Wow, that was great!

'Hope you're enjoying this so far. Lemme know what you think! How crazy do you want this thing to get? Keep it small, keep it intimate or go all out NWO hijinks?'

Why not both? Maybe they could decide to mess with exes and / or have an 'ant farm of people. Realize that day dreaming about killing is different than actually doing it and decide not to... until they get caught shrinking people and the only way out is to get BIG. And then its all in.

I'd like it if they don't develop an adversarial relationship with each other over time and if more time and size were spent on Kat. Goddess Queen of Earth and all she surveys, first of her name. Growth Potential always gave way too much time and size to Jason for my taste.

Well that was unnecessarily cruel on Cleo's part (though i guess Cleo determined how much punishment to give Leah on how much punishment she gave the mortals.). She better make it up to Leah super proper. With taking her to pick out some new 'toys' and snacks. Or however goddesses apologize for taking things to far. Especially if all Olympians besides Cleo have the mind control function in their brains so Cass can control them.

I imagine Leah and Robyn on Cleo's couch commiserating over their treatment by Cleo and Joyce while sharing a tub of ice cream with human sprinkles while Robyn introduces her to chick-flicks.
Robyn - "And then she stood on my back and expected me to visualize some red light. Then she told me even 6 year olds apply themselves with more effort."
Leah - "Yeah, well her High and mightyness had one of her servants lock me in a metal cage in the dark for 2 days."
Both - "Fucking Bitches..."
Cleo and Joyce - "We're in the room you know..."
Robyn and Leah - "Just wanted to make sure you knew how we feel."

But i vote next chapter is Cleo giving Cindy her toy and Cindy taking FULL advantage of it. Followed by Robyn training chapter. Followed by a boob and leg focused Cleo and Robyn sex chapter.

Nice creative use of power here with the rifle. Kaylee's perspective of the events was a little confusing, but i guess that was intentional. Made sense reading the rest of the chapter. New toy or servant? Cindy no. 2 or newest member of the lobster tank? Or even s servant for Cindy...

It's good that Robyn still lacks control. More realistic (ha!) if she has to spend a good while practicing what Cleo has been doing her whole life.

Don't worry about speed. Better slow than burnout, I always say.

So much to unpack here. Robyn seems to be having a bit of an identity crisis without knowing. She's dissociating mortal Robyn from goddess Robyn. She doesn't see her parents as her parents anymore and doesn't see Janna and Sam as her sisters. I'd hate to break it to her, but that means she should think of Cassandra as her mother and Cleo as her sister. Absolutely kill her libido.

Also, I guess Janna doesn't like her parents either since the first thing she does is shove them in a box. What's with people hating their parents?

Cleo's going to be pissed when she finds out Sam can't post because Robyn shrunk her and not her art supplies and camera.

Robyn's being hypocritical, judgemental, and something else I can't think of a word for but she's being it. 'Cleo make my sisters priestesses. Oh no, Sam's abusing and killing humans. Better unmake her a priestess instead of talking to her and setting boundaries on her behavior.' Meanwhile she uses them as sex toys, has murdered/ assisted in murdering millions (RIP Middle Earth) and now takes pleasure in eating them. She essentially gave her sisters power and knowing what she does, she has some nerve to judge. Cleo should talk some sense into her. Can't jump in and punish someone for something you haven't told them not to do. Set boundaries then punish for broken boundaries. She's obviously going to be a bad parent with that sort of parenting strategy.

Hope Cleo and Robyn aren't too mean when they next see Leah. Sure she narced to Cass, but Cleo would have died if Leah hadn't come to the rescue. And she did them a huge favor by letting Cass be angry and let that anger drop off over a few weeks. Otherwise, no question, Robyn would have been snuffed out like a candle in a hurricane. So really, she saved both of them at least once each and is entirely the reason Robyn is a goddess. She should get a hero's welcome, and first dibs on the mortals in Cleo's fridge, minimum as a thank you. And she should make this her theme song (You're Welcome -Disney's Moana) https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=79DijItQXMM

Nit-pick again. 400 ft.

Don't like the idea of priestesses larger than Cleo and Robyn. Hope the size she gave them is their hard max with an even lower hard max for mortals that priestesses enlarge. Demi-priestesses?

Maybe a size heirarchy:
Cleo, Robyn and Cindy, 400 to whatever Cleo feels like
Priestesses, hard max 400
Demi-Priestesses, 50
Mortals, Squishably normal to micro.

Cleo's getting ready for trouble. Would any trouble besides her mother even happen? She's the only one angry about anything so far. I'd think the council would be happy with setup complete and Cleo 're-educated' and forget that Cleo even exists other than the energy she provides to power their world.

Are there going to be any light hearted chapters with her friends/family before people start trying to start something? Will Cleo get her friends on her side? Cleo and Robyn never did get to actually do the shopping.

Thinking upon what happens to Olympians that piss Cleo off or otherwise try to start something. Will Cleo offer the vanquished a position as worshipper, servant, sex slave, lobster, one way trip back to Olympia or death? I don't think she'd want to kill a fellow Olympian, she'd never be able to go home and her family wouldn't look at her the same way. Much higher stakes than killng mortals since mortals are her property. What happens if an Olympian worships Cleo? Is their worship energy worth X mortals?

Cleo should have the humans start building an interstellar empire for her. Much more worship energy. Cleo and Robyn the size of a star using a planet of unbelievers as a toy.

This brings up an interesting issue. The sick and the infirm. Something Cleo as a member of a race of divine beings would not have any knowledge or understanding of. Cleo said show up or get fucked, but Sophia's father might be attached to machines keeping him alive and making the trip would kill him before arriving, dooming his country anyway.

Cleo could set Sophia on her own people with a horny Robyn to watch Sophia, and seek out the king personally and be appalled at what she finds. Not even fully understanding when she has a doctor explain because the concept of sickness is so foreign to her.

Maybe something like that would compel her to spare the rest of the country and appologize to Sophia and do something Gods rarely do, reevaluate who should personally submit based on physical condition.

Good to read you again. Lots of things that I've imagined happening here:

Robyn could use her new power and size to get some revenge on people she doesn't like.

Cleo could get pissed off for some reason and rampage through a city.

Cleo could over time get closer/romantic with Robyn despite wanting to keep it master and servant.

Cleo could learn about human history and realize they're capable of launching stuff into space. She could demand they colonize the moon and mars. More civilizations -> more people -> more power.

Cleo could experiment with different sizes and be able to grow larger the more people worship.

Her friends/family could come to visit later.

She could gift random humans size and power and take it away when the consequences are coming.

That's an interesting way to handle that. And you tied up the loose end of the guys from the first chapter.

Its interesting that the gods are not uniform in power level. There seems to be a wide gulf between Cleo and Leah. I'm assuming the gods are like mortals with powers, so maybe Cleo drawing so much power would be shocking to the higher ups of her race and they would exhibit jealousy or greed. Maybe by the end of the story even her own race are like mortals to her and those friends she elevates with her.

Is the well in a pocket dimension or something? A scene of someone foolish (not knowing or understanding that the power is tied to Cleo) trying to take some power for themselves only to end up self-inflicting a horrible death would be cool. And Cleo getting to judge and mock that person as they scream and melt adding their powers to the well. Maybe they could be an ex or an enemy from home.

So close to a rampage / sex on city scene! You tease us.

Wow. Robyn's parents were super dumb. They deserved that, as unfortunate as it is. As many times as Cleo's face and body would have been on tv and the internet, they really had no excuse for not recognizing that she'd changed her appearance. They must have failed all their tests in school.

Good to see that their daughters have much higher survival instincts. Although reluctantly in Janna's case. I bet she's more depraved than Robyn. She'll be squishing people with the best of them soon. 

Good to see that Cleo recognizes Robyn as a risk factor and raising anyone up too high would cause issues. Keep the worship power keyed to Cleo only and punish enemies with furious anger. Similarly its good that she's got a handle on her expenditures vs her surplus. Dilligence is the halmark of an eternally healthy reign and she understands that as her rule number 1.

The way I see Cleo is as the validictorian girl who doesn't really have an idea of what a healthy relationship looks like and struggles with empathy due to spending her teen years focused on academics. If males don't have divine magic(contradicts chapter 1?), then she's probably never seen anything other than her magically dominant mother doing similar things to her father. Add in the disconnect between mortal and goddess and she probably has difficulty dissociating Robyn as a girlfriend/lover from Robyn as a mortal/toy which just compounds the problem. And judging from Janna's choice in men, Robyn probably has the same issue but in the reverse. An abusive relationship where neither actually intends for it to be abusive, but they just need a little guidance to be better. Maybe when Leah comes back, she'll spend time with both of them, recongnize the unhealthyness and sit them down for some couples counseling.

Maybe shopping and spending some time among humans with Robyn and Janna can give Cleo more of an appreciation for human culture, if only to give her ideas on how humans can better serve. Her knowledge of earth is really lacking, she definitely needs to get out more.