Reviewer: BlueDream Signed
Date: January 19 2020
Title: Chapter 1: Part 1/2
I like this very much. Especially for some reason the paragraph where she says "fuck you" to his assumptions about her motives, then immediately after explains how and why she cares.
Might be she'll reveal some true intentions later on, but I like to believe her, and that wanting to be there for someone you feel for, even when they've just been frustrating and hurtful to you (which you haven't hesitated to let them know), is a thing. It just reads very honest and mature.
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you feel this way about the dialogues and the mood. As well as that you're enjoying the story. I try to make my characters appear at least a bit believable and it's always nice to hear I did something right. : )
I have a firm idea of what will happen next but I can assure you the overall tone will remain gentle. Doesn't change the fact I did not envision a happy ending for this story, but I'm sure you know that by now.