Nami was on her way to a business meeting back in Japan, however her plane is caught in a freak storm and crash lands in a strange kind of jungle.
Great story - one of the best I've read in a long while.
I love the way you convey the giant girl's amusement and uncaring cruelty, and I love the pov from the shrunken woman also. You manage to provide rich detail of her experience without getting gory or focusing on pain, which is no mean feat when someone's being slowly squished and brutalized.
I also loved the scene where the girl spits on her. That was the scene that did it for me while I was reading.
I hope to see much more of your work in the future.
Hey, i know its been a long time since the review, so sorry for not replying! But thanks for taking the time to drop me a note, it was and is much appreciated :) Also knowing what people like in my writing gives me a good direction for how my other storys run ^_^
