hi ^_^

I have to say this is my highest rated F/f story ever :D  its really good how you describe all the scenes and the suffering and the tortures were great. Well done!

rating to offset the closed-minded dull-whitted asshats that have rated despite being forewarned of the content.

Will read and re-rate later.

Excellent re-start, one of the best mouth-play scenes i've read in a while :)

Heyas, liking the story :)

Just a few things i wanna point out. Firstly make sure you proof read your stories carefully to make sure certain sentences and paragraphs run smoothly and dont miss words out, a simple issue but it makes a difference to the over-all quality. I know this is a short story, but a little extra description would have made it more involving to the reader who doesn't know who your characters are (like i didn't know wether Maki was supposed to be a furry, or a girl with cat ears etc). Lastly just be a little careful of the way you describe certain things, like "fiery emerald eyes" and where she "slid to the ground"... emerald isn't really something you would describe as fiery, it would be more for red colours or the attitude behind the eyes, and where she 'slides' to the ground, it would have been better to say 'lowered' or 'sank' because 'slid' implies she was leaning against something when she wasn't.

For the positive aspects though i liked the nature of the girl you put across, sweet and cruel, and her fun was definately interesting to see. The casualness of the killings and the imagination behind them were really good, i loved the idea of her crushing half of the guy into her toes, and scraping the girl across the edge of the pavement, both were deliciously fun hehe :P

Over-all good story ^_^

Hey, nice to see some fresh SW material for a change! (in general i mean, not just you :P )

Well paced, nicely worded and not too strict on the details. Looking forward to the updates :)

I was loving reading this, any chance of you continuing it?

Heyas, i thought i left a review on this... evedently not. Loving the story, sometimes its a really good change of pace to just let the bad girls have their way for once without the moral objectification of HAVING to turn hte tables sothe 'good guy' can eventually win >.>

Great descrips on the tortures, and the variation in them. Insertion does nothing for me but the fact there is other humiliations and tortures to entertain with is great.

A guilty pleasure would be seeing more done with Lori hehe ;)  I love seeing tinies smothered or crushed by a giantess' body

Awesome chapter, really well described in all respects. Loving the slow methodical breakdown of vannessa told from both sides. Got this bookmarked ^_^  Keep up the deviance ;)

(Harlequinems)

Hiya, been meaning to read this for a while, but only just got round to it. Very well done by the way :)  I really liked the change of pace to have a slow build up to the shrinking, without it taking a million chapters to get to the fun (unlike some of the more confusingly popular stories around here), and the writing was fluid with a good level of imaginative description.

Its nice to have some good F/f stories on here as they are exceedingly rare!

I hope you dont get put off by a lack of feedback around here, unfortuantely its the nature of these sites recently. People either Lurk, or only ever comment on the Mods or "popular people's" stuff, but there will always be someone out there who apreciates the hard work good writers go to :)

Hope you are thinking of writing more for this ^_^

Fantastic story, I was scared the whole way through that i would enjoy the bulk of it then be bored to tears by yet another lame "gentle" ending that seems to be so popular around Shrunken Woman stories...

You've got some great depth of description in there while keeping a good pace to the read, and it was a good idea to add some 'flashback scenes' as she remembered the treatement of other tinies she'd recalled.

Only thing i would suggest is  that when you proofread, make sure that instead of scannig over it and kind of 'reading what you know is there', take your time and make sure you read every word you've written. There wern't many errors, but there were one or two grammatical/mis-worded errors in there.

Over-all though, nicely done, Thanks ^_^

Emma.