Penname: pseudoclever [Contact] Real name:
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Summary:

Seeking genetic perfection a young college student finds himself surrounded by girls who are more than willing test subjects for his formula. Things quickly get out of hand. 


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Gentle, Humiliation, Growing/Shrinking Out of Clothes, Adventure, Breasts, Growing Woman, Lesbians, Odor, Slow Size Change
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: FF/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 52297 Read Count: 180199
[Report This] Published: October 22 2015 Updated: October 22 2015
Reviewer: pseudoclever Signed
Date: March 23 2016 Title: Chapter 1: First Day

Okay, yes. This is immediately one of the best-written stories I've seen around here in quite some time. I'm caught been reviewing this like a forum story (where I'd simply gush about how clever the premise is, and how much the dialogue sparkles) and reviewing it like a novel by a professional author (where I'd have to point out that the unnamed girl seems a little one dimensional at this point, and the conversation turn was a bit awkward.) I wonder if you were writing to a word count limit. In any case, yeah I'm on board.

Reviewer: pseudoclever Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 26 2016 Title: Chapter 17: Promotion

I'm going to have to jump off the bus here. There are elements here that remind me of real life events, and the story-telling is good enough to make that unpleasant. Thoughts so far:

*As someone who does biochem for a living, your science is good enough that I can whistle past it things which are "impossible," despite some obvious allowances youve made for plot purposes. Eg, having a lab lets you do all science, the speed with which changes occur. Good job there.

*The descriptions of the girls' physical appearance and outfits are top-notch, and the sex scenes are amazing - though I will say you're trying to paint such a complicated picture that you can get a little bogged down describing movement. I was going to say you could use more detail about the actual growth process, until the chapter with Priscilla in the hotel room which was just...WOW.

*The overall story and world-building is great, and keeps me engaged and interested. Priscilla is a contradiction, inconsistent, which could be sloppy characterization, but I strongly suspect you're doing it on purpose. 

*I do have to note our protagonist is the only male in the story.

Overall A+, even if some of them character interactions are a little triggering. Seriously great work.

Summary:

Hi everybody, we have another very sexy piece of writing by MistyVixen (mistyvixen.blogspot.com/). She's been writing erotica for years, including size-fiction, and she was kind enough to write us this exclusive piece!

(WARNING! This story is sexually explicit, and is therefore 18+)

The story is set in a fantasy world, and it involves a young hunter named Mark who is lost in the woods. When he comes across a cabin occupied by a 9ft tall woman, things begin to get steamy!

We should have more writing on the way, and we're thinking about having a little "Writers' Meet-up" at the convention as well, where size writers and readers can swap stories, writing tips, and generally share in their passion.

Tickets: https://www.eventbrite.com/e/nyc-sizecon-tickets-20353700466
SizeCon Merchandise: http://www.giantesslove.com/sizecon/shop/
www.sizecon.com
www.facebook.com/SizeCon/
http://www.twitter.com/nycsizecon
www.furaffinity.net/user/sizecon

 


Categories: Fantasy, Gentle
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6650 Read Count: 8870
[Report This] Published: January 28 2016 Updated: January 28 2016
Reviewer: pseudoclever Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 27 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Fantastic!  Thank you so much for sharing!