Penname: lfcfan [Contact] Real name:
Member Since: August 22 2010
Membership status: Member
Bio:

Hello! I'm a relatively new and young writer, GTS and in general too. English is not my native language, so I hope you'll understand if you read something in my stories that you find to be somewhat funny or weird-sounding, especially on my first works, but I try to improve all the time.


I usually like to write cruel stuff, I don't know why but that's the kind of genre I like, I think you will find the reason for that in most of my stories when I portray the psychological nature of my giantesses and why they do the things they do, but nevertheless I think I'm leaning towards gentle too, especially towards stories that have heavy character development.


I hope you like my stories and if you do, please do take the small time and effort to drop a review, whether it is just a thanks or a full review, especially one containing constructive criticism. Feedback helps a writer immensely on his writing, his morale and especially his drive to write more.


My DeviantArt page:


http://lfcfangts.deviantart.com/


 


Beta-reader: Yes
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Reviews by lfcfan
Birth by morsel Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4]
Summary: Mary gives birth and the offspring are in for a surprise...
Categories: Giantess, Crush, Incest, New World Order, Vore, Insertion
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1273 Read Count: 21419
[Report This] Published: April 09 2006 Updated: April 09 2006
Reviewer: lfcfan Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 25 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Birth

This is some of the weirdes stuff I've ever read, and I love it!

Property by PoisonPen Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 19]
Summary: Darcy, a harried building manager, makes an amazing discovery which allows her to deal permanently with some problem tenants: four college co-ed party girls. (Part 1 of 2)
Categories: Giantess, Crush, Feet, Entrapment, Humiliation, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5590 Read Count: 16165
[Report This] Published: August 21 2010 Updated: August 21 2010
Reviewer: lfcfan Signed
Date: August 22 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Great story...

 Question, aren't you Adrew Niells? If so, why didn't you post this through your old account?



Author's Response: I am indeed, but the account with "my" name wasn't created by me, so I have no access to it.

Summary:

Ayane from the Dead or Alive video game series finds a powerful ninja magic that makes her a permanent giantess. She quickly acts on her sadistic desires by luring several boys to their eventual deaths.

I would classify this story is completely pornographic, there is very little beating around the bush. The content is extreme, be forewarned. I set out to cover all the bases of objectionable content.

This is the first fan fiction I've ever written, but I've written many other stories. I enjoyed it so I searched the internet for a good place to share it.

As this is my first story here, I'd love to know what you think.


Categories: Watersports, Teenager (13-19), Butt, Crush, Entrapment, Feet, Growing Woman, Humiliation, Insertion, Violent, Vore, Scat
Characters: None
Growth: Giant (31 ft. to 50 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3689 Read Count: 23542
[Report This] Published: May 21 2011 Updated: May 21 2011
Reviewer: lfcfan Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: January 14 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Short story

Would love if you wrote more stories of this kind...

Status by Gtslover4 Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 19]
Summary:

Amber a normal high school girl decides to become a goddess at the expense of three cheerleaders at her school.


Categories: Violent, Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Humiliation, Slave, Insertion
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 10043 Read Count: 44913
[Report This] Published: July 26 2012 Updated: January 23 2014
Reviewer: lfcfan Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 09 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 The Plan

Your writing has definitely improved from the first chapter. It's getting interesting ideed. As a fan of violence, I hope Amber shows them what true evil means.

Power by Firestone Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3]
Summary:

A story about a woman with a lot of power.


Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Crush, Entrapment, Humiliation, Slave, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5362 Read Count: 6646
[Report This] Published: January 15 2013 Updated: January 15 2013
Reviewer: lfcfan Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: January 15 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I love those tales you spin. Would be great if we got some more background on Jo, but I fear that as usual, you won't continue your stories...

Fairy Terror by Jacksmith Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 38]
Summary:

A fairy is captured by a deranged girl and shown the crueler side of humanity.

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Categories: Teenager (13-19), Crush, Entrapment, Humiliation, Insertion, Mouth Play, Sci Fi / Fantasy, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.)
Size Roles: F/f
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2913 Read Count: 61692
[Report This] Published: May 29 2013 Updated: June 13 2013
Reviewer: lfcfan Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 14 2013 Title: Fairy Terror

This was incredibly good! I too am a fan of tinyone234, but the sole reason she'll never be one of my favorite authors is the fact that she never finishes her stories, but you do! 

Violence seems to be a rarity nowadays here in gtsworld, apart from you, tinyone234 and a some stories here and there, there are not enough woment who use their power as it should be used! 

Thanks for this, definitely going to my favorites! :)



Author's Response: Thanks very much for the review. I'm pretty rigid about finishing my stories, however long it may take.

Pionus by QuiteTheCharmer Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 11]
Summary:

Set in a fictional bronze-age world, a powerful, young, ambitious, and tactically genius warrior king finds himself with a very large challenge. This is my first one of these stories, so please give constructive criticism. 


Categories: Giantess, Crush, Mouth Play, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 8553 Read Count: 30303
[Report This] Published: July 01 2013 Updated: July 05 2013
Reviewer: lfcfan Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: July 05 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Victory

This is definitely an interesting story, but I'd love to see more background on the setting, the world. I'd love to know in what world they're living in, some back-story on how things came to be. Not that I'm asking you to write it just like that, but just to hint tibits here and there.

Gerald and scrymgeour have said pretty much everything there is to say about constructive criticism for this tory. But I feel I need to add one little detail that irks me.

You're saying that this is set on a Bronze Age world. I think it definitely isn't because you're using stuff like mounted cavalry and not chariots for a civilization that doesn't seem to be nomads, pikemen who can punch through the skin of a giantess instead of crude spearmen, swordsmen with pretty sharp blades instead of simple axmen, and especially Ballistas. 

This is definitely an Iron Age army and Pionus definitely resembles Alexander the Great, so this is probably set about a thousand years after the Bronze Age must have ended.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review, but the army composition aspect is certainly that of antiquity (particularly that of Alexander the Great).

Nice catch-on, realizing that Pionus was similar to Alexander the Great. You should also note that Alexander the great's footsoldier was in fact a pikeman armed with a bronze-age pike that utilized bronze tubing. He also utilized armoured cavalry to almost legendary levels (the Companion Cavalry), and utilized ballistas and catapaults. All inventions of antiquity. And the use of axes was certainly not prominent in bronze-age warfare, such as in Hellenistic Greece, or in Alexander the Great's army. There was an enormous overlap period between the iron and bronze ages, it was not just an overnight occurence. In fact, the Macedonian Sarissa utilized an iron tip, and bronze tubing and butt-piece. 

As for chariots, those became obsolete after the battle of Gaugemala when good ol' Alexander decided to invent an 'open square' strategy in which the horses would pass either into a row of pikes, or the soldiers would pull the men off the chariots when they closed in. We're assuming that this fantasy world has made similar breakthroughs. 

If I do get more reviews with similar complaints, I can change the description to say 'iron age', but that would not be accurate either. Again, thanks for reviewing, I'll definitely try to include more backstory. 

World of Silver by geeman Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 78]
Summary:

In a world where giants rule and humans are left to scrounge for scraps, a man named Tommy finds himself in the possesion of a mysterious silver-haired giantess.

 

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*Hey guys, I added drawing-less chapters for those that prefer to go: full imagination with their reading or those who don't like cartoony drawings or something. It's just an option!

Someone let me know if doing two versions of chapter's is breaking a rule and I'll take the extra ones down, thanks!


Categories: Adventure, Butt, Body Exploration, Crush, Feet, Entrapment, Gentle, Insertion, Mouth Play, Maternal, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Mega (501 ft. to 5279 ft.)
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 74011 Read Count: 226594
[Report This] Published: July 04 2013 Updated: July 30 2014
Reviewer: lfcfan Signed
Date: May 31 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Bios

Nice to see you update this again, Gadget! And yeah, the pics are an interesting touch and something I've been wanting to do myself too, but I just don't have the talent for drawing, or at least I don't have the level I would like to have, hehe.

 

Keep up the good work!



Author's Response:

Thanks, the drawing do add to it in my opinion. And I had fun drawing them so yeah!

Reviewer: lfcfan Signed
Date: June 03 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Bios

Haven't read the chapter yet, will do so later, but dude, really sexy drawing! You've inspired me to try my hand at it too! :D

(I will suck though, bad. I have absolutely no talent for it hehe.)



Author's Response:

Thanks! I wouldn't mins giving input on your drawings if you want.

Reviewer: lfcfan Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 14 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

Great chapter! Also, I find it a bit funny how we're giving our giantesses superhuman strength and powers, as if having our little guys be so powerless wasn't enough! And I'm definitely anticipating some sort of revenge on the other 'normal' giantesses, at least after Tommy gets comfortable with Kim.

And let me give some constructive criticism, I hope!

I know Tommy is in a situation which in reality is just impossible, we really couldn't imagine how somebody would really react to situations that Tommy experiences, we only can write stories about it. But that doesn't mean that Tommy has to be somewhat dim-witted. I'm only saying that I hope he figures it out quicker, because unless the humans in your story never tell night stories, he really should know what a Vampire is!

Also, less adverbs! This is a lesson that has been taught to me by everyone I've ever asked advice about writing. I never understood why, until I started trying to use as less adverbs as possible, and then I noticed the difference when I read what I wrote. It definitely makes your story better, so, you should try too! Always try to write a sentence so that you won't need to use an adverb. :)

Oh and yeah, passive voice too, but I'm having difficulties with that too, I still can't figure it out, hehe. 



Author's Response:

The adverbs thing is definitely a weakness of mine that I'll try to fix as the story goes on. And your right Tommy is kind of an idiot, but he'll start to figure things out soon enough, oh and I just posted a new chapter so check it out if you have time.

Reviewer: lfcfan Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 10 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

OK, you've got me hooked here. I love dominance, even though it's a gentle story, you're still keeping me on the edge! She has so much power over Tommy, she could do all the things Tommy's previous owner did to him, and some of them she really craves for it seems, yet she's still trying to keep herself from doing so! And it seems pretty hard to her.

Also, the twist is very interesting, it always amazes me how our little community can bring various genres together and morph them into GTS stories so easily. Keep it up dude!

Oh and one more thing, I don't know why, but for some reason Kim reminds me of Penny from The Big Bang Theory. Maybe it's the way she speaks, dunno. :)



Author's Response:

Im sure its not even a plot twist at this point, its really just he audience waiting for Tommy to find out...And yeah, she is gentle, and caring, but when she's horny or hungry, LOOKOUT!

Reviewer: lfcfan Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 05 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

Great story! Definitely interested in where this is going, and I like the ruthlessness part of it, as you know me I believe. I'm a huge fan of world-building, and I would definitely love to see the back-story exanded.

Some constructive criticism I hope, some things that I've learned while I wrote my stories.

IMO, thoughts should always be written in italics while speaches should be quotet as usual. And also, it's definitely not a rule, but I find that when you break the the story into paragraphs, I feel that when you switch from one character speaking to another, it should always be a new paragraph, even if it's mostly one-liners. It's easier to read the story that way, and it looks more... beautiful.



Author's Response:

Thanks, I'll definitely keep these things in mind. Although this isn't really going to be a violent story, well its gonna be violent, but its not the focus of the the story. And I did have some things italized but for some reason it didn't want to bring those changes over from my writting program.

The Castle by scrymgeour Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 7]
Summary:

The mythical history of a six-hundred-year-old ritual observance among the inhabitants of a remote, idyllic valley is revealed.


Categories: Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Adventure, Butt, Young Adult 20-29, Adult 30-39, Mature (40-49), Crush, Feet, Entrapment, Gentle, Insertion, New World Order, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Brobdnignagian (51 ft. to 100 ft.)
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 13484 Read Count: 31290
[Report This] Published: July 13 2013 Updated: July 17 2013
Reviewer: lfcfan Signed
Date: July 13 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

I'm intrigued. I have read none of the stories you've mentioned, but I get the idea behind it. 

But I'm interested to know, is there a sort of plot coming?



Author's Response:

I've built the narrative in a frame design -- meaning that the prologue and epilogue are separated from the main narrative & plot structure itself (in this case, by a story within a story). 

So that means all you see right now is the frame, which is mostly background information, a sketch of the customs and village life, and some clues about what's to come.

Thanks for reading. (I also need to get around to reading and reviewing some of the longer stories on this site, being written right now. Yours and gerald's and few others look pretty interesting, for instance. Soon.)

Summary:

Thousands of years ago a powerful and highly advanced civilization attempts to retrieve one of its most prized possessions from the surface of a planet inhabited by a race of giants.


Categories: Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Adventure, Young Adult 20-29
Characters: None
Growth: Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 28165 Read Count: 49164
[Report This] Published: July 26 2013 Updated: July 22 2014
Reviewer: lfcfan Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 15 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Great story AW! I don't know why I missed this earlier. It has great writing, pace and charcater development, just the things you need for an adventure story. And of course, you made me want to know what happens next!

But I do have some questions which I hope you'll clarify to me. You mentioned primitive humans on Earth's landmasses, while Atlantis is there too. Does this mean that there are two human races there? 

If so, considering that the Atlantians are near immortal and that the story is set in the past, does this mean that the characters like Athena are actually the gods from Greek mythology?

And judging by the title, I kind of see where this is heading for. :D



Author's Response:

Thank you Ifcfan I am pleased to hear that you enjoyed it. Especially since you are very accomplished in terms of Sci-fi giantess stories.

 

Regarding the questions.

1) I would say yes. Since the story takes place 37,000 years ago during the last Ice age, so if my knowledge of pre-history is accurate than there should be some Neanderthals living in what will eventually become Europe. As far as the story goes I can say that I never really considered that angle and figured everyone would just assume them to be modern humans.

2)I cannot spoil the ending, but considering Athena is named after a greek goddess and Michael is named after a biblical angel I will simply tell you that your head is in the right place.

Once again thank you for reading my story I hope to hear from you again. :)

 

Reviewer: lfcfan Signed
Date: April 25 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Wow! You've certainly took writing stories to a whole new level now. I'm truly impressed, well done!



Author's Response:

I'm glad you enjoyed this Ifcfan. As one of my best supporter it means a lot to hear you say that.

I guess I have to to something even crazier to top this. maybe I'll do hand-drawn illustrations?

Reviewer: lfcfan Signed
Date: April 06 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

An update! Seems like Michael will become an interesting hurdle in Nephilias path to greatness. Getting attached to people is the quickest way to make yourself vulnerable, so this development is certainly welcomed.



Author's Response:

More like Nephilia will be hurdle in Michaels path to greatness. Its easy to lose sight of your goals when there is a multi-ton women constantly glaring at you out of the corner of her eye.

Its interesting that you say that since in my opinion Nephilia is already vulnerable. However, chances are she will become even more so as time passes.

Reviewer: lfcfan Signed
Date: October 08 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

And another Greek god enters the scene! I'm liking this a lot :)

 



Author's Response:

Thanks for continuing to read Ifcfan.

The best part of using greek gods as characters is that I can utilize the various myths and legends about them to help develop their characters personalities.

Reviewer: lfcfan Signed
Date: December 08 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Nice addition, the beginnings of her change in character I guess! Hopefully we'll get to see more plot in the future chapters though, to keep it more interesting. :)

Also, you've been using IE until now? What century have you been living on? lol!



Author's Response:

Thank you Ifcfan. Its good to hear from you again.

And yes, Nephilia will be going through some behavioral changes in repsonse to these recent events.

As for my browser choice... apparently I have been living in the same century this story takes place it because IE sucks.

Crush by Firestone Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 5]
Summary:

Two sisters film a little video.


Categories: Feet, Young Adult 20-29, Crush, Humiliation, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8269 Read Count: 23530
[Report This] Published: August 12 2013 Updated: August 12 2013
Reviewer: lfcfan Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 12 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

@zephilia - Good luck getting a sequel from Tinyone234, hehe.

Nevertheless quality story as always from her, epsecially since we have the art to go with this too.



Author's Response:

Hey, I write sequels!

I just don't write endings

Summary:

A powerful female executive has a unique way of unwinding. Will your city be her next playground?


Categories: Giantess, Butt, Body Exploration, Crush, Feet, Humiliation, Insertion, Lesbians, Mouth Play, Slave, Toilet, Unaware, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Giga (1 mi. to 100 mi.)
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, FF/f, FF/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 9698 Read Count: 106361
[Report This] Published: October 18 2013 Updated: October 21 2013
Reviewer: lfcfan Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 19 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

This is awesome! Arrogance is such a defining trait in goddesses, isn't it? And she's got a perfectly good reason to be so, especially with the immense power that she holds over those beneath her feet where even her slightest and most mundane movements means the death of thousands!

Keep this up btw, I'm sure a lot more reviews will come by.



Author's Response:

More on the way soon. BTW: IFC is one of my fave chanels too.