A short monster vs giantess fight story. But with a twist.
I love Mr. G's work. Also Yes this was better than Godzilla!
A young lady paladin sets out on a quest to deal with an evil witch, and finds more than she bargains for in the process.
The original Marcella story; credit for the character Ranavalona belongs wholly to Kaneda.
I come to find that I shrink when I smell female's feet.
I like it. Just need more descriptive details as to what she looks like, her foot size/smell etc. Great start tho!
Tim is the neighborhood punk, torturing his family and neighbors every chance he gets. But a new 'Scared Straight' campaign by supernatural forces is going to make him atone... By putting him in very unpleasant circumstances, transforming and shrinking him as they see fit.
Just found this story it's awesome. Hope you come back... How about an unaware foot chapter?
What happens when an unhappy teen discovers an app on her phone which allows her to affect the world in devestating ways. This is what happens.
Please continue with the feet chapters! Maybe have the smell and sweat of her sock suffocate and drown ,people, have her put her toes through and crush with her toes and feet!
The next chapter will be dedicated to the effects of the sock. The changes are actually larger than expected since the sock is so big!
A young nurse arrives at her working place at the hospital to find everyone has disappeared. The police is completely in the dark and this is only the beginning...
I liked it, and am patiently awaiting the feet parts!
This is the story of a 20 year old guy named Paul. After falling vicitm to his Sister's black magic, Paul begins his descent into the world of feet.
Are you going to continue soon ;(? I love this story!
Author's Response:
Sorry, yea, I'm going to continue it, I've just been busy with school, finals and all that stuff. I'll try to get it within the week. I'm just trying to think of certain events that will happen later in the story, so I can tie them in earlier.
Replied to your email :)
Ftfeet Ibthibk you've disappeared from the community but if you do see this would you be willing to write a story commission? Your writing style and story telling in this genre is second to none!
Author's Response:
Perhaps. Lay it on me. What'd you like to see?
That's what we needed to wrap up this instant classic! I await your next story whenever it comes out with much Anticipation :)!
I think it was a good ending that I hope leads to a sequel or Epilogue chapter. Some loose ends need tying I believe. Like Megan researching Magic does she find anything? If not maybe a few sentences about Rosie's final spell being a memory wipe on the family. Or maybe Megan tries to battle Rosie with some magic she learned but has no chance and joins Paul in his fate! Just constructive criticism as I loved the story, ending just felt like more needs to be added!
FTFEET please please continue this story :(
The last chapter will be uploaded soon. Thank you for your support.
Please continue this story!!! :*(
Hope the next chapter comes soon! This is my favorite story on here in a long time!
Hope the next chapter comes out soon!!!
I Just love this story. Another Excellent chapter! As the days continue to progress I hope Megan still smells her own feet occassionally and is in utter disbelief at how bad they get!!! Also can't wait to see what Rosie is up to!!! The wait in between chapters is Brutal because the story just makes me wanna read more!!
Omg this is so good! I was reading the second chapter and couldn't help but thinking, what if since Megan is the only one who seems to care about him, she tries telling their mom about Rosie's Magic, but it turns out Rosie cast a spell so that she is unable to tell her and everytime she tries it makes her actually torture Paul somehow with her feet? Like it makes Megan's feet stinkier or makes her out Paul under her feet and unable to remove him or something. And Rosie laughs so hard because eventually she tells Megan why she can't seem to tell mom about the Magic and why Megan has been unable to stop torturing Paul.
Author's Response:
I like the idea! I think I'll use a variation of it later on in the story. Thanks!
Gets Better and Better!!! Can't wait for more! Also I'm glad you liked my idea about Rosie from my other review and can't wait to see it implemented!
Great Chapter. He still has a ways to go I think bro. We haven't seen Rosie or Megan in awhile. Also don't forget my idea from an early review either ;). Keep it up!
It's soo nice coming home from a long day and seeing this story updated! Please continue soon!
