Penname: Aborigen [Contact] Real name: Aborigen
Member Since: May 18 2009
Membership status: Member
Bio:

Size-fetish writer. I dream of giantesses, but I write shrink fantasy. I read Gentle, but I write everything else. Go figure.


Published Stories at Smashwords: http://j.mp/AborigenGTS


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Summary:

Natalie was unhappy with her body until now. She found a way to change it, and she wants to share the news with her best friend who was also unhappy, but the change had some minor complications...


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Giantess, Body Exploration, Gentle, Instant Size Change, Lesbians
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.)
Size Roles: F/f
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 6467 Read Count: 30317
[Report This] Published: August 08 2010 Updated: October 15 2011
Reviewer: Aborigen Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: October 16 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Very interesting development. It's so funny, all the girls with unspoken desires, the same desires, who have to learn to overcome them slowly. Guess there's no way to get around that.



Author's Response:

I'd love to hear your take on said desires =)

Reviewer: Aborigen Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: October 16 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Very good dialogue between the girls. It moves the plot along nicely, and I feel the girls are well represented.

Reviewer: Aborigen Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: October 16 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

The flashback with Kim and her brother was very well placed. Good background on Kim, filling in the gaps. I look forward to seeing where this goes, now that the three girls are more or less on the same page.

Catfight XL by Vaalser4 Rated: X starstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 12]
Summary:

A giant alien lands on Earth, soon followed by another. The two start a catfight, the USA is their battleground.


Categories: Giantess, Crush, Feet, Growing Woman
Characters: None
Growth: Giga (1 mi. to 100 mi.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8878 Read Count: 67202
[Report This] Published: October 16 2011 Updated: October 16 2011
Reviewer: Aborigen Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: October 16 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

"...but the fight was and Marian back in the ship over before a nuke was fired." Lines like that need to be tightened up, because they stand out against all the really good writing here. I did like the resolution and Luke's ingenuity. This is a creative series with some very good highlights and entertainment.



Author's Response:

Thanks! Corrected it.

Reviewer: Aborigen Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: October 16 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Some of the details you include are very useful, like the village stuck to Marcia's back. The action seems to follow the girls as they enlarge, so their height remains constant while the world around them shrinks. Maybe a couple POV descriptions would be welcome, what the humans see when they look up at the enormous women.

Reviewer: Aborigen Signed starstarstarstar
Date: October 16 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Good dramatic tension in this chapter. It's interesting to see the dynamic between Paul, Luke, and Dennis as well. Marcia's a nice, classic villain, it sounds like. I look forward to seeing what comes next.

Reviewer: Aborigen Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: October 16 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

The action moves pretty quickly, doesn't it? I like the premise, the race for the objects, and the allusions to the alien society. Good writing, but you'll want to go over it all one more time to clean up a couple spots.

Summary:

Hanna is turned into her best friend's morning coffee.


Categories: Transformation
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 2103 Read Count: 15999
[Report This] Published: October 16 2011 Updated: October 16 2011
Reviewer: Aborigen Signed starstarstarstar
Date: October 16 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This is a highly imaginative story! Very well written and lots of fun. I don't even feel the need to know why Hanna originally turned into coffee--it sounds ridiculous to say--because I can accept the story for what it is. Good examination of consciousness splintering off, and I like the level of sensuality for a humorous piece like this.

Julia by Jacksmith Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 450]
Summary:

Five shrunken strangers become playthings in the twisted fantasies of a psychotic teenage girl and must work together if they ever hope to get out of her clutches alive.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Adventure, Young Adult 20-29, Adult 30-39, Butt, Couples , Crush, Entrapment, Feet, Gentle, Humiliation, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play, Slave, Unaware, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 76 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 134130 Read Count: 1084041
[Report This] Published: November 05 2011 Updated: July 20 2015
Reviewer: Aborigen Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: November 13 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Act I: Prisoner, Chapter 1: Good Morning

I would've liked a little more attention to Jim's experience, slipping from the glass into Julia's mouth. It went kind of quick!



Author's Response:

i think you entirely missed the point of jim; he was meant to give a crash course in what julia was willing to do, the main and important characters are the ones being focused on now

Reviewer: Aborigen Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: November 13 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Misbehavior

It's pretty good writing, I'm following the action, but it's hard to be attracted to mathematics lessons from a gigantic teenage girl. What's with her fixation on class lessons?



Author's Response:

well, first of all, everyone has their own attraction, so if this isn't your thing that's fine, but the point then isn't even on the lessons, it's on her unique madness and how controlling she is

Powershift by Beneathyou Rated: R starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 19]
Summary:

My friend Kierin wished she could be a giantess and a goddess. This is what happens when I make her dreams come true. 

 

 

(This is my first story, so any constructive criticism is very much appreciated!)

 

(Dont let the number of chapters turn you away, they are short compared to most stories)

 

 


Categories: Giantess, Butt, Crush, Feet, Growing Woman, Humiliation, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play, Slave, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Giga (1 mi. to 100 mi.), Giant (31 ft. to 50 ft.), Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.)
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 15892 Read Count: 128011
[Report This] Published: March 06 2012 Updated: April 20 2012
Reviewer: Aborigen Signed starstarstarstar
Date: March 18 2012 Title: Chapter 2: The First to Go

You're very strong on dialogue. I like that you can create genuine conversations and that each of the characters sound consistent. Try not to form sentences with complicated, winding structure--just state what happens. If a sentence runs too long, think about breaking it up into two or three.



Author's Response:

Thank you! Yea i've noticed i have that problem.....

Kyra by little mikey Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 96]
Summary:

A loving father of one inexplicably starts shrinking.  Unfortunately for him, his daughter soon realizes that she doesn’t have to take orders from him anymore – and their relationship starts to take an entirely different turn …

 


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Humiliation, Incest, Slow Size Change
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Dwarf (3 ft. to 5 ft.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences, This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 199743 Read Count: 716655
[Report This] Published: March 06 2014 Updated: September 07 2014
Reviewer: Aborigen Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: February 16 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Intro

Good character establishment. Kyra's sassy attitude comes out clearly, and the father seems disarmed when dealing with a fiery teenage girl. It's unfortunate they don't seem to have any warm moments of friendliness, but I guess this is setting up what comes next. Very well written, nice pace.

Summary: I've recently started getting a nice big group of people to collaborate with on various parts of the internet. After some deliberation, I've decided to post the results here.

EVERY CHAPTER IS A NEW STORY! Individual co-authors are credited on the chapter they helped with! The story has many tags, but I've made sure to note individual chapter tags on each story!
Categories: Destruction, Giantess, Butt, Crush, Feet, Gentle, Humiliation, Muscle, Slave, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 20939 Read Count: 77602
[Report This] Published: June 27 2014 Updated: July 01 2014
Reviewer: Aborigen Signed
Date: March 24 2018 Title: Chapter 5: There's No Place Like Home

I know it as co-written, but this definitely has the wry twist of Emma Gear's influence. She's known for exploring the literal interpretation of a fantasy and walking it out to its logical extremes. What happens when the fetishist finds himself ejected from his masochistic paradise? This is a bracing study of a human broken down by his own twisted desires, his malfunction when the dream ends, and the callousness of a woman who disavows any responsibility for him. Hell, everyone's broken here: she kicks him out when she feels something. Everyone loses, some take it worse than others, but this is an engaging, intriguing story that one has to see through to the end.

Reviewer: Aborigen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 24 2018 Title: Chapter 2: Hollywood Magic

Usually I don't go for the fanfic, grabbing an actual person and centering a size-fantasy around them, but this worked so well. The real twist, against all odds, was that she cared about the tiny people she had been ravaging. That's so rare! Usually the gigantic people relish in their power, but in this case, once the truth had been revealed to Alexis she championed them and turned her strength to good. That's fascinating! And the fact that she had such an ardent fan, a little lover to move her, that was really sweet to see. Once again, ably narrated and depicted by Emma Gear's passion and imagination. This was a delightful work.

Summary: Part of ETZ's aristocracy setting where size is determined by wealth.

A poor woman in an even poorer section of town has some secrets up her sleeve.
Categories: Violent, Giantess, Butt, Destruction, Feet, Humiliation
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.), Giga (1 mi. to 100 mi.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: Aristocracy
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5062 Read Count: 14209
[Report This] Published: August 24 2014 Updated: August 24 2014
Reviewer: Aborigen Signed
Date: March 24 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Such a fascinating premise, the correlation of wealth and very physical worth and potence. Staring on such a small scale, too, watching someone relinquish most of their power just to fuck around with the peons. You really evoked great emotion with Joe's desperation, his paltry aspirations, so easily quashed by a power-monger to whom cruelty is only a few minutes' entertainment. This was an emotionally laden piece.

Darts by JDO Rated: R starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 4]
Summary:

Jealous girl, small person, dartboard. Figure it out.


Categories: Giantess, Young Adult 20-29
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2805 Read Count: 5704
[Report This] Published: August 27 2014 Updated: August 27 2014
Reviewer: Aborigen Signed
Date: May 24 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I hear ya. Most of my stories here are from 2000, I don't use those words or have those thoughts anymore. Thinking of rewriting everything...

It makes sense that this was a "what if" story because it leaped right out of the gate. All the exposition came through brief reminiscing, but we were right in the thick of it from the start, which is excellent for a short story or an action novel. That's the way to do it.

Reviewer: Aborigen Signed starstarstarstar
Date: May 21 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This is an excellent premise with perfect tension between the characters. It needs one round of revision to spread out some of the description, make it slower in the spaces between the dramatic bursts. I'm not sure how the interior thoughts should be treated, whether we should be aware of the private thoughts of each person, but if the reader has full omniscience, that should also be made consistent throughout. The characters are nicely developed to work with each other and I enjoyed this tremendously.



Author's Response:

Thanks for taking the time to read and review. 

 

This is one that definitely needs an update with my current writing ability. I posted it in 2014 but I think I wrote it way back in 2012, which is when I was doing the whole 'date two girls at once' thing. My friend asked me "what would they do if they found out" and while my response to them wasn't substantial, this is what I kept thinking about. 

Soaked by JDO Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3]
Summary:

A story about a girl getting wet at the expense of some of her friends.


Categories: Giantess, Crush, Humiliation, Instant Size Change, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3519 Read Count: 13470
[Report This] Published: August 27 2014 Updated: August 27 2014
Reviewer: Aborigen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 21 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Loving the unaware story, and the amply-endowed giantess. Some of the action was hard to track, but I got the general sense of it. I even appreciated the sci-fi explanation at the end and the comical carelessness throughout. Interesting to see the dynamic between Lisa and Alex, too, he behaving with steadfast ignorance and she being complex and interesting. Very much enjoyed Lisa's story.



Author's Response:

I wrote this for a story contest on Giantess City way back when called the Unaware Fair. It came out well at the time but it definitely could use some touching up. If I wasn't restricted on my word count I think I'd have come up with a better ending for Alex. Thanks for reading and reviewing though!

Summary:

Guy can't escape his ex girlfriend. MAN HAVE I BEEN THERE, PAL. Oh, and she's a giantess.


Categories: Giantess, Crush, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Brobdnignagian (51 ft. to 100 ft.)
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: The Following story is appropriate for all audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 2896 Read Count: 8378
[Report This] Published: August 27 2014 Updated: August 27 2014
Reviewer: Aborigen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 21 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Great twist! I wasn't expecting that at all, even as I was trying to figure out what was going on. And I like that the method isn't clearly explained, either. It's just something that can get as wild as it needs to, indefinitely. I really liked the imagination of Sarah Catherine's various tortures, as well as the expressions of the little guy's realizations and reactions.



Author's Response:

I've found that a lot of stories get stuck on trying to explain the how, when for the most part the audiences we're writing for are going to be like "okay, the shrinking happens." I wrote this one in the "Post Message" box at Giantess City and it turned out to be one of my favorites. I should definitely continue it at some point. I had some more wicked ideas. Well, Sarah Catherine did anyway.

Summary:

An Arsenal fan is in the clutches of two Sp*rs fans during a North London Derby. 


Categories: Giantess, Couples , Insertion
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.)
Size Roles: FM/f
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2368 Read Count: 7886
[Report This] Published: August 27 2014 Updated: August 27 2014
Reviewer: Aborigen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 21 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Fun levels of cruelty here. Not relishing the boor having his way with the little guy, but all about various points of entrance on a wet and sloppy drunk woman. Still, this totally worked out (even if the sports talk lost me), nice pace and a great sense of humor. Good dialogue between the characters.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review. This one was silly, but "sports rivalry" has always been a great motivation for giant couple scenarios in my mind. To be totally honest though, there's very little that doesn't motivate a good giant couples scenario.