Giantess World :: Grudge

Summary:

A hapless 11th grader at a high school with a very strict principal volunteers to help some of his teachers complete training for shrink discipline certification. Whatever that means...

(This is my first story - critiques or comments are appreciated)

(Complete as of 2020-12-15 - it seems I can actually finish something from time to time)

Categories: Teenager (13-19), Adult 30-39, Mature (40-49), Butt, Feet, Maternal, Mouth Play
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: FF/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 83452 Read Count: 165206

[Report This] Published: July 26 2020 Updated: December 16 2020

Reviewer: Grudge Signed
Date: September 13 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Sign-up sheet

Really Enjoying this so far, I'm hoping things get more involved with Loren's weekend. Hopefully Brett can experience everything she has to offer, inside and out. (Hoping for AV or partial AV with Loren anyway)

Author's Response:
Thank you!

Borrowing a Bite by Xiao-renzhe Rated: R

[Reviews - 57]

Summary:

(Paramouth's First Annual "Nommies" Nominee for Best Story: runner up!)

A Hungry vampire and a humble borrower seem like an unlikely pair of friends, but when times are tough and they're both down on their luck, maybe they can find what they need in each other.

Edit: 8/12/2021 Back with a MASSIVE chapter. Obligatory "a bit late for 8/8." Hope you all enjoy! (Also, wow! almost a year since I began this! That's wild!)

The tags listed are all included in the story so far. I'll add more tags as I go.

For the record, the violent, tag does not apply to how the main characters interact, but there is violence in the story. The primary G/t relationships in this story are all gentle/non-fatal.

Categories: Giantess, Adventure, Breasts, Body Exploration, Butt, Crush, Entrapment, Fantasy, Gentle, Insertion, Lesbians, Mouth Play, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.), Giant (31 ft. to 50 ft.), Mini GTS (16-30ft)
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 90622 Read Count: 84416

[Report This] Published: August 18 2020 Updated: August 12 2021

Reviewer: Grudge Signed
Date: September 08 2020 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: Settling Depths

I'm honestly looking forward to seeing how this story progresses, and I'm kind of hoping Leo takes Vela's full tour... Though I am enjoying this as both an actual story and a Fetish story, so while I would love to see some butt stuff, I don't want it to mess with the story. I'm also looking forward to seeing Jackie and Leo's interactions in the future, not to mention how Vela and Jackie interact with each other with Leo...

Author's Response:
For reasons that would ultimately spoil the next chapter were I to elaborate, I'll just say that some of the desires expressed in this review would have been satisfied if I had decided to post chapters nine and ten at the same time like I had for most of the previous 2-chapter drops, but alas, I decided that ten needed a little more refinement. Though I'll admit, I shouldn't have put the "butt" tag on without being absolutely sure i was ready to post it. But fear not! Check back in a few hours.

As far as not wanting lewd content to mess with the story itself, I really appreciate your expressing that. It's a hard balance to strike when I am trying to tell a somewhat compelling and legitimate story that was primarily inspired by the G/t interactions. I'm trying to make those interactions hold more meaning because of the experiences and relationships that the main characters share. So I thank you for your patience!

Thank you so much for your review!

Reviewer: Grudge Signed
Date: September 13 2020 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: Departure

Yay, Full tour! Hopefully Vela can get her hand back, or get a neat gauntlet to replace it. I'm hoping Jackie will get a chance to have some moments with Leo, maybe his effect on Vela can work on Jackie too. That could be interesting... Though what enterance would Leo use with Jackie... Hmmm...

Author's Response:
Hey! I'm glad you're happy. And I briefly considered the Nagas sending her off with some gauntlet like a parting gift for her journey, but Ek-teen isn't Galadriel. Lol

and that's a curious thought. In what way do you imagine Leo would have an effect on Jackie's anatomy?

And Jackie and Leo will have plenty of quality time together in the coming chapters. I've been needing an opportunity to flesh out their relationship a little. They were too preoccupied wirh keeping her alive before!

Thanks for your follow-up review! I'm glad to see you're still enjoying this story!

Reviewer: Grudge Signed
Date: September 13 2020 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: Departure

My first thoughts were that Leo would have some kind of effect on the Werewolf (if I recall correctly) parasite. Perhaps weaken the effects it has, perhaps keeping her human, or close to it, during a full moon, making her hair return to its normal color during the day. Pretty much just weakening the curse/parasite in her system. Make her a wolf-girl during a full moon, solving one of their problems for keeping her under control during a full moon. It seems like he has some sort of effect on weakening night based creatures nature, so it might stand to reason that it would have an effect on Jackie too given enough time. Though it could potentially be more dangerous as she still eats, thus he could be digested by her theoretically. So I assume that he would need to use either of the lower entrances, unless they get their hands on an anti-digestive item of some nature to protect him....

Author's Response:
Ha! That's a really interesting theory. I'll be honest, I wasn't planning on taking it that way. And when I described the "symbiote" that infects and caused lycanthropy, I was going for something more akin to a virus that flares up with the lunar cycle. I have a reason planned for why vampires specifically seem to be effected by borrowers. But don't fret, Jackie doesn't need the excuse of a cure to have a special fondness for little people. She just has a crush on them.