Penname: teradonk [Contact] Real name:
Member Since: January 17 2018
Membership status: Member
Bio:
I hate "wholesome" giantess stories.

I hate "shenanigans".
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Summary:

Roberta continues training her shrunken son to be her perfect sex toy, and befriends another lonely middle-aged mother with a similar love for sticking her own boy in secret places. Done as a commission.

Visit my Patreon for early-access chapters and exclusive stories: https://www.patreon.com/JacksmithShrinkStories


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Breasts, Mature (40-49), Middle Age (50+), Butt, Couples, Entrapment, Gentle, Humiliation, Incest, Insertion, Maternal, Mouth Play, Odor, Scat, Slave, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.)
Size Roles: F/m, FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: Jacksmith Commission Stories
Chapters: 40 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 85535 Read Count: 270672
[Report This] Published: June 11 2020 Updated: September 19 2023
Reviewer: teradonk Signed
Date: August 26 2020 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

oh holy bigbig JOANNA. hope to see more action with her and tiny Tommy, between him and Joanna's giant ass!



Author's Response:

There's plenty of those two yet to come

Reviewer: teradonk Signed
Date: July 13 2022 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

oh my. i hope Joanne follows through on her threat to Tommy. Imagine if in her anger she sucks on him and makes him hard before using him that way after a colossal dump. The trauma of Tommy connecting that to arousal and orgasm. so cruel.

Summary:

This is how Doug grew up at the feet of some lovely women. It gets really interesting after an accident at a research facility.

I hope everyone enjoyed my first story. 


Categories: Giantess, Breasts, Butt, Feet, Gentle, Insertion, Mouth Play, Scat, Vore, Watersports
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Munchkin (2.9 ft. to 1 ft.)
Size Roles: F/m, FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences, This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 40888 Read Count: 91390
[Report This] Published: June 16 2020 Updated: July 08 2021
Reviewer: teradonk Signed
Date: June 16 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

very sexy story! aunt nikki is so big and bad. love seeing the butt and scat tags for the future.

 

will doug stay at this size, or get smaller?

 

thank you.



Author's Response: He will get smaller. The other tags are in upcoming chapters. Which are written, just in the process of proof reading. Thank you!

Reviewer: teradonk Signed
Date: June 18 2020 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

hot chapter! LOVE that Nikki s***s on him and he gets his rocks off like that. I hope something similar happens when he gets tiny, especially with TWO giant aunties

Reviewer: teradonk Signed
Date: July 01 2020 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

This story is great, especially, to me, the ass and scat content. Please don't be discouraged if someone says they don't like those parts.

 

Thanks for the story!

 

 

Reviewer: teradonk Signed
Date: August 07 2020 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Holy shit! Poor (lucky?) Steve!

Summary:

A hapless 11th grader at a high school with a very strict principal volunteers to help some of his teachers complete training for shrink discipline certification. Whatever that means...

 

(This is my first story - critiques or comments are appreciated)

(Complete as of 2020-12-15 - it seems I can actually finish something from time to time)


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Adult 30-39, Mature (40-49), Butt, Feet, Maternal, Mouth Play
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: FF/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 83452 Read Count: 163883
[Report This] Published: July 26 2020 Updated: December 16 2020
Reviewer: teradonk Signed
Date: October 02 2020 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 - Mrs. Samson and Nancy's unaware friend Melissa

good lord this chapter is sexy. love what Melissa does with tiny Brett so she can get her rocks off! can't help imaging her having to continually break wind while she busting a nut with him in her ass. hope there's more of this, more of Melissa!



Author's Response:

Thanks for your review! Glad you enjoyed it.

Summary:

This is a story about a woman in Brazil that purchased something off a black market website.  Let us just say English to Portuqueese is not a good translation.  It is hard to communciate when you can not undertsan each other.  We will see what Maria got, and how much fun she will have.


Categories: Giantess, Young Adult 20-29, Adult 30-39, Body Exploration, Butt, Entrapment, Humiliation, Insertion, New World Order, Odor, Slave, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Challenges: A Big Order
Challenges: A Big Order
Challenges: A Big Order
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4048 Read Count: 13961
[Report This] Published: August 14 2020 Updated: August 14 2020
Reviewer: teradonk Signed
Date: August 14 2020 Title: Chapter 2: Getting settled in

great story! I love how Maria gets off on farting on poor tiny Benji. the dialogue and inner thoughts make it more intense. I would love to see more sitting and farting, where Maria sits her heavy ass on the bed or a chair and Benji is under her asshole while she farts. Is Benji naked? If not, maybe she strips off his tiny clothes to humiliate him by sitting and farting on his penis, like she is marking territory.

so glad to read stories like this. thank you!



Author's Response:

Thanks I appreciate your feedback.  Yah I made this story in May, so it has been a while since I worked on it.  Yes Benji is naked, yes the story is intense very actually.  You know I kind of noticed a lot of my recent content is starting to become a repetitive, so maybe I should stop making new stoires and just add to the ones people like.  If I take a huge break like this it becomes exciting again to make more chapters.  Also I like how this website lets you add mutlipel chapters to a story.  Deviantart was so cluttered and became a mess for me to make these stories.  Yah I might just add another chapter soon.

Macro Beauty by 1CoolDude Rated: X starstarstar [Reviews - 4]
Summary:

 In the future shrinking tech is everywhere from the medicinal to the mundane. A type of specialty beauty salon using small technicians to clear skin and pores promises to clean your skin better than any product off the shelf or your money back. That is of course that they follow the regulations. Follow Matt and his fellow unlucky techs of macro beauty salon as  they become stuck on his mom's body after an accident at only half an inch tall.


Categories: Incest, Giantess
Characters: None
Growth: Giga (1 mi. to 100 mi.)
Shrink: Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, FM/m
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1228 Read Count: 5273
[Report This] Published: September 12 2020 Updated: September 12 2020
Reviewer: teradonk Signed
Date: September 12 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1. Another day another nickel

oh shit. Matt is trapped in the danger zone! he had his way with that giant asshole, but I fear that giant shitter is going to have its bad way with him!

 

love it, please continue.

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[Report This] Published: January 01 1970 Updated: January 01 1970
Reviewer: teradonk Signed
Date: November 01 2020 Title: None

Great story! I remember Lori from your other story was hoping you'd write on starring her. I love how she just kindly listens to his verbal abuse, and is gentle with him, which gives you the idea she might be persuaded by his pleas and how he did not sign up for this.

 

But she is not persuaded. She is kind, but still treats him as an object in an experiment, and by increments she is seeming to like what she is doing. I know you have your own style, but I do wonder if Lori will eventually experience sexual pleasure from what she is doing to the tiny, and if she becomes careless with cleanliness and ass emissions.

I hope so! At any rate, thanks for writing!



Author's Response:

In a world where women are paid to keep shrunken men in their butts, anything is possible! Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: teradonk Signed
Date: February 14 2021 Title: None

Another great chapter!

Gotta say, major heartspikes when Lori sees the photo of the black woman with the enormous butt. God, I'd love to see a side story about her and a possible tiny wedged up to his shoulders at ground zero.

 

Also loved the doctor questioning why it would be bad that Lori masturbate with her tiny in her backside, and that many women enjoy it immensely (of course I imagine the aforementioned mystery black woman enjoying it IMMENSELY).

 

killer stuff!



Author's Response:

From Dr. Walker's perspective, its just another activity that the subject has to learn to live around.  Completely natural!  Thanks for the review

Reviewer: teradonk Signed
Date: February 22 2021 Title: None

This chapter is blazin hot!

 

I like to imagine that Lori has a donk something like Brenda Werner or Rosee Divine. When she asks her tiny if he ever bust a nut while in her ass, that was amazing. Of course he has! She likes to tromp around naked with him below her before she puts him in. So he's gotta look up at that gigantic pumpkin before she puts him in, either in her crack or her butthole. She inserts him feet first in her anus. what with the preview and then the contant pressure against his cock all day, from her cheeks, the involuntary flexing of her asshole against him and the unavoidable emissions which must blast his junk directly, I'd imagine the poor little dude has been milked by Lori many times without her knowledge!

 

Love this story! Thanks!



Author's Response:

Lori's not in quite as good shape as Rosee Divine, but her ass is definitely bigger!  Thanks for the review and I'm glad you're enjoying the story.

Reviewer: teradonk Signed
Date: March 08 2021 Title: None

fantastic chapter! just love how Lori now so casually farts when Michael is up in that ass, and how she routinely sucks him off! Does she put him in her anus, or just deep between the cheeks? More farts, please, haha. love to imagine Lori develops a fart fetish.

 

the situation for Michael is really quite miserable and horrifying. Either in her ass or in the box. just an object. but it's good for us!

 

and great cliffhanger!

 

 

Summary:

I also finally figured out how to edit the stoires correctly with the correct font, so you guys can read them clearly.

This is an unaware story where the roommate of Chelsea see's a man at a night club in college.  Well he was more attractive to Chelsea with her 5ft 7 inches and more curvy frame.  She decided to get revenge by shrirnking him to 2 inches, and lets just say he is not going to have fun with being around Chelsea, with her beign unaware of what her roomate intends on doing.

 

This story is pretty heavy with themes on FARTING, ASS, SMELLS, UNWILLING, UNAWARE


Categories: Giantess, Young Adult 20-29, Butt, Entrapment, Humiliation, Odor, Slave, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 5021 Read Count: 21685
[Report This] Published: October 01 2020 Updated: November 14 2020
Reviewer: teradonk Signed
Date: October 06 2020 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: A humiliating start

I love this concept, but perhaps you should use Chelsea's roommate's name instead of just "the roommate"?  



Author's Response:

Yes that is something I probably did not even notice I was doing.  I will either go back and edit it or give her a name at next scene.

Summary:

(Formerly titled "Giantess/shrinking & farts - Beach day (Lillian's route)")

One day, for reasons that escape your comprehension, you shrink really small (ranging from about 1/2 inch to 1/10 inch or 1cm to 1 millimeters approx.), and you don't really know why. Did someone do it? Did something cause it? Who, or what? Unfortunately for you, you won't get many chances to find out, as you have to try your best and survive as you're not alone. The girls that you were just hanging out with or happened to be around are now seemingly impossibly gigantic. You might try to alert them of your presence, but that might not end up being the best idea.

[This story is sort of a spiritual successor to TinyMan0001's 'Giantess/fart shrinking' stories, though not intended to be a carbon copy of it. One difference is that whether farts shrink you is up to whoever is writing, though I at least chose to leave the cause of shrinking mysterious at the beginning, and also because it slightly contradicts some backstory (I also left open the possibility for a girl to intentionally shrink you). However, like it, it's largely focused on the shrinking side, though I guess I can leave a branch dedicated for a giantess/growth route if anyone's interested on adding to that. Also, similarly, the girls may be aware or unaware of your shrunken form. Usually, I'd say they should progress from unaware to aware, depending on the girl and the situation though.

This story is a more user-friendly display for the interactive I made at Writing.com, though here we have to do away with the ability to have other people directly add chapters, and instead I'll be posting the more relevant routes done so far.

Original link here: https://www.writing.com/main/interactive-story/item_id/2234425-Giantessshrinking--farts

PS: The Giga tag was just selected in relation to the main character's perspective, this is mostly a shrinking story, not growth focused, though a growth route may be done in the future.


Categories: Giantess, Teenager (13-19), BBW, Butt, Odor, Crush, Entrapment
Characters: None
Growth: Giga (1 mi. to 100 mi.)
Shrink: Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 39891 Read Count: 122854
[Report This] Published: October 15 2020 Updated: January 20 2022
Reviewer: teradonk Signed
Date: January 07 2022 Title: Chapter 13: All The Way Inside Lillian’s Giant Ass

This is like the 12 Days of Assmas!

Love these daily additions, and especially this one! Blaise all up in that phat giant farting ass sporting wood. Lillian all heated up = majormajor!

Excellent.

Author's Response:

Thank you very much, I'm glad you're enjoying it! It's going to be even longer than 12 days!

Summary:

(Formerly titled "Giantess/shrinking & farts - Spending time with 'Auntie' Sheila")

One day, for reasons that escape your comprehension, you shrink really small (ranging from about 1/2 inch to 1/10 inch or 1cm to 1 millimeters approx.), and you don't really know why. Did someone do it? Did something cause it? Who, or what? Unfortunately for you, you won't get many chances to find out, as you have to try your best and survive as you're not alone. The girls that you were just hanging out with or happened to be around are now seemingly impossibly gigantic. You might try to alert them of your presence, but that might not end up being the best idea.

[This story is sort of a spiritual successor to TinyMan0001's 'Giantess/fart shrinking' stories, though not intended to be a carbon copy of it. One difference is that whether farts shrink you is up to whoever is writing, though I at least chose to leave the cause of shrinking mysterious at the beginning, and also because it slightly contradicts some backstory (I also left open the possibility for a girl to intentionally shrink you). However, like it, it's largely focused on the shrinking side, though I guess I can leave a branch dedicated for a giantess/growth route if anyone's interested on adding to that. Also, similarly, the girls may be aware or unaware of your shrunken form. Usually, I'd say they should progress from unaware to aware, depending on the girl and the situation though.

This story is a more user-friendly display for the interactive I made at Writing.com, though here we have to do away with the ability to have other people directly add chapters, and instead I'll be posting the more relevant routes done so far.

Original link here: https://www.writing.com/main/interactive-story/item_id/2234425-Giantessshrinking--farts

PS: The Giga tag was just selected in relation to the main character's perspective, this is mostly a shrinking story, not growth focused, though a growth route may be done in the future.


Categories: Insertion, Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Adult 30-39, BBW, Body Exploration, Butt, Crush, Entrapment, Odor
Characters: None
Growth: Giga (1 mi. to 100 mi.)
Shrink: Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 30341 Read Count: 133935
[Report This] Published: October 15 2020 Updated: October 14 2022
Reviewer: teradonk Signed
Date: October 15 2020 Title: Chapter 5: Planet Booty, Population: You

this is great! i love the entries with Sheila and the other older women the best. something especially sexy about giant, phat booty aunties and milfs farting on a tiny young man and getting off on it. I REALLY hope you explore the pole dance and gas chamber paths!

 

good work!



Author's Response:

Hi. I was setting up those routes for other people to write, I'm not all that sure I can deliver myself lol, but if it gets added I'll definitely post it here too. 

Little Learning by AprilMJ Rated: PG starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 93]
Summary:

With the help of her teaching assistant, a small-town high school teacher intends on properly educating a class of grade 9 boys on the topic of sexual education using rather unconventional methods. Together, she and her students will embark on a semester of exploration, discovery, and exhilarating fun. After all, wouldn't everyone benefit from a hands-on sex ed class?


Categories: Adventure, Breasts, Body Exploration, Butt, Couples, Crush, Entrapment, Feet, Gentle, Insertion, Legwear, Scat, Slave, Unaware, Vore, Watersports
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 183559 Read Count: 222779
[Report This] Published: December 05 2020 Updated: April 28 2023
Reviewer: teradonk Signed
Date: March 28 2022 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 15, Week 7: Teacher's Pets

Just wanted to say I love this story and your writing. So detailed. Love when it goes into butt/toilet territory! I feel like this sub-story is gonna see some cruelty for pleasure's sake on the part of Ms. Johnson and her friends, and I hope so! Antenna's out! haha

Author's Response:

Hey thanks very much! It’s always super exciting to see a new name take the time to share their thoughts. So thanks for that! My reviewers have certainly kept me on my toes thus far haha. There can never be too much detail it feels like. It has been really cool to see how people like you have been shaping the story and poking me to come up with new ideas through this review thread. This little section at Ms. Johnson’s house will be relatively quick and probably not the most exciting… but we’re going to be taking a trip to the city shortly and that’s where I’ve got pages upon pages of ideas to get down into words. This little part is sort of the bridge in between. We haven’t really seen much cruelty so far (the girls in the changeroom really only had a little bit of fun and Mrs. Hulme did her thing quickly) but I think that’ll change soon. The boys are about to be very thankful they’re not disposables. Also glad to hear that you’re a fan of the butt/toilet realm cause that’s always been where my mind wanders too. So we’ll certainly see a lot more of those two ideas.

Reviewer: teradonk Signed
Date: May 01 2023 Title: Chapter 25: The End.

well, that's too bad. This story is great and you're a gifted writer. that skill will find a use for you or purpose.
regarding the rebirth: anyone's journey of faith is their business and they have a right to that. that said, I personally think the very specific, narrow channels of faith demanded by certain religions are ridiculous and manipulative and baloney. that one in particular demands one to cauterize one's natural humanity in service to a legion of voices it incorrectly identifies as Jesus as Nazareth. At least in Western fundamentalism, he's become nothing but a mascot. no one pays attention to what he says; rather, they salivate after the words that condemn ourselves and others.
I wish you well. Unfortunately, this desire that you have, this lust and fetish, will not be seared away by any adherence to a faith, only hidden as something to be ashamed of, when there should be no shame at all.

Change Inc by Vexed Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3]
Summary:

Bill gets the chance for an interview at a huge and progressive company, potentially boosting his entire career. Little does he know, the company he is applying for has bigger plans than he anticipated.


Categories: Giantess, Young Adult 20-29, Breasts, Adult 30-39, BBW, Mature (40-49), Body Exploration, Middle Age (50+), Butt, Crush, Entrapment, Growing/Shrinking Out of Clothes, Humiliation, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Legwear, Maternal, Mouth Play, New World Order, Odor, Slave, Unaware, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Dwarf (3 ft. to 5 ft.), Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.), Munchkin (2.9 ft. to 1 ft.)
Size Roles: F/m, FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 47643 Read Count: 52783
[Report This] Published: April 07 2021 Updated: April 07 2021
Reviewer: teradonk Signed
Date: April 07 2021 Title: Chapter 16: Bill Delivers Brenda's Chair

Been following this on DA. Great story! I especially love when the men shrink down to 3 inches or less and that ass and fart action.

 

LOVE Brenda's story about what happened to poor 2 inch John and her ass! Hot af.

Summary:

Jim always had a crush on his roommate, Julia. In a horrible lapse of judgement, he found hismelf lodged deep within Julia's asscrack.


Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Body Exploration, Butt, Entrapment, Instant Size Change, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1524 Read Count: 4595
[Report This] Published: May 11 2021 Updated: May 11 2021
Reviewer: teradonk Signed
Date: May 11 2021 Title: Chapter 1: Horrible Lapse in Judgement

Yes, I do want more! As well as more of your other story!

 

I love this buttstuff!

 

Please continue with subjecting tiny men to gigantic female butts and assholes. Love the farts. I hope you involve sitting, smooshing, and farting.

 

Great stories, both!