Penname: abc3643 [Contact] Real name: I.M.Male aka Jean D'eau
Member Since: November 30 2009
Membership status: Member
Bio:

I am male.


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Summary:

A supposedly easy burglarly into a high end estate yields much more than pilfered loot


Categories: Entrapment, Giantess, Young Adult 20-29, Butt, Insertion, Mouth Play, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 83444 Read Count: 203432
[Report This] Published: May 09 2015 Updated: October 28 2015
Reviewer: abc3643 Signed
Date: May 16 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

In Chapter 11....

Tbere's no such thing as Corinthian leather.  That was a bullshit marketing phrase to sell Chrysler Cordobas in the 1970s.

Also, with all of the similar sounding names, it gets confusing.

Other than light, good so far!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the feedback, I have amended the description. I'm am pleased there are elements to this tale you enjoy!

Summary:

Brian, a 24 year old Physics professor, invents a device which allows him to change size. He uses it to shrink himself and get closer to a female student who has become the object of his obsessions. 


Categories: Giantess, Body Exploration, Butt, Feet, Gentle, Unaware, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 26482 Read Count: 207604
[Report This] Published: May 29 2015 Updated: August 21 2015
Reviewer: abc3643 Signed
Date: May 30 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Amplitudo Novo

There are no 24 year old physics professors.  LOL



Author's Response: LOL, there are some who are even younger. http://www.redorbit.com/news/science/1112528815/new_physics_discovery_by_andrew_magdy_kamal_worthy_of_winning But yes, physics professors who are only 24 years old are a rare bunch.

Summary: When young Joe hits rock bottom, his only help comes in the form of his older sister.
Categories: Teenager (13-19), Breasts, Butt, Feet, Footwear, Gentle, Growing/Shrinking Out of Clothes, Humiliation, Incest, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play, Odor, Slave, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m, FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 6438 Read Count: 138907
[Report This] Published: October 04 2015 Updated: November 11 2015
Reviewer: abc3643 Signed
Date: October 16 2015 Title: Chapter 1: A bad start

Try rewritting this without "You".  No work of fiction is ever really written like that.  Give "You" a name and write it in the 3rd person or 1st person.

 

 



Author's Response: Actually, I like using 'you' in some of my stories as makes the reader feel like that it's happening/happened to them.

Reviewer: abc3643 Signed
Date: October 16 2015 Title: Chapter 1: A bad start

Author's Response: Actually, I like using 'you' in some of my stories as makes the reader feel like that it's happening/happened to them.

Actually, most readers don't like that.  It makes them feel like puppets and its forced and unreal.  You describe an action "You" takes and your reader thinks "I wouldn't do that."  Immediately, the reader begins to have issues.  Notice that there is not a single play or work of published fiction which uses this technique and it is primarily for that reason.

Evem on TV shows like Blues Clues or Dora the Explorer, when the characters try to engage the toddlers watching the show, the character asks the toddler's questions nit doesn't give orders.

So, you have likely a fine story, but you should consider writing again - create a new story with the same theme - but from a different perspective.  In fact, that's what's happening right now with 50 Shades of Grey: now there is a new novel told from Grey's perspective.



Author's Response: Just saying I'm not the first to do this on this website and I won't be the last

Reviewer: abc3643 Signed
Date: October 17 2015 Title: Chapter 1: A bad start

Author's Response: Just saying I'm not the first to do this on this website and I won't be the last

I know and I feel bad like I am picking on you.  You just happen to be the straw that broke the camel's back and perhaps that's because I am under the impression that you are female and that it seems that you actually have some talent.  I want to encourage that and my criticism is actually constructive.  So, if not this story, consider writing your next one without the "You" construct.



Author's Response: Ok then. Plus I'm not female

Author's Response: Ok then. Plus I'm not female

Little Learning by AprilMJ Rated: PG starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 93]
Summary:

With the help of her teaching assistant, a small-town high school teacher intends on properly educating a class of grade 9 boys on the topic of sexual education using rather unconventional methods. Together, she and her students will embark on a semester of exploration, discovery, and exhilarating fun. After all, wouldn't everyone benefit from a hands-on sex ed class?


Categories: Adventure, Breasts, Body Exploration, Butt, Couples, Crush, Entrapment, Feet, Gentle, Insertion, Legwear, Scat, Slave, Unaware, Vore, Watersports
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 183559 Read Count: 222872
[Report This] Published: December 05 2020 Updated: April 28 2023
Reviewer: abc3643 Signed
Date: January 24 2021 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Research Trip

Happy Birthday!!



Author's Response:

Thanks V!

76 by SophieLenna Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 16]
Summary:

Katie shrinks and trains tinies to be good and proper slaves. After almost a year and a half, she decides she wants to train a tiny for herself. Unfortunately, his training may come at the expense of the other tinies in her care.

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This is a cruel giantess story, and I hope to make it crueler as it continues. I hope you enjoy!


Categories: Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Crush, Destruction, Entrapment, Feet, Footwear, Humiliation, Mouth Play, Odor, Slave, Violent, Watersports
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 26654 Read Count: 70863
[Report This] Published: May 30 2021 Updated: November 02 2023
Reviewer: abc3643 Signed
Date: June 03 2021 Title: Chapter 1: Ch 1: 76

I just wanted to welcome you to our community SophieLenna.

Thank you for your story.  Please keep it up!

 

 

 



Author's Response:

Omg thank you! I was a lurker for some time, but you know how to make a girl feel welcomed :)

The Little People by chulu Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3]
Summary:

So I remember the Twight Zone episode with the astronaut finding people smaller than ants and having his way with them. So this story features Abbie Miller a character in some of my other stories. So come along and read about a 5 foot tall petite woman taking over a planet.


Categories: Giantess, New World Order, Sci-Fi, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: Mega (501 ft. to 5279 ft.)
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 4393 Read Count: 11355
[Report This] Published: September 21 2021 Updated: October 19 2021
Reviewer: abc3643 Signed
Date: September 21 2021 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Yes, that's correct.  The episode was "The Little People".  However, you might be interested in these other episodes:

"The Invaders" (a famous episode)

"Stopover In A Quiet Town"

"The Fear" (2nd to last episode)

 

Summary:

Two girls want to take a break from their stressful everyday lives. However, what happens when their trip takes a drastic and mysterious turn and they end up in a world not like the one they are used to? Journey with Liz and Vicky as they try to figure out what is going on and whether they can make it back to their world!

**Gullivera-type story**


Categories: Giantess, Adventure, Young Adult 20-29, Adult 30-39, Butt, Couples, Destruction, Feet, Gentle, Lesbians, New World Order, Odor, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, FF/f, FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 30087 Read Count: 29244
[Report This] Published: December 01 2021 Updated: February 28 2022
Reviewer: abc3643 Signed
Date: December 11 2021 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Minor comment:

Don't bother rewriting, but these 'Lilliputians', so to speak, would not be almost inaudible to these girls.  Small organisms like mice can definitely make loud noises.  I felt you should know for any other works that you may write.

Summary:

Election experts were baffled by the straight vertical line spike increase of votes for Biden that happened in the wee hours of the morning when most of the country was sound asleep. In all their years, they had never seen an election quite like that of 2020, where a huge dump of votes went 100% for one candidate and 0% went to the other, propelling that candidate to victory against all odds. It was statistically improbable for this to happen naturally, and no one could ever figure it out how 100% of the votes in the dump all went to Biden. But Kamala Harris knew.


Categories: Giantess, Middle Age (50+), Destruction, Entrapment, Humiliation, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play, New World Order, Scat, Sci-Fi, Slave, Violent, Vore, Watersports
Characters: None
Growth: Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 2057 Read Count: 3225
[Report This] Published: December 08 2021 Updated: December 08 2021
Reviewer: abc3643 Signed
Date: December 09 2021 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

The election experts weren't baffled and those that you claim were baffled election experts are experts in idiocy.


The "spike" as you say is simply do to votes coming in high-population urban areas - the places where 1) they usually vote Democratic and 2) take the longest to count the votes.  This "spike" ALWAYS occurs.


Please don't bring politics, race, or religion into stories.



Author's Response:

I'll bring what I like as per the 1st amendment right of free speech.