Hello! I hungrily read Blackmail, Julia, Family Reunion 1 and this one. I also appreciated "Her Sick Games" though it was a short one.

I love how you describe situations, your very realistic dialogues rich of mind games, and detailed characters psychology (little example: Erica feeling ashamed for his brother during his first school day on the bus).

I also noticed how sometimes in your stories you write about a main character dream in order to keep the narration not boring at all. You use dreams as an expedient to try everything, beside the story (not that much this time why?)...

And...Grrrrr, this story was all shiny, happy and colourful for like 75 chapters then it all turned dark by the mean psycho hands of Mandy xD That part is so engaging! I really feel bad for some characters and I really can't help but despise Mandy.

Peter was about to have a very good time making out with Lisa and what does he get?! Spending the night in full horror becoming some mad 15 yo new fairy-hamster XD

That story is so exciting and engaging so far! I love how creepy Mandy can be and I was shocked at her story about her hamster roasting alive in a microwave. Though I'm sure Peter will get out from this situation soonish. I sense Jessie and Suzanne will react very very badly and I don't know how Peter will convince them to let him stay in school.

I also feel bad for Lisa. She may be accused for lack of attention. I can't say if Sharon is involved or not in Peter's capture, but I hope she isn't.

Actually I'd prefer Peter to fall in Sharon's hand rather than Mandy's xD, if she hides a domineering side. I sense Sharon would be gentle and domineering at the same time, a bit like Carly but definitely not mad or overprotective. Mhh, maybe she'd be a strange mixture between Carly and Alison.

It was so exciting, breathtaking and angering at the same time...a big darkish cliffhanger. I really can't wait to read the next part. May I know when will you continue this story?

Sorry for my english.

Here I see a sort of Stanford prison experiment! Finally someone came up with this idea :D

26 little men the size of 5 centimeters would be like the equivalent of a thick beefsteak. She just coudn't help it! But now that she ate all those people, will she develop any complex? Will she develop a superiority complex or would she still feel bad about herself, the monster she became.

She loosened up about death, she killed her own friends in a raptus. Poor Dan offered himself like a lamb. I think she'll feel kinda bad later on and that she will switch between depression and homicidal.

How many little people are left inside the room? Do you intend to count menstruations in your story? Cuz starvation leads to period issues.

Transformation isn't my thing yet I must say this story is very enjoyable, well written and promising. Can't wait how's the interaction between the two characters going to develop. (Personally I wouldn't introduce new characters too soon, I love those stories where the intimacy between to friends is gradually twisted)

Keep going!

When your sister is the incarnation of the devil

Tell me there will be a chapter 2 to this story :O

I'm more and more convinced this is actually her way to show that she's in love with him <3

You foresaw my story! We both had a similiar idea. I loved it ;)

I wonder what would have happened if it was Pixie to shrink the bully, but destiny is always cruel to the weak

Oh wow this chapter was so funny xD At the end of the day Will is left with a "what the fuck did just happen", but I think also Laura realized she behaved akwardly odd. To a tiny who didn't grow up in the slums is unimaginable what big girls can do with their feet.