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Parental Myrmidon by Invisible Ink Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 65]
Summary:

A rebellious girl ends up with the upper hand when her parents end up shrunk.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Adult 30-39, Couples , Feet, Entrapment, Humiliation, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Slave, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences, This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 25141 Read Count: 575318
[Report This] Published: June 07 2010 Updated: August 23 2012
Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 13 2010 Title: Parental Myrmidon

very descriptive and entertaining. its almost unfathomable how evil and vindictive katherine is being to her own parents... but what is worse is that im enjoying it. and this story is surprisingly very easy to read and follow. well done.

aaron

ps hope that if her friends do get envolved that they dont kill the parents at the very least.

Author's Response: Katherine is definately not the most kind and caring person in the world. I can just about gaurantee that her friends will be involved later on.

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 25 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Only one question comes to mind, that is, does she want to just kill her tiny parents? Because I'm having a hard time not wanting Katherine to experience a similar fate. But I'm not there yet. Lol.
But at the same time part of me wants katherine's parents to be her personal playthings(as twisted as that is).


At any rate congratulations on another stellar chapter. Keep it coming.

Aaron

Author's Response: Thanks for the compliments, she doesn't want them dead. She is just acting her age. She isn't really thinking about the consequences of her actions. She is just thinking about how she now has the upper hand, how she is enjoying extracting a bit of revenge. Like alot of younger people the full reality of a situation and how it effects more then just them directly doesn't always occur to them. So its not Katherine is completely a heartless bitch, she is just young and dumb as many of us were in high school.

Reviewer: aaron Signed
Date: June 25 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Ps did you get the message I sent you?

Author's Response: i dont think so, try emailing it to me at invisibleink2011@gmail.com

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 28 2010 Title: Parental Myrmidon

just when i thought that you couldn't surpass yourself... you add this chapter. holy cow what an utterly awesome ending!! i dont know what to say except that i cannot wait for your next chapter 8^D

aaron

Author's Response: Thanks Aaron, i hopefully i can maintain the same quality level throughout.

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 28 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

im actually starting to see things through katherine/chelsea perspective, which makes this story that much more realistic. thanks for posting it.

aaron

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 30 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

what a completely demoralizing and humiliating event for the two parents. especially samantha... cant help but feel extremely sorry for her. wonder if steven will give in to his daughter? will kathherine see the error of her ways only time will tell. great chapter cant wait for next installment.

aaron

Author's Response: I tried to work in the emotions they were feeling as I think that really is what makes the entire thing so humiliating that you can see directly how the characters are reacting to the situation. You can see how what is being done pains them on many levels.

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 10 2010 Title: Parental Myrmidon

cant wait for the party...
well detailed characters and plot as always, but what i liked the most was the fact that its from samantha's perspective...
one question: is chelsea a bull dyke,
if not than whats the deal with her hair?

aaron

ps the realisation of samantha towards the ending was inspired. thank you for this tale.

Author's Response: I thought it would work better if you got her perspective on what happening as opposed to just keeping with only steven's perspective and thoughts. No, the crop cuts are actually quite in style right now where im at California. Everyone is getting them. Here's a link to baseline that I used for the hairstyle for chelsea. I modified it a bit adding interruption and a bit more color with some highlights and such in the story. But you get the general idea from from the link below. http://www.femalefirst.co.uk/lifestyle-fashion/stylecelebs/Hayden+Panettiere-10458.html Samantha i think is my favorite character as she wears her emotion on her sleeve. You know what shes feeling as shes not afraid to show it for better or worse. Steven can be more frustrating to right as he keeps it bottled up so you get the urge to smack him once in awhile. However, i feel the shortfalls they both have really add to there realism and individuality.

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 12 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

oh, thats what it looks like, lol. for some weird ridiculous(stupid) reason i thought that the crop hairstyle was like a crewcut... god i feel like such a jackass...

ps that is a very cute and attractive hairstyle(changes what i had originally thought of chelsea)

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 16 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

missed this epic story. an it seems that that this story is dare i say it even better. awesome chapter, an thanks for continuing.


aaron

Author's Response:

thanks sorry for the long delay. My goal is to have chapters out approximately every couple weeks from here on out.

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 26 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

that actually sounds quite horrifying to be trapped in saliva soacked toothpaste all night. as always great job at bringing these characters to life. cant wait to see what katherine does with/to samantha.

awesome story an i hope that you will continue.

aaron
ps will you add a scene where katherine may either force her parents to partake in marijuana consunption or just partake in it herself knowing they cant do a thing about it.

Author's Response:

That shouldn't be to hard to fit in with what i have planned.  I'm glad your enjoying the story. Its been fun to write.

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 30 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

wow this story is taking another direction. an i for one love it. im on the edge of my seat waiting for the next chapter.

aaron

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 22 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Welcome back, an glad to see this story back.
Wonder how far she will take it for those logins for the Internet. Just glad that she hasn't done any 'real' damage to her parents yet.
At any rate, glad to see this story again.

aaron

Author's Response:

thanks, there was a bit of a hiatus but regular updates should occur again.

Hangover by SilverFlame Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 5]
Summary: The morning after some intense partying, our sizechanging heroine tries to find out just what on earth happened the previous night.
Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Adult 30-39, Crush, Feet, Entrapment, Gentle, Growing Woman, Instant Size Change, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: Giga (1 mi. to 100 mi.), Mini GTS (16-30ft)
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 3742 Read Count: 11505
[Report This] Published: June 08 2010 Updated: June 08 2010
Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 08 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Waking Up

oh what a tantalizing tale. hope you continue with it. hope melanie will try and refrain from getting plastered again.
ps hope that there is more gentleness as well as melanie's bare feet.
aaron

Homecoming Queen by Victor_W Rated: R starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 6]
Summary: A realtively unknown University suddenly becomes famous for a very special, and mysterious, yearly event.
Categories: Gentle, Young Adult 20-29, Feet
Characters: None
Growth: Giga (1 mi. to 100 mi.), Giant (31 ft. to 50 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences, This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 3545 Read Count: 15115
[Report This] Published: June 11 2010 Updated: June 12 2010
Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstar
Date: June 11 2010 Title: Chapter 1: How it all began

looking forward to the next chapter.
hope the next queen will have a toe painting ceremony with her friends.

aaron

Author's Response: I'm sure the next Queen will describe us everything she's going to do by detail :)

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 12 2010 Title: Chapter 2: An unlikely selection

Nice chapter. Great theme too.

Aaron

Hailey's Foot by pseudoaddiction7 Rated: X starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 14]
Summary: A young couple's relationship changes radically when the girl's foot begins to grow beyond anyone's control.
Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Body Part, Feet
Characters: None
Growth: Mini GTS (16-30ft)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 10797 Read Count: 68566
[Report This] Published: June 11 2010 Updated: September 18 2010
Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 09 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

forgot rating...

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 18 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

lol... yeah it appears that you did write yourself into a corner.
but what the heck it was an entertaining read while it lasted, hope to read more from you.

aaron

peace

Author's Response: well thanks for being so understanding aaron, maybe next time i publish i wont do it in pieces :P

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstar
Date: August 31 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

a wrestling ring? lol thats so stupid its funny...
but i really hope everything works out for hailey and eugene.
think it would be cool if vance would get to be clara's plaything/shrunken boyfriend...

aaron
ps great foot/toe action.

Author's Response:

yep this story is starting to reach its conclusion so i gotta think of a suitable ending for everybody :P

thanks for reading again aaron i appreciate the attention you've been giving my story

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstar
Date: August 21 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

weird... this vance guys weird

but ill still be tuning in for future chapters...

aaron

Author's Response:

yes, i agree, he is weird.

thanks again for a rating, i would've given myself the same thing for this chapter

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstar
Date: July 19 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

magenta, eh...
but 20 bottles wouldve been perfect if she had 2 feet, lol
great to see your posting again

aaron

Author's Response: u got it :)

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