Size-fetish writer. I dream of giantesses, but I write shrink fantasy. I read Gentle, but I write everything else. Go figure.
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A story of multiple perspectives...
This is pretty good. The action is clear, and I like the shift in perspective between the two chapters. There are a number of incomplete sentences, however, possibly meant to capture a moment or add to the atmosphere. That might be accentuated with paragraph breaks.
A man is hired to slay a giant by the king for a hefty sum of gold. However, when he finds that the giant is actually a giantess, and furthermore not a real harm to anyone, things change, and a love starts to blossom.
The king continues to be evil, though I'm surprised how weak he is when confronted. I had wondered whether he was an actual devil or something. And I like Sturgis's reprise, even if he's not completely reconciled with Matt.
Now, was Amelia lying to Matt or the little boy when she gave her age...
Good on Janos for sticking to his guns, as it were, futile as it was. And good on Matt for finally doing some growth work of his own. And it looks like Amelia converted a GTS fan around the same age it happened to me. Awesome.
One of my friends asked me to listen to Dimmu Borgir, back in the day. Never heard of them again until Metalocalypse had the band eating at Dimmu Burger one night.
More hatred for the king. More sympathy for Amelia, trying to do the right thing (though I would've paid money to be that small child for a moment). Matt being confronted with his own conscience was a very clever twist at this juncture, actually, and I enjoyed that a lot.
Oh Matt, so wrapped up in himself. So conflicted, so chained to the past. Won't that idiot just accept the best love he's going to find? Nobody admires him when he's like this. I love the inkling that Sturgis is losing his tolerance for the king.
Matt, despite physical prowess, is still an immature boy. I think he really comes off as childish in this piece.
The conflict mounts. Sturgis is a developed character now, and he gets better. I liked the scene of Matthew tending to Amelia's wounds, as well. He has an advantage there.
he's an interesting character, and i think he somewhat redeems himself in the end.
I like the colorful expression, "vigilante tears". Very good, finding a new way to describe something familiar. I would not mind being apprehended by a cute and drunk giantess, unlike this guy.
id be down as long as she was a happy drunk.
Huh, Blind Guardian's real. Kind of a clever working into the storyline, too. I'm very attracted to the idea of getting to poke through a giantess's collection of odds and ends. The story's moving along at a good pace, suitable for what it is.
Yesssssss, blind guardian is a real live act. i was verrrrryyyyy influenced by the music i listened to at the time (I was fresh out of high school at the time), and it just seemed like a nice piece to go with it. the band actually makes an appearance in the sequel (oh god it burns to think about. so young, so dumb)
I appreciate her cuteness, both in physique and mannerism, along with the occasional reminder of her sheer size. I like how this is playing itself out, in general. It's a fun read and I care what happens next.
Cute is what i aim for :)
Cute conflict. I like how Matt reconciles pretty quickly to the situation after a few false starts. What's more exciting is a cultured, reasonable giantess living in the wilderness... young as she is.
Sad to say the idea wasnt mine- the credit goes to Pixis for that one. Still, the idea intrigued me, and i felt that it might be interesting for someone's schema get shattered by someone who broke that stereotype. I also reckoned Amelia to be a somewhat independent type of gal.
Good conflict and a nice twist. It's interesting to learn what the humans expect of giant biology: women don't exist or they hide back while the men roam around... could be anything. And that a seasoned hunter could have a moment's pause is very telling.
always pause for the pussy.
Nice start, nice world-building. The atmosphere really comes through and we know what to expect in future chapters.
*notices more reviews for this story* wait wtf *notices your name* HOLY SHITSTACKS
Poor Amelia, all those hopes and fears, the conflict between the world she wants to see and the world she's in. I like how Matt finagled his way through Sturgis's interrogation, though the first time through I missed his surname and thought he was separate from this Sir Rich character. Bit of a change-up midstream.
wasnt much for editing at that time of my life. fun fact- i was between high school and university at the time of writing, and my parents had gone up to South Dakota for the Sturgis Motorcycle Rally, and i had the house all to my lonesome for a week, hence the name.
Rin performs regularly at the Sugoi Neko. Each night she chooses a lucky assistant to join her.
Great writing, nice characterization, very good pace.
Faye discovers a flyer for Cherry, a local adult store that transforms men into female sex toys.
This was a lot of fun. Looking forward to seeing Olivia get down to business with Eli.
A bullied 18-year-old girl is given a gift that allows her to get revenge...by growing.
Well written and thought out. I like the generation of her into a giantess, the emotional build-up that sparked it. And I always like a high school revenge story.
This was fantastic. It was eminently entertaining, a nice puzzle to start with that slowly unfolded to reveal the larger plot. Gwendolyn was so easy to picture, and Nella was a delight to meet and witness. The writing here is so playful and fun, I really want to see the rest of this series.
A man teaches a couple why you shouldn't be rude to your server.
WARNING: Very cruel, and very sick. Don't read if giant cocks put you off.
There's some M/f and also some M/m
Wow, intense. Nice pace, nicely understated, allowing the shock to bear itself out. Main character has a great voice, good sense of humor. I really appreciated the light touch in the narration, rather than putting too much energy into certain details or actions like some writers might be tempted to do. This is a great standalone, though it strongly suggests prior and later episodes. Very well done.
Thank you for reading and leaving a review. I'm glad you enjoyed it. This one was more self indulgent than my other recent stuff so that's probably why the voice felt so strong. When I'm at my strongest writing, that lack of seriousness creeps into the narration. I feel like whenever I try to write too "seriously" my stuff starts to lack flavor. It's why none of my "fantasy" stories have ever really taken off, because I lose my voice along the way while trying to worldbuild and take everything too seriously.
Thanks for your kind words.
Some sorority girls end up in a really unfortunate situation.
Very imaginative, nice reality-bending. Again, no explanation and none needed: they simply find themselves in a bizarre situation and scramble to piece it together, to no avail. Cute, in a way, in that they're witness to the everyday foulness of a young man who's completely unaware of them (that itself is a nice twist). Very entertaining.
I'm glad you liked it. I thought of this story one night (you'll never guess what I was doing lol) and thought it was so unique that I had to share it. Not a lot of transformation stories about, and the positive feedback on this one definitely makes me want to write more. Another thing that isn't explored enough is tinies being subjected to the foulness of a young man. We are just the foulest creatures.
A shrunken civilization in a bedroom. Who could resist?
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Good opening exposition and tension. Very excited to see what happens next. This really could go in any direction...