fiend, needing Mr. Loya whenever possible!

Keep it up, love the playfulness and the bonding!!!

Reviewer: Bigdawg K Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: December 29 2018 Title: Chapter 1: The Chapter Where Nothing Out of the Ordinary Happens

Well I like everything but the vore, litterally thousands of stories on this site all about VORE.  Hope you aren't setting up the ending of the story.  Even while 'consuming' him it seems Jenny is still very fond of John, and from previous chapters you stated she doesn't kill, so I am hoping that these chapters are fan service for the Vore folks and we can get back to some very high qaulity story telling (with a gentle Jenny)!!!

The vore kills my rating, everything else was 5 stars, with vore down to 3.5 sorry.  Hope the next few chapters return to your awesome story.  Thank you.



Author's Response:

well sorry to hear that vore's not your thing, and you probably won't like the next chapter. But when I made this story, I promised all kinds of scenarios, so you're gonna see a little of almost everything. All I can say is vore won't be the main focus of the story but it will be in it (hope you have nothing against feet because that's my thing). Jenny is going to stay gentle, but keep in mind she has a mischevious tendancy. She likes to play the giantess in all sorts of scenarios. I'm going for a variety. You're going to see her be the self-appointed "antagonist" and the gentle giantess. Keep in mind, she's only having fun though.

 

Thanks for being honest with your review, by the way.

Reviewer: Bigdawg K Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 17 2019 Title: Chapter 1: The Chapter Where Nothing Out of the Ordinary Happens

Still loving the interaction, Jenny is trying to show John that his a good guy, John ain't quite buying.  Jenny I think is trying to be a good girl and let John go after his dream girl, though I sense some time in the future, maybe soon that Jenny will admit that she's 'kidnapping' him for other reasons then just to play out Giantess fantasies.  The good friend who's hooking you up being the one who wants to hook up with you "that never happens..." right :-) 

Anyway I don't think Jenny will be able to keep the promise of "that will never happen again" with her needs and desires, she might of shown too much, but she had no issue of showing it...  Great chapter.

Reviewer: Bigdawg K Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 11 2019 Title: Chapter 11: Ok I'm Terrified, But Yeah That's Hot

Hoping with Jenny pushing Monica that she allows Monica to see 'her' and gets her 'involved' in their games.

That over time Monica realizes just how much Jenny is doing for her and why...

That though Monica likes John and could 'be' with him she picks up on the 'goddess's' true feelings.  That she realizes just how much Jenny needs and adores him and though trying to do the 'right' thing with John it's hurting Jenny.

Then Monica and Jenny talk, then Monica and John talk...

think Jenny and John make a better couple, though out of the 'love something set them free (or up with their dream)' school I can see a woman like Jenny giving up alot even hurting herself (emotionally) for someone like John.  All the while John not cluing into Jenny's feelings.  May take Monica to make a small 'sacrifice' to bring those who should be together there.

Please when you get a chance post more, thank you.



Author's Response:

Hey Bigdawg, nice to hear from you again. Happy you're still reading even after I've been gone for a long time. Hopefully next chapter doesn't take as long. I really enjoy your personal vision for the story. I've already got most of it mapped out in my head so I know how the character relationships are going to play out, but I love reading about everyone's own personal theory for how everyone should end up together. Just means that you guys really like the characters I've created. Hope you also like the various scenarios, since the entire point of this story was just to have an excuse to throw some guy into every different giantess scenario I could think of (shrunken, giantess, giantess in city, vore, feet, Mayan goddess, etc.). There's a few more different games in the future that are all going to play a small role in the development of these characters, and with any luck you guys will like how it plays out.

Thanks again for your comments man. 

Reviewer: Bigdawg K Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 08 2019 Title: Chapter 1: The Chapter Where Nothing Out of the Ordinary Happens

Great Chapter, Jenny and John are enjoying the other quite a bit, it might not be long be Jenny finds Monica a new friend and keeps John all to her divine self :-) Don't think she's reached that point consciencailly, but the more they do and the deeper they 'dive' one 'game' it may just 'happen'.  Again great chapter!

Reviewer: Bigdawg K Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 27 2018 Title: Chapter 1: The Chapter Where Nothing Out of the Ordinary Happens

Love the story so far, concerned about the Vore aspect, would really like to see Jenny stay a gentle giantess.  She enjoys her games and some are riske but she makes sure people arent harmed by what she does.  Would like to have John becoming an additional conscience for her and maybe being rewarded with the "power to satisfy a goddess".  It's light so far, please don't make it into a downpour on moonless midnight.  Thanks.



Author's Response:

don't worry. I've taken all of that into consideration and I know exactly how the future fetish aspects are going to be handled. From a story point of view, her powers will probably come off as a Deus Ex Machina, but that's what I was going for. Abilities that are purely for creating a variety of different scenarios without sacrificing the gentle giantess aspect that I love so much. Hopefully I'll be able to keep the characters interesting enough so you guys won't get bored. Thanks for the comment, btw