Penname: rave777 [Contact] Real name:
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Summary:

In a world where numerous anthropomorphic races of variable size try their best to live together, the lives of Ryan, a 26-year-old mousemin programmer, and Ayla, a 24-year-old drakonid girl, unexpectedly cross, as after getting indebted to the mob, the poor mouse boy finds himself trapped in the 114 ft tall drakonid’s shoe. Having narrowly avoided losing his life under her colossal foot, and believed dead by his killers, the 3 and ¾ inches tall guy tries desperately to survive whatever journey his unaware captor has brought him on, while the dragon girl is completely oblivious to his presence.


Will Ryan be able to escape his prison?
 Will he meet his end under Ayla’s claws?
Will she be able to help him?
Will his shark find out that he’s alive?


Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Breasts, Fantasy, Feet, Footwear, Furry, Gentle, Insertion, New World Order, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: Brobdnignagian (51 ft. to 100 ft.), Mini GTS (16-30ft), Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Munchkin (2.9 ft. to 1 ft.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 29185 Read Count: 10024
[Report This] Published: June 29 2023 Updated: January 06 2024
Reviewer: rave777 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 17 2024 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - The Gym

A really really fun gentle unaware story with a lot of creative size interaction. I could understand the pain in describing various different-sized characters in one story, but somehow you could describe it well enough for me to get it. Really like Ayla's character that is gentle yet could be dangerous if anyone pissed her off.

Also, the way you describe a situation in detail based on someone's perspective is one thing I must commend. Couldn't wait for what's next.



Author's Response:

Hello, thanks a lot for your kind words and the 5 stars!

Yeah, I felt that the multisized world could lead to an interesting setup, and I've tried to put a lot of thought into the points of view of the different characters and how they would interact with one another

I apologize if this one had fallen a bit behind in new uploads, cause I was relatively busy until last week, and I was also trying to finish the first chapters of two other stories I wanted to publish. Now that I finally sat down to it, the next chapter is coming along well, so it will be published soon-ish. 

Thanks again, feel free to check out my other work!