Penname: Bigdawg K [Contact] Real name: David
Member Since: September 13 2018
Membership status: Member
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Lurker who is starting to write. working on a Titan/Battletech crossover, at roughly chapter 15, when phase one is done I will likely post to GTS City, Dev and here.


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Property of Omega Pi by Duggernaut Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 607]
Summary:

The positively beautiful sisters of Omega Pi are a selective sorority who possess a very curious secret, that being, they sustain their otherworldly looks by stealing the lives and life energy of unsuspecting young men.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Breasts, Body Exploration, Entrapment, Footwear, Growing/Shrinking Out of Clothes, Insertion, Mouth Play, Slave, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, FF/f, FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 128 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 146327 Read Count: 908612
[Report This] Published: September 21 2016 Updated: September 10 2020
Reviewer: Bigdawg K Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 13 2018 Title: Chapter 113: The Impossible Dream

Good Chapter!  Carrycommic thinks Gaia and Hecate both very protective of ALL children.  My view is a bit different my bet is either Hera like or Athena like.  The one you would figure being most beneficail to the girls at O Pi would be the most likely to hide them.  Hera is all about faithfulness beteewn partners... The guys are in the most part doing that, the girls...

If the goddess returns I don't think anyone initally is going to be in a good way with her, though what her 'boys' have gone through and what her 'girls' have done for their own selfish purposes, well any of the four goddesses listed would likely pity the boys and make life intresting for the girls.  but all this is speculation, the plot is being built, the story being told and we will see what happens.  Thank you for another great chapter!



Author's Response:

Yes the pose described was based off Athena imagery with a dash of Selene for color. Is it real or all in his head? Some residue left by the stone? If real, how will she be? Fun stuff ahead

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Date: January 14 2019 Title: Chapter 114: Highway Run

Sam and her boys are going to have what a guess is going to be a long talk.  Sam will likely be burdened with guilt for the rest of her life even if all goes well with Oliver and Stan them and the other males being restored and they forgive her(which I am fairly certian they will).  During that talk Oliver's 'encounter' with the goddess may come up, responses should be intresting.  Another great chapter!!!  Thank you.



Author's Response:

It does look like a fairly clear path you've laid out. Unless of course, someone throws a wrench into it...  :)

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Date: January 31 2019 Title: Chapter 1: First Time Away From Home

Or the Warm feeling maybe him shrinking again?  From the myths and legends I am aware of goddesses (and gods) don't tend to reveal themselves to people they don't like, if they do the smiting is usaully instant and fatal.  If they don't like they send a minion or 'hero' to deal with you or in the best case turn you into an insect or snake woman.

Maybe Oliver could be her vessel, she has a OP daughter there in Sam, she has two sons in Stan and Olvier and Oliver was exposed to her enery twice (laugh manicailly does tend to suggest possesion... and looking up while doing so isnt usually a good sign either).  It's not over even if the goddess wants to make things 'right' her standards are going to be different then humans, perhaps since Sam is already on the path to 'redemption' she'll give a little push and point out her sin in giving into her carnel needs with her husband by further shrinking and/or possesing her boy, maybe make her yeild her life and soul to save her son?

At least she and Stan will have fun before headier issues arise (or fall), maybe all the 'activity' will channel the goddess into the materail world, Caddy and Deacon, Sam and Stan, Larrisa and Oliver?  Maybe once Larrisa and Oliver are done she comes into the world 'worlock 2' style and they all watch in horror as Larrisa's womb grows she gives birth and the baby instantly matures into the goddess where she can thank and smite them simoutenously and prepare them to deal with the real problems, Sams unreformed sisters...

Amazing Chapter, More please!!!!



Author's Response:

we've yet to see the goddess or her avatar yet, but it will be soon. The burning question will be is she aware of what her devotees are doing or are the mice at play while the cat is away?

Reviewer: Bigdawg K Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 07 2019 Title: Chapter 116: No Stone Unturned

Think maybe the goddess is making herself 'felt', maybe even making Lassira her avatar.  The women seem very 'ready' maybe the will be 'compelled' to restore the men and the men as well as the women will enjoy it?  Just keep us on the edge D!  More please!



Author's Response:

All I can offer is that soon the answers you seek will be revealed, however, no promises more questions wont arise :)

 

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Date: February 28 2019 Title: Chapter 1: First Time Away From Home

Contray to Shrinkmeister comentary ;-) I found it a bit endearing, Sam truly loves Stan and Stan Truly love Sam.  That Sam's V is a bit hungry for her man and that Stan embraces it is in my view wonderful.  That said it was probably a good idea that Sam left her drawers on after the last line, not sure Stan could survive the additional tumbling and likely being shot like a cannon accros the bathroom (though the goddess may of helped him there...).

My Guess is Oliver and Larissa are next on deck and if Larissa is the 'avatar' and Oliver her 'chosen' one she and he may put Stan's and Sam's loving making to shame/  great story same it was only one chapter...  MORE PLEASE!



Author's Response:

Thanks, I appreciate the input. I was hoping to capture a more tender encounter between people that actually care and love one another though tempered by recent events. Next chapter will be Thomasin and Cam...

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Date: March 17 2019 Title: Chapter 1: First Time Away From Home

Cam and Thomasin, that makes three good women with good (if shrunken) men enjoying the other and bringing pleasure to each other (Cady and Deacon as well as Stan and Sam).  Maybe the goddess is making a point here?  Maybe if you love and respect your partner each and share paradise?

From the discription Thomasin need "IT!!!" fairly badly, the poor Vesper has likely been keep herself 'pure' for decades to both bring those 'brothers' she can back and likely cause she has some instantances were she used men like her sisters (can see her being like Harmony, she might of gotten some guilty pleasures but she knew they were wrong...).  Likely her exchange of engery(likely a part gets trapped when restoring) and her postion have kept her young and beautiful and she still has the needs of a young woman with the experence of much more mature beauty.

Either way Cam is doing what he can to please this gentle tigeress and seems to be having great sucess.  I sense Thomasin, if he is ready again will return the favor.

Now Larissa and Oliver, regardless if Larissa is the 'avatar of the goddess' or not, I believe Oliver is in for the ride of his life and if she is...  Well it may just be a 'devine' ecounter...

Great Chapter, Thank you.



Author's Response:

Thanks Bigdawg K! It would seem to appear they are pairing off... coincidence?

Reviewer: Bigdawg K Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 07 2018 Title: Chapter 1: First Time Away From Home

Great story so far, even though the girls are careless and thoughtless they haven't killed anyone yet (I could be wrong only one questionable is Bear).  Hope Sam and family fix this and the sority as a whole.  Devine intervention would be nice, but selfish people (women in this case) have abused their powers and 'God' smiting them will only fix it short term.  The need leaders like Tomlinson, Agntha (spell is aweful I am sorry) and Sam to correct the wrongs folks like Sabina and Brooklyn have inflicted.

That being said as with other reviewers I would get a kick out their Goddess saying just how evil and stupid they are as she shrinks her "chosen" and lets the boys determine their punishment.

Keep up the awesome work!



Author's Response:

Thanks for taking the time to review. We shall see whether the goddess shows up and what kind of mood she might be . Cheers

Inversion by littless Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 158]
Summary:

Sam's life undergoes some BIG changes when he gets back together with his high school sweetheart.

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.


Categories: Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Breast Enlargement, Couples, Gentle, Growing Woman, Incest, Slow Size Change
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.)
Shrink: Dwarf (3 ft. to 5 ft.)
Size Roles: FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 102 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 518393 Read Count: 691790
[Report This] Published: May 16 2017 Updated: April 29 2019
Reviewer: Bigdawg K Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 06 2019 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Reunion

Kinda of a sad ending for Julie, think she will continue on for the children and grandchildren, but her Sam will be missing for as long as she is alive.

Sam, won't be as sad in the afterlife, but beteewn gaming sessions with Jill and Samatha I bet he will look back to see if Julie's ok.

Maybe be a nice additional epilouge of Julie falling asleep and then there is her Sam just like when they reunited, All the differences that they had overcome and truly gone now they are souls in a better place.  Julie and Sam happily spend entirity with Mom and all there friends while watching and waiting for their children to 'come home' (though in no rush).

Look forward to more stories, thank you for Inversion!!!  One of the best stories I have read!!!



Author's Response:

Hey, Bigdawg,

I thought of having just such an epilogue but decided against it in the end. There are so many things I can think of that Julie and Sam can have fun with in a dream but this could be a whole 'nuther story. :) Don't feel bad for Julie, she's getting old. I figure she was around fifty something when this all happened. It's time to enjoy the grandchildren and I have at least two stories about the kids and grandchildren in the works already. Sam's legacy is strong and I'll leave it at that for now.

There was quite a bit of dying in this story but that's life. Perhaps I wrote it because of things going on in my own life, I'm not sure. I may say a little more about Sam's passing in another story, but I think I'll be putting up something different than a Borgford tale next. Don't be disappointed because I still have at least a few Borgford tales but that will come later.

I truly appreciate your support and the time you've taken to write comments, Bigdawg. I hope I don't let you down with the next stories I have coming, but with an exception or two, I think you'll enjoy them. (I say exception because I think I know the type of stories you like based on your comments. But I do want to branch out and try other things just to see how it goes.)

 

Reviewer: Bigdawg K Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 04 2019 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Reunion

I am a bit worried about Sam and Billy being at large, any normal sized person could take Sam.  I would hate to be Billy if he did hurt or kill Sam and Julie finds out.  All that angunish would become rage with a focus, someone other then herself had hurt Sam, I doubt Billy would enjoy or even survive that, not sure Julie would survive the gulit afterward.  She would likely see it as yet another sin she inflicted on her Love, after avenging him, she would berate herself for letting him come to harm.

Speaking of Julie, it's becoming ever more clear she has always needed Sam.  She is the poster child of 'Love makes you crazy' and 'Love makes you evil' (both from Tv Tropes).  She has been growing up (at times very slowly), her physical growth spurt didn't help matters, nor did Sam's enabling of her.  Though I doubt Julie of chapter one or fifty would have the moral courage she has now.

Don't particulary like the other girls trying to crowd Julie out of Sam's life.  Understand they believe they are protecting him, and that there are times when you have to retreat or even give up.  Even if Sam has reached that point Julie still needs him as a fellow human being.  His nature is to help and if something happened to her you know he would feel awful.  They should let Sam be Sam and if they can fix things they should be happy for him.  The once bitten twice shy rule doesn't completely cover this, Julie wasn't gloating over what she had done, she was geniuely remorseful and from Jill and others she is devestated by what she did.  It doesn't excuse it, but as mentioned before she did have a time when 'Love made her Crazy and Evil' don't think that applies any more to her.

In the end Julie needs Sam in her life (at least a friend) if she is to be happy.  He has been her anchor, her rock, her means of support.  She took ihim for granted and got jealous a fair bit. she also allowed other to mock him and took it out on him instead of them (Sunflower girls),but I hope that with her confession came an ephiny and that she know her emotional and mental growth are much more important then her physical growth.

Without Sam, what does she do, she won't be satified with the Sunflower Girls, will she work things out with Jill and do her utmost to treat those like she infected?  Will she become so desponent that she seeks out the same disease she gave Sam so she can return to the way things were in forlon hope for Sam?  Will her own growth perhaps provide a treatment or cure for Sam?  If so, and if he's cured would she try to get back together at that point or will her guilt stop her?  After her realiztion can she allow herself to be happy again?

I believe Julie will from here on out attempt to support and help Sam.  She will do it covertly, quietly and in sercert.  I think she has reached the point that she feels she no longer deserves him, or anything good in her life.  I think Sam being Sam will do the same for Julie, he will help where he can, support as he can, and wish her the best if they don't heal.

I think they should meet and let time and healing take them where they can go.  If it's friends that might be good enough, but Julie never had to tell the truth, one day, could of become one week, a month a year, maybe on his death bed (or hers).  She knew the pain it would cause both of them, but Sam deserved the truth.

Thank you for a great chapter, still want healing beteewn Sam and Julie...

 



Author's Response:

Hi Bigdawg, how's it going? Thanks again. You write your comments almost as long as I write my chapters. :)

With Billy out and about nobody's safe. I hope he stays hidden and we don't see him again. Or better yet, he gets caught and thrown back in jail.

I'm kind of wondering what Julie is doing with herself. Perhaps she doesn't need Sam. Maybe the Sunflower girls will keep her attention and be her new muse. Maybe Sam doesn't need Julie. He has plenty of girls around to look after his needs, doesn't he? I'm not so sure the other girls are trying to crowd Julie out of Sam's life, except for Zoe. It seems the little spitfire wants Sam to herself, or at least away from Julie. We'll see what happens.

One thing is for sure at this point: Julie seems to be drifting away from Sam, but Sam can't get Julie totally out of his mind. What's it going to take? Will he finally forget about her, will she come back to him, or will something else bring them together or apart? I know everyone wants to see Julie and Sam back together. But sometimes, shit happens.

Thanks for the comments and thoughts.

Reviewer: Bigdawg K Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 13 2019 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Reunion

Made the guess on the 17 of March that "Zoe was pregenant", looks like it was a right guess.

Julie and Sam are going to be at least shocked, both are going to wonder if 'one of Sam's Soldiers got through' or did Zoe stop taking her control meds.

Zoe being the blunt girl she is will like state the truth "she stopped taking them"

Zoe I know wants the child, Sam having lost a child will if not start at that postion get there quickly.

That leaves Julie, being married means more then just being with the one you love, it means the 'possiblity' of children.  I doubt with all this time she hasn't considered that and if she hadn't she will now.

Knowing how badly she hurt Sam when the Female Sam had an abortion will it even be an option in her mind, and if it is will she voice it?

Depending on Julie's current vindictiveness meter and measured against how she wishes to not harm Sam again.  She could do several things, though she knows she had given Sam premission to 'spend time' with Zoe, before and that he wasn't spending time(or as much) with her now (her and Gail).

One she could go off and demand Zoe gets an abortion, be pissed at her and Sam and make life very unhappy until she calmed down or pushed too far.  Hoping she having told Sam to have his way with Zoe, would be over time more amemable to his thoughts and if she has matured like you keep tell us, she knows she will gain nothing but greif and pain with that tact.

or She could support Sam and Zoe in two ways so as not to harm Sam:

1. Vindictively, The Child is innocent, he or she didn't choose to be born to that hussy Zoe, so Julie plays nice, takes care of her every need while planning her wedding.  She is there for the child at all times, shape and molding them and since it is half Sam she can love him or her for that.  With every smile, every bit of aid, every teachable moment she nudges, pushs or drags Zoe's child away from her and toward Julie places him or her with Julie children by Sam.  Julie every bit as calculating as she was with Sam and will when the time is right claim Zoe's child as hers (not litterally, but every way that matters).

2.  Compassionately, she accepts the child and Zoe into her 'larger' family and allows the child to be Zoe while 'helping' nearly as much as she does in one.

In the end Sam didn't know, Julie had 'hooked' them up and Zoe is the one who might of played games.  Julie I think understands if she losses it she losses Sam, and that I hope is too much for her to lose.  My guess is she starts with 1 and moves over time toward two.

Thank you.



Author's Response:

Yes, you did guess right. You'll see how it turns out soon; all of the questions will be answered.

A little preview though: remember that Julie already said yes to Sam's proposal. She didn't do this lightly. She knew what she was getting herself into.

Thanks for all of your comments, Bigdawg! I think you'll like how it ends.

Reviewer: Bigdawg K Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 16 2019 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Reunion

Cute chapter, little surpised at how easily Julie took the news, I didn't think she would go off on Sam and if she did it would be minor, but Zoe, I thought she might have a bad day or year for planning a baby without Sam's knowledge (or hers).

The everyone getting married is 'cheesy' but a good 'cheesy' with all the stress heart break and pain it's good to have a very happy moment once in a while and after the last several chapters the less dark the better.

I like the chapter a good deal now if the remaining two can close it out on happy note it will be an awesome ending to a great story.

Thank you.



Author's Response:

It will be happy. Thanks for all of your comments Bigdawk. I'm away for Easter but will put the rest up in a few days.

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Date: April 24 2019 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Reunion

Good time skip, they still are a Harem, but they are ok with it, and the Children seem to be doing quite well.

Little warry about all the Cindy influnced skinny dipping...

So, there are more 'Borgsford tales' from here?

read "Every Month and half"'s nine chapters seems like a promising start.

as with the swimming a bit warry for any 'twists' in the last chapter, but it has been a great run so far.

Hope to see more of your works, Thank you!



Author's Response:

I'll try to finish "Every Month and Half" before posting other stories but this was sort of just a fun thing to do. I had a big old mystery plot planned for this but I never went very far with it so I don't know what I'll do with the story yet. I might finish it off in a flash, or develop the mystery.

I have a bunch of ideas and a few stories already started in line with the "Borgford Tales" :) I'll be posting one or two at least. One is about Tee and I have it about 75-80% done. I changed the style a little. There are quite a few chapters already, not nearly as many as "Inversion", but each one is much shorter than the "Inversion" chapters. However, I'm not really sure the Tee story lives up to what I want to publish from now on.

I have a couple of stories based on one of Sam's kids and another story about a kid from one of the others, but I won't tell you who unless I decide to put it up. There's a little incest and underage stuff with these but not adult-child type underage, it's child-child. Plus, it's very mild, especially when compared to others I've read. We'll see if that's interesting. When I say mild, I mean no intercourse, just lots of temptation that the kids have to deal with.

Then there's one I started in which the main character is born with the virus but doesn't get the required meds until later in life. This mean he (yes, a guy but I do have girl's stories in the works too) gets to be very small -- maybe a foot to a foot and a half, I haven'e decided, maybe smaller. How about a fighter pilot that gets stranded behind enemy lines without his PDQ, then gets captured by the enemy and tortured? I can see some violence, crush, butt and vore that's so popular here on this site, though I'm not at all into that sort of stuff, but it might be fun to try my hand at it.

I have some other, less developed ideas, and after I finish this off I'm asking if anyone has preferences.

Last year was not a good one for me personally and it shows in the story. This happened in the middle of it and at times it seems I'm rambling and struggling. But things are better now and I've learned a lot through the whole process and I think I can do a much better job.

I really appreciate your continued support, Bigdawg, and I'm hoping you'll like what I publish here in the future.  If there's something you'd like to see let me know.

You've been one of my biggest supporters based on your comments and I hope to expand that group.

Thank you!

Reviewer: Bigdawg K Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 29 2019 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Reunion

Sam's making progress, Zoe is understanding, Julie's resistance is all but gone.  Now we learn that Julies started WWI...  No I expect a couple more twists, but I hope at a mininium Sam and Julie well be good friends with benefits, would like more for them and if Zoe is part of the arragement I can live with that as well.

Little frightening yet likely for Sam aroursing that Julie can just move a multi-hunderd pound safe like it's a half full laundry bag.  With five more chapters to go would be more worried about him using the 9mm, but it makes sense for him to be careful even with Sam starting back up with self-defense, maybe he and Julie can get fully intp a work out regime together.

Great chapter!  Thank you.



Author's Response:

Thanks again, Bigdawg. Yep there are still a couple more twists coming, but I'm getting ready to put the next chapter up so we'll see.

Don't you like Julie being able to pick up a safe? To be sure, it's not a big one. Well, not for most people. It's a little shorter than Sam so he can fit into it but has to scrunch down to do so and there's no way he could lift a hunk of metal almost as tall as he is. To Julie, however, it's just a little box -- a little box made of heavy metal alloys, but still not too big for her to lift. I wonder how a work out routine would work between the two. There's like no way Sam can spot for Julie. Any other ideas?

I kind of threw the 9mm in there, but you'll see later how it comes in, and it's not how you would expect, I think.

I didn't like how I did the next chapter coming up so a rewrote, rewrote and rewrote it again. Still the same outcome but I think I did a better job of it now. That's why I'm a little late getting it up. I also split the chapter so we'll have 101 or 102 chapters total. The end is near. I hope you all enjoy the remaining chapters.

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Date: March 26 2019 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Reunion

Enjoyed the Pool, Resturant and house scenes.  From what I see Julie very much wants to be part of Sam's life as long as she is SURE she doesn't HURT him.  Sam is being an overly eager bee, maybe even an @ss, if he went at Julie's speed his chances would be vastly better (if not nearly certian, there is a gravity beteewn the two, less thrust the faster each fall into the other, the faster Sam flies toward the more like he is to sling shot out of what he wants, at least in the short and midterm, don't think little Sam has enough thurst to completely escape the orbit of a 'sun' the size of Julie though).

Like that Zoe is talking to Julie, the whole group that did it to him are cupable, Julie more then all, but they were all willing and able to do it.

Think some healing has occured, the shock is waring off, maybe even one can make some half-way intelligent decisions from here on out?  Hope the healing conitnues Thank you!



Author's Response:

What about the court scene? And Bettina? I loved them. Well, anyway ...

Julie's afraid of hurting him but I think deep inside she still loves him. Sam is pushing. Too much? I don't know, we'll see.

Maybe Sam doesn't have enought thrust (actually kinetic energy is the more correct term) to leave his orbit around Julie. But a perturbation from another nearby object, like Zoe, could knock him out of orbit. <-- See what I did there? I know celestial mechanics.

Zoe probably still likes Julie, just not the fact that she hurt Sam. But Sam thinks Zoe doesn't like JUlie because she wants him.

Going to court helped Sam heal a lot. He may never totally get over what happened to Jill, but now he can move on with life.

Thanks for the comments. I really appreciate all of them.

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Date: March 22 2019 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Reunion

Seems like slow progress for Julie and Sam.  Sam is trying a touch too hard, he needs to lay back and let Julie recover and come to him.  The moving day was a good sign and how fast she came to 'save' him when the 'hornets' attacked, it so she still cares a great deal about him and that she is willing to endure pain to ensure he is safe.  Also her getting 'naked' and hugging him for a couple of minutes even though at some level she didn't want to speaks to how she still wants him in her life, she just doesn't know how far.

Julie should do a couple of things have become more mature (hopefully), get with Zoe and try to figure what is best for Sam, keep some distance from Sam and let him know why, that she's hurt him and she needs to know it isn't Stockholm syndrome thats bringing him back.  That she's there for him when he needs her, even some when he wants her, but she needs to maintain some space so he can choose her rather then being 'compelled' to choose her.

If she feel not good enough for him, do things that will make her better.  Have Sam help her find colleges and universities where she can devolp her skills (or just online courses) have that as 'payment' for the incorpation paper work.

They need to become friends again first, if Julie knows this, they have a good shoot even with Sam being clingly right now.  Julie also needs to help him get over his worries about his size.

as an aside would think it humorous and awesome if Sam's phermones adds a few inches to few feet to Julie size (her sport's bar is tighter, she has to crane her neck to fit into the house).  Though it would likely make him feel even worse about his size, but if they could find a way he could grow from it...

Good chapter, thanks!



Author's Response:

I see you want a bigger Julie. Oh my! And if Sam shrinks even more ...

Julie knows deep down that she does love Sam but thinks she's no good for him. It may take some time before she realizes that Sam wants her no matter what.

Sam is trying hard but he knows this and tries to back off, only his desire for Julie is nearly overpowering his good judgement on this. I hope he doesn't spoil it.

It's a good idea about Julie taking courses to develop her skills and such, but Sam is taking a different tact to accomplish the same thing. You'll see.

They're still freinds and can still have good times together, as you'll also discover later. So stay tuned.

Thanks again for the feedback and comments.

Reviewer: Bigdawg K Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 19 2019 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Reunion

POOR Julie- the girl is broken, she says she doesn't want to love anymore.  She has to feel everything she touches turns to ashes and with Sam shrinking again it only brings it into sharper relief.  How can she find any happiness if she is so scared about hurting those she loves, if she would rather not love then hurt them and herself.

Sam's going to have to be paineint in her own way she's hurt herself alot worse then she's hurt him.  She doesn't want any more pain so she is going to flee anything that she doesn't need to do to merely survive.  If it gets much worse she may attempt to end her existance.

The girls need to back off of her, let her get back on her feet, everything that's happen she feels horrible for, but them sniping her from behind her back isn't helping anyone.

Basically all Sam can do is help, maybe find something to draw her out, Julie needs to find it within herself to do something or be something worthy and that means she's going to have to care again, enough that she can accidentailly hurt some one again.  That right now is a lot for her and she maybe very easily worried about what she does from here on out.  Which maybe a good thing as long as she can risk enough of herself to care.

Thank you.



Author's Response:

Wow, you think Julie may attempt to end her existance? Well, she is pretty down and she's not loving life. I hope it ain't so. How do think Sam would feel about that?

I think the only one sniping at Julie behind her back is Zoe, and she doesn't really mean it. Does she? The other girls love Julie and want her back too.

Now Julie does care, especially for Sam. Maybe too much and I think that's her problem. She's afraid of hurting him either accidently or not and until she figures out that it's worth the risk the two won't be getting back together. Can she come to her senses?

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Date: March 17 2019 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Reunion

Poor Sam can't comfort Zoe or Julie right now.  At least he no longer is sinking like he is tied to an anochor.

Feel bad for Julie, Sam pushed a touch to hard, sure she knows he didn't mean to and likely wants his attention but at ths moment almost certainly too much for her right now espeacilly with Sam and what she did to him.

Guessing Zoe is pregenant, not sure if it was planned...

Good Chapter, hoping Julie begins to heal and Sam continues (and helps her) and the all find some happiness.  Thank you.



Author's Response:

Hey Bigdawg, somehow the server here got messed up. I had a heck of time getting that last chapter up with things timing out and stuff. I somehow put two chapters up, or something, not really sure what happened but we should be at chapter 89 at this point.

Sorry for any confusion, everyone; I hope it's fixed now.

Thanks again for the comments. I'll get the next chapter up in a couple days, if the server lets me. Questions will start to be answered soon.

Reviewer: Bigdawg K Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 14 2019 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Reunion

good chapter, lots of pain though, Sam and Julie bearing the brunt with Julie still dealing with what she did and having this placed on top of her.

Of the two Julie has to be feeling more, Jill is her sister and even if their relationship was sour to start it had gotten better with a possiblity of full healing once she admitted what she had done and freed Jill from her guilit.  Yeah Julies is a bit worse off then Sam.

Hope they heal together, hope Julie has some inspriation from her sister and maybe to honor her takes up her works.  Maybe through this she can heal herself and those she hurt and finally feel good about herself and what she does rather then letting her size define her.  Once she's learned that maybe she can help Sam see what he does and the good he causes to happen and not be so focused on his size.

You've been putting these chapters up, almost faster then we can review, not that I am complaining.  Thank you!



Author's Response:

Thanks, Bigdawg.

It's a dark time for Julie. I like your idea about taking inspiration from Jill and maybe I can work something into the story like that. Honestly I hadn't thought of that for Julie, thanks.

The story's basically done and chapters are written, they just need editing and that's why I've been putting them up every other day, average. There was a long period where I didn't get a chance to work on this so I'm making up for it. Perhaps I'll slow the pace down a little for you all. ;)

Reviewer: Bigdawg K Signed
Date: March 07 2019 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Reunion

Littless,

I appericate your skill and writing also I am sorry for your loss and hope you are doing better.

With that said I really got into the story because of Sam and Julie, the first third really hooked me and I have been engaged because you do write well and maintain a good story.

In the end it is your story and you will end as you wish.

I can guess more or less where I think the story is going.  With your comments my guess about Julie she either going to fade away or be the 'villian' with the Sunflower Girls, considering everything that Sam has done for her and her for him that to me is a throughly unsatisfying ending.

I will give it a chapter or two, but it seems you have made up your mind and from what I have read of the story and the comments a rough path at least appears.  If it is the path I have guessed it is I can utlize my time working on my own stories rather then be disappointed.

Hope your life continues to get better and thank you for your time.



Author's Response:

I appreciate your sentiments, however I assure you, we have not heard the last of Julie. Perhaps this is dragging on too much -- for that I apologize. I promise we'll see more of Julie in Sam's life coming up. However, there are a couple more twists and turns first. I just hope there's no rebellion from my readers for the next chapter.

BTW, we won't hear much from the Sunflower girls from here on out. That should tell you something.

Thanks again, Bigdawg, for both the comments and condolenses for my loss. It's been four months since then and we all knew what was happening for a whole long year. It's over now so I'm moving on.

Reviewer: Bigdawg K Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 31 2019 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Reunion

Good Chapter, Sam has a big heart, I sense the author wants Zoe and him which is fine.  I would still like Julie in his life and over time winning him back (more like being able to be near him again without her guilt making her feel like scum).  With Billy around and no one really able to protect Gail I sense a possible heroic end for Julie.  Maybe Sam attempts to slow do or stop Billy, Billy is of coursed armed, Julie though big would likely still be frightened of guns (she's 8 feet tall not super girl).  Then the shot goes off and instead of Sam, Julie takes it...  Might be a touch melodramic.

Sam should just call and leave a message with her, somthing like I am ok Julie, I forgive you and Jill (and Zoe and Samatha), I just want you to be happy or something kind, but hopefully not overwhelming, maybe send her live flowers she likes, so she has something to take care of and heal.  Just stay in her life and let her recover what she can and Sam recover what he can.  It seems Sam has the heart can Julie use the guilt to better herself or does she let it drag her down.  Thank you and hope that life is treating you better!



Author's Response:

Thanks for compliments. Zoe might be going after Sam, or maybe just looking out for him. Julie's not out of Sam's life yet, but maybe others think she is. Will Sam still stay interested in Julie?

Let's hope Billy doesn't mess things up. I like the idea of Sam sending Julie flowers; good idea. It let's her know that she's still wanted. We'll see what Sam does, but I'll tell you that more twists and rocky roads are headed Sam's way.

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