Reviewer: chainorchid Signed
Date: June 23 2019
Title: Chapter 1: Disclaimer, Arrival, Fly By
Wow. What a wonderful surprise to see a followup to Maze; even though the original has been around a long time, I first read it just a couple months ago and it left a strong impression.
I'll write some thoughts on Maze first. What I really enjoyed about it was the titular maze and Molly and Mike's (M&M's?) cooperation in getting through it. There are a few stories out there featuring large and small people having to work together to get through some kind of deadly obstacle course like this, but Maze does it better than any other I've read. It helps a lot that they are already comrades who are used to working together instead of strangers, and that there's a larger context where they're grounded and on the run. I liked the tossing scene, and I see that made its way into the follow-up, too. I also liked when she's tied up and he has to cut her free.
I also liked how Molly's scale was given out indirectly at the beginning. If I remember right, the first indication was a sentence that matter-of-factly gave the caliber of her handgun, and it was a figure you'd expect to see on an artillery piece or a battleship deck gun.
What I liked less was what came later. Molly's rampage on the bad-guy aliens felt too contrived and out-of-character, and wasn't really the kind of destruction I like. It was also hard to take the bad guys seriously since they were given no background (was the name "Dabesi" created by taking an anagram of "baddies" and subtracting one 'd'?) and were slaughtered so easily.
The ending with the portal felt drawn-out and confusing. There was a lot of description of the spatial layout, but I never really understood it. I had a similar problem with the space elevator construction site in the follow-up.
On to Hollowed Ground. I liked almost everything about it. In particular, everything Molly does in the flashbacks is great (picking at a tree "like it was a daisy", unexpectedly picking Mike up from the bottom of the ravine, etc). The amount of exposition seemed just right to me, and the pacing felt just right, too. The scenes all had enough room to breath, but also none of them overstayed their welcome.
I liked the illustrations, too. In particular the one of Rihanna in the old city was great.
I will say I was a bit disappointed by the ending. The sudden revelation that Mike has such one-of-a-kind, irreplaceable value that he can get anything he wants out of the government(s), plus a faction of independent AIs personally loyal to him, feels like a cop-out. And I would have liked to have seen Molly's point of view at the end; the ending leaves her ultimate feelings about Rihanna and Mike's past (and how much about it she learns or doesn't) unclear.