Penname: Marcarth [Contact] Real name:
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Summary:

A prince trades his freedom to become a giantess' pet in order to avoid an arranged marraige.


Categories: Giantess, Adventure, Breasts, BBW, Fantasy, Gentle, Giant, Mouth Play, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Brobdnignagian (51 ft. to 100 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, FM/m, M/f, M/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences, This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 69086 Read Count: 339614
[Report This] Published: January 14 2017 Updated: December 21 2018
Reviewer: Marcarth Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: December 22 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I remember this being one of the first stories I read on here, back when it was at about chapter 4

I was amazed when I saw that little "completed" tag on it and instantly jumped in where I left off. That was a fun two hours or so.

On the story itself, I found the storytelling, grammar and all that excellent, but I feel it could have done a little more in the erotic department. Still probably the best thing I've read on this site

 



Author's Response: I started off with big plans for lots of fetish and erotica in this story. However, as it developed, the story grew and became one that focused much more on Tor’s and Eric’s relationship and Tor’s struggle. I’m glad you came back and read it! It’s flattering. ^.^

Reviewer: Marcarth Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: December 22 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I remember this being one of the first stories I read on here, back when it was at about chapter 4

I was amazed when I saw that little "completed" tag on it and instantly jumped in where I left off. That was a fun two hours or so.

On the story itself, I found the storytelling, grammar and all that excellent, but I feel it could have done a little more in the erotic department. Still probably the best thing I've read on this site

 

Summary:

Guy, 19, has the shrinking disease, and his sexual thoughts shrink him.  His 16-year-old sister offers to seduce him to strengthen his resistance to sexual thoughts.  But she has her own plans for fun after he shrinks.

Size reduction as small as 1 inch.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Breasts, Body Exploration, Entrapment, Growing/Shrinking Out of Clothes, Incest, Mouth Play
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 67636 Read Count: 463871
[Report This] Published: January 18 2017 Updated: August 29 2018
Reviewer: Marcarth Signed starstarstarstar
Date: August 24 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Introduction

For the most part I love this story, there's good pacing and balancing and I like how each episode starts and ends in a similar way

If I did have a gripe it's that lauriesse's (was that her name?) character started to get on my nerves, and I was honestly hoping Guy would just punch her and end it.

But yeah, overall I liked it



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading/commenting.  I'm glad you liked the story overall.

Summary: Past Featured Story

A story of a professional and a new hire in a highly erotic field.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Butt, Couples, Entrapment, Humiliation, Insertion, Lesbians, Mouth Play, Muscle, Slave, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, FF/f, FM/f
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 62976 Read Count: 533251
[Report This] Published: October 01 2017 Updated: August 29 2023
Reviewer: Marcarth Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: February 15 2019 Title: Chapter 10: You and Me and Bad Dragon Makes Three

You just compared a vagina to elevator music.

You absolute madman, I had to stop reading because that fucking killed me.

The rest of its good too of course



Author's Response:

That's very kind of you. 

I like to imagine it worked in the context.

Summary:

Celebrities get the best toys. A sex-crazed story told from the perspective of a fresh-off-the-shelf toy and his new mistress, in a world where shrunken people are a luxury that only the wealthiest can afford. 


Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Breasts, Butt, Couples, Entrapment, Humiliation, Insertion, Lesbians, Mouth Play, Slave, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Dwarf (3 ft. to 5 ft.), Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.), Munchkin (2.9 ft. to 1 ft.), Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, FF/m, FM/f, FM/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 73861 Read Count: 475846
[Report This] Published: May 04 2018 Updated: November 01 2023
Reviewer: Marcarth Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: August 25 2018 Title: Chapter 1: First Day on the Job

This was some good shit, but i feel like it jumped into the deep end (I don't think I need to say what I mean there) too soon, and I think a few gaps between erotic stuff would also be nice

I do like the use of a celebrity, and you made the idea of being in a vagina while it gets fucked not seem completely disgusting, so props to ya



Author's Response:

Thank you for the kind words. I do not write this stuff with the pretense of telling any more story than is necessary to provide framework for the juicy bits, so the action starts within the first page and doesn't really let up.

This never struck me as the forum for meaningful character arcs, deep storylines, or bold discussions. Some people use it that way, and I respect that, but it's not my game. 

Reviewer: Marcarth Signed
Date: December 22 2018 Title: Chapter 1: First Day on the Job

Yup, me again

I see you've fallen into making a story that at least has the illusion of some kind of meaning, and the erotic stuff's still spectacular too, so that's great.



Author's Response:

Recently, I tripped and fell into a bookshelf, and one of the books fell out and hit me in the head. I fear it may have transferred some ideas of a storyline to me.

Don't worry. It'll work itself out soon enough.

Endless by Curse Crazy Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 110]
Summary: Past Featured Story

A creepy college student uncovers a book of curses, and the depths of her wild personality come to life. By conducting a ritual to shrink people, she is able to hold in her hands the target of her obsessed affections, along with other victims that cross her hexed path.

(If you enjoy the story, consider supporting me on Patreon~ https://www.patreon.com/cursecrazy

Or, just treat me to a coffee~ https://ko-fi.com/cursecrazy )


Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Adult 30-39, Crush, Entrapment, Fantasy, Humiliation, Lesbians, Slow Size Change, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.)
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 168220 Read Count: 248925
[Report This] Published: June 25 2018 Updated: May 02 2019
Reviewer: Marcarth Signed
Date: November 03 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter One

I don't think I've ever wanted a villain to get there comeuppance more than reading this

I was certain you were ending it with the way twelve way going, but it seems like that sweet revenge is going to take a little longer



Author's Response:

I hope Melanie getting detective punch'd in the face can tide everyone over for now. I know a lot of you guys want to see Melanie put into her place, I hear you! I hope you continue to enjoy the series and thank you for the review!