Well, I got to say man this is one hell of work. I was very moved by our hero as he battled against the world at an Action Figure height. I love the style of how it was wrote and it kept the story going. The torture scenes with Naomi, Cheryl and the rest of the horrible sluts made really feel bad for him as things get worst and worst.

On other notes I was extremely happy as Ray used his mind and wits to find the best possible solution. Going against the odds and doing anything he can. Again I was easily affected once the shit happens and his plans backfires.

Each character fulfill their roles perfectly. I especially enjoyed the moments with Nicole and Suzy as our hero finally gets a break. I'm a feet man myself at times so the scenes with those two were awesome. 

Oi and another thing I like was the jokes, philosophy and Ray's reasoning through out the story. But at the end, the last chapter has to be down right the best of the whole story. Our hero finally having a happy ending seems to me the best ending possible. Though I would wish that Nicole can somehow escape away from her cruel mother and stay with Ray. Their relationship seems too cute to break up like that. Find me heartless but I laughed when they found Paul dead along with Rachel in a coma and Naomi crying. The perfect karma, revenge, and epiphany and all that. Dues Ex Machinima indeed=D