Reviewer: gtsfan2001 Signed 
Date: May 31 2022
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
Well I didn't like Miss Whiskers! Not just that I wasn't expecting a
futa story to cross over into bestiality. It's a matter of size. A
cat is just too big. Even a horny hamster would be too big. Futa mouse
would have been more appropriate. But, it still doesn't seem to fit. I
think you would have been better off without it.
Thanks for the
reference to the futa sisters story over on writing.com (never would
have found that motherlode of futa content). There's enough material
for many more beanstalk chapters.
However, here's what I would
have liked to see you do (instead of Miss Whiskers) if the objective was
to get Jack Futa Fucked. He needs to get a girl pregnant to lift the
curse. Maybe he'll succeed with the queen. But, I'm sure she'll want
to hedge her bets. The queen should command that great witch you
introduced to shrink one of her subjects down down to Jack's size so he
can "breed" her. Preferably a criminal who isn't too keen on the idea.
Another adversary (or maybe later an ally) for Jack
Author's Response: Now that you mention it, I believe you're right. A cat may be too big, wrong animal choice there. I guess my calculations were wrong from the beginning. I wanted a toe sized Jack to deal with an animal a couple times his size but then the cat would look really small compared to the actual giants, hence the 40 foot furball Miss Whiskers. But anyways, it is what it is...sorry if it was a major turn off.
