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The Bard by Silhouette Rated: G starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4]
Summary:

A poor man tries to turn his life around


Categories: Entrapment, Instant Size Change
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1373 Read Count: 4959
[Report This] Published: October 29 2010 Updated: October 29 2010
Reviewer: HiddenAuthor Signed
Date: November 05 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Could you perhaps do a second chapter? Maybe have Lady Minerva have William play at her table or start "loving" like a pet bird? The setup is good but it seems that the story is nothing more than a setup!

Author's Response: please refer to chapter end notes :)

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