Penname: Gershwin [Contact] Real name:
Member Since: January 08 2018
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Summary:

Matthew lives in a world where a shrinking virus has caused millions to shrink and now he is along those impacted by the virus. His three older Sisters can be quite the handful when they want to be at normal size. Being an inch tall could end up creating issues Matthew could have never guessed before to his delight or possbily own demise.


Categories: Giantess, Entrapment, Feet, Incest, Insertion, Mouth Play, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 10004 Read Count: 49329
[Report This] Published: November 25 2017 Updated: September 11 2018
Reviewer: Gershwin Signed
Date: August 03 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Emily

It's ok, but it's got a lot of spelling, grammar and general writing errors. I found it fairly hard to read overall. The dialogue feels unnatural and forced.

Note: I am a rather harsh critic! Sorry!

The Party by tiny_tasty Rated: G starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 8]
Summary:

In a college environment where sexual assaults are commen, one soririty is trying to make a difference. Kappa Kappa Phi is hosting a semester end party where everyone is invited. However, to keep all the women that attend safe, they've taken special... precautions. All men who attend are immediately shrunk to 2 inches tall and given to one of the women to "hold on to." This is the story of what happens to various characters at the party throughout the course of the night.


Categories: Body Exploration, Crush, Gentle, Humiliation, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play, Unaware, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 18114 Read Count: 63244
[Report This] Published: July 21 2018 Updated: July 08 2019
Reviewer: Gershwin Signed starstarhalf-star
Date: July 25 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Introduction

Parts were enjoyable, but the flippant/offhand cruelty and killing broke the enjoyment (for me at least) of an otherwise interesting scenario.

Summary:

     Roy is supposed to be on vacation with his best friend Mimi for the summer but upon arriving at her house he is suddenly shrunk to about 3 inches, effectively ending their summer plans. Mimi has always been like an older sister to him. She swears to protect him until the disease wears off. Hiding him from Mimi's family and pretending to be on vacation to fool Roy's parent's. The two try and enjoy the summer together.

     However this proves to be more difficult than they thought once Mimi decides she wants to experiment with Roy in his new miniature form. She has always had a crush on Roy and now he couldn't really say no to any of her curiosities in his new shrunken form.


Categories: Vore, Giantess, Breasts, Insertion, Mouth Play
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 74878 Read Count: 119255
[Report This] Published: July 23 2018 Updated: January 25 2022
Reviewer: Gershwin Signed starstarstarstar
Date: October 07 2018 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Can I Be Your Shrimp?

Excellent stuff, love the close vore action, and his conflicted acceptance. Hope to see more vore action :)

Author's Response:

     Hey thanks Gershwin!

Vore is my favorite category so we will definitely be seeing more of that.

Though I have a "Short" story coming out soon for Halloween season. It's gonna have vore and.. other things. ;D

Reviewer: Gershwin Signed starstarstarstar
Date: July 02 2019 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Sleeping Slippery Sinkhole

An excellent continuation. I love the sense of being unsure what he wants. It's a familair feeling - the sense of "I want this" but also the "I don't want to die over a fetish". I hope they to get to have some non-fatal fetish fun, but that's just me. I'll enjoy it wherever it goes.



Author's Response:      Thank you so much Gershwin! I am sure a lot of us would struggle with this kind of thing if it were real.       Also thank you so much for the review!

Reviewer: Gershwin Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: September 08 2019 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Let's get goin

Really enjoying this story. The relationship seems cute and somewhat realistic in it pacing. I look forward to the eventual payoff! I personally hope the eventual vore remains “fun” and not the “killed for a brief moment of pleasure” variety, but it’s your story and I’ll enjoy it either way.

Author's Response:

     Thank you so much for that Gershwin! I will continue to do my best with this! I also hope everyone is pleased with the eventual pay off haha!

Reviewer: Gershwin Signed starstarstarstar
Date: September 14 2019 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: Booby trapped

Nothing wrong with long chapters. You should see some of the 10k monsters I’ve written!

Author's Response:

     Wait 10k as in just one chapter?

Either way Gershwin, that's pretty badass!

Reviewer: Gershwin Signed starstarstarstar
Date: September 14 2019 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: Booby trapped

Yeah, one chapter... I just get into it too much and keep going. See http://www.giantessworld.net/viewstory.php?sid=7157 for example.

Reviewer: Gershwin Signed starstarstarstar
Date: September 27 2020 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: Salty and Sinking

It's been a while but good to see you back, a good chapter too. I enjoyed having a look through your DA work too.

Verticality by Vintovka Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 62]
Summary:

A boy's bizarre dream about his best friend sets off a series of events, and he becomes increasingly excited as his dreams start to come true.


Categories: Body Exploration, Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Breasts, Breast Enlargement, Butt, Destruction, Entrapment, Feet, Footwear, Growing/Shrinking Out of Clothes, Humiliation, Legwear, Mouth Play, Slow Size Change, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.)
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Dwarf (3 ft. to 5 ft.), Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.), Munchkin (2.9 ft. to 1 ft.), Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/m, FF/f
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 58202 Read Count: 222460
[Report This] Published: July 25 2018 Updated: November 19 2018
Reviewer: Gershwin Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 28 2018 Title: Chapter 3: Measuring Down

Well written and good fun. I love their relationship and look forward to seeing what they get up going forward!

Author's Response:

Thanks!  Please keep reading and writing reviews, they bring joy to my withered heart.

Reviewer: Gershwin Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: August 09 2018 Title: Chapter 15: Sucked Off

I enjoyed that, good to see them getting physical again ;)

I was expecting a bit of detail/description from his point of view, since his head was basically being deep-throated, I'd have thought that'd be a key part of the experience for him.

Hah and now I definetly want to see it lead to accidental (or deliberate!) vore or something ;)



Author's Response:

I thought there was plenty of detail from his POV, though it was mostly tactile and sound.  It's pretty dark inside a mouth, even with her lips opening a little bit.

 

There will definitely be more mouth play, though probably not straight up vore outside of dream sequences.

Reviewer: Gershwin Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: August 03 2018 Title: Chapter 9: Shoe Shopping

It's cute and fun, I like their relationship, but I sort of hope the "shopping" arc comes to an end soon ;)  (it reminds me of the filler "Beach Holiday" or "Hot Springs" or "Cooking" arcs from Anime series!)



Author's Response:

It's mostly a result of trying to figure out what I can do at the less exciting sizes and simultaneously remedy Sarah growing out of her clothes.  It'll be over very soon, don't worry.

Reviewer: Gershwin Signed starstarstarstar
Date: July 31 2018 Title: Chapter 6: Breaking Fast

Another cute chapter of interaction and flirting banter. haha I don't want him to get "hurt".. but man, with all that vore flirting, when/if he's small enough, I want him to experience her stomach ;)



Author's Response:

Sarah's not that confident in her ability to vomit on command, what if she just tastes him a little? ; )

Reviewer: Gershwin Signed starstarstarstar
Date: July 30 2018 Title: Chapter 5: Pillow Talk

A nice chapter, though I do hope the meaness/violence remains the stuff of dreams between them.



Author's Response:

Thanks!  And no worries, Sarah finds the idea of intentionally hurting the protagonist abhorrent, no matter how much she jokes about it or what their dreams are.  The dreams are mostly a way of showing a negative "what if" scenario, and for me to write some cruelty and violence without affecting the main story.  

Summary:

Air force test pilot Lucas Estrada meets a young woman after he is forced to eject out of his orbital jet. She is beautiful, intelligent, kind but out of his league in all ways... and yet...


Categories: Giantess, Adventure, Breasts, Body Exploration, Couples, Fantasy, Gentle, Humiliation, Insertion, Mouth Play, Odor, Sci-Fi, Unaware, Watersports
Characters: None
Growth: Brobdnignagian (51 ft. to 100 ft.)
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: Lur saga - LoTG
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 29073 Read Count: 127561
[Report This] Published: August 04 2018 Updated: December 18 2018
Reviewer: Gershwin Signed starstarstarstar
Date: August 06 2018 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - The Dollman

I look forward to seeing where this goes. Keep up the good work.

Summary:

Things in my life became weird rapidly. The funny thing is, they were always weird, but they weren't. Or, at least, I didn't question if they were. Or did this just start happening? I'm going to have to go through a hell of a lot to figure it out, and at the center of it all is one woman who holds my entire world literally in her hand. Whereas I'm usually unnoticed by most everyone else, she now has all of her playful attention aimed right at me. What does that mean is in store for me, and will I live?

Whatever happens, I intend to do my job.

My name is John Loya, and I'm a story teller. Whether it kills me or not, I intend for this story to be told.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Giantess, Adventure, Breasts, Body Exploration, Crush, Destruction, Fantasy, Feet, Butt, Gentle, Growing Woman, Insertion, Mouth Play, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.), Brobdnignagian (51 ft. to 100 ft.), Mega (501 ft. to 5279 ft.), Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 73124 Read Count: 162826
[Report This] Published: November 15 2018 Updated: March 09 2020
Reviewer: Gershwin Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 10 2020 Title: Chapter 16: Alright I'll Go With This

A fantastic chapter, I’m thoroughly enjoying this story. It’s great how far it’s developed from the initial premise.

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Date: January 23 2020 Title: Chapter 15: The Doctor Will See You Now

Great writing. Nice to see proper character development in a fetish story too. Genuinely interested to see where it’s all going.

Author's Response:

Much appreciated. Hopefully it's going in a direction you enjoy. I'll try and have the next chapter done as soon as possible

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Date: October 10 2019 Title: Chapter 12: Terms of Service

Love it. Not big on feet and stuff, but the writing is good and it’s takes the characters and story forward. I look for to their more sexual future :D

Reviewer: Gershwin Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 14 2018 Title: Chapter 7: It's Like I'm Really There

Very well written. I really enjoyed reading that. Forgot I was reading a fetish story in fact!

Author's Response:

Much appreciated Gershwin. Hope you enjoy the rest of the story just as much

Reviewer: Gershwin Signed starstarstarstar
Date: November 27 2018 Title: Chapter 4: Introduction to the Goddess

A nice development, I look forward to their future games. You have the vore tag so... yay!

Author's Response:

Thank you. I have no idea when the vore part will come into play. I'll have bits of it in a few chapters, but one in general will be dedicated to swallowing people whole. Need to figure out what chapter that'll be

Reviewer: Gershwin Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: January 10 2019 Title: Chapter 9: Anatomy 201

Some good fun vore chapters. Quite different too compared to most vore stuff.

Author's Response:

well I like playful and gentle giantesses over cruel sadistic ones. So anything Jenny does is probably going to deviate from the norm. And I look forward to seeing how creative things get. Hopefully you do too