I'm more of a shrinking person rather then growth. So instead of giant women, I'll mostly write about men (or women, if I feel like it) shrinking.
A young married couple's relationship dramatically changes during a camping trip after the wife expores new ways of satisfying herself...
I think one picture sums up this story:
http://www.myfacewhen.com/images/396.jpg
But either way, this story was a different take on the usual fair, and a bit bittersweet that the husband's work didn't get published after all. Though I guess that shows that you can't stop a sociopath with a shrink ray. ;)
Nice story, and nice how you involved the reader into the scenarios. I especially like how three of my favorite shrinking scenarios are involved: 1) trapped in a girl's shoe as she wears them; 2) avoiding being stepped on; and 3) FINALLY being crushed underfoot like a bug. And especially that the girl who snuffed "me" out wore flip-flops, my favorite kind of footwear for girls, and my "killing shoe" of choice, if you will.
Another favorite from me. :)
Short, but sweet! This was very lovely. :)
Alright, I'm hooked. I've only read chapter 1 so far, but I'm liking this. :D
Author's Response: Thanks! Hope you stick with it to the end. I mean, assuming I ever get there...
Oh damn... This is getting good.
I fear for what's going to happen to poor Julie... ;_;
I read this story yesterday.
I enjoyed it. Whether or not you decide to continue it is up to you, but if not, then that's a pretty good ending. :)
I'm not sure whether to feel sorry or jealous of those tiny men. Maybe more sorry, because there seemed to be a bit of a higher chance that they'd end up with a physically undesirable woman. That, and the ass thing...
That said, this was an interetsing read. :)
Holy crap!!
Guess she couldn't take it anymore.
Well, such a bittersweet end...
This was a nice short story. I loved it. :)
Oh boy... There goes his car. XD
But I'm liking this story. Kepp it up!
This story is pretty interesting so far. Good work!
Richard Matthews, a Scientist from London, takes a new job in the United States to join his old University friend Joseph Walters. When Joe informs him of a machine they have pioneered which has size altering abilities Richard is mesmerised. The due dream of solving the problems of the world but things take a turn for the worst when Richard unwittingly catches the eye of someone who won't take no for an answer...
I admit, there were a bit of similarities between this and Cayce's "Summer Job", but this is still different enough and interesting so far.
Keep up the good work! I'm interested to see who this guest is. I have my own hunch...
Yeah :(
I liked the basic idea but it seems a lot of what he wrote must've been transcribed in my mind hence the similarities. I do apologies to him as his work is wonderful :/
I'm going to try and distance myself as much as possible but I suppose the general theme will be the same.
Well, the concept is very nice. But, like you said, it was a bit hard to read because you wrote it up so late. Try fine-tuning and reuploading it.
I did love the concept, though. :)
That was a nice start. I'm interested to read more of then whenever you get to it.
And lol Cary. That would be very interesting if the two girls were in cahoots with each other, wouldn't it? ;)
I enjoyed reading this story. It was a nice twist on the "No good deed goes unrewarded" thing, and very considerate of the genie to take care of his obligations in life. I you intend to continue this story ("Fin (?)"), I'll be looking forward to reading it. :)
Well, looks like Tia's about to have a meal, is what I got from the end of this chapter. Looking forward to the finale. :)
Thanks for sharing this story, and glad that you took your time and didn't rush with it. :)
I was hoping that Dean would have been stepped on by Samantha, but this way is probably more humiliating (and painful; stomach acid) for him.
Writer's Block... I can relate...
But when you get your inspiration back, I look forward to seeing how this ends. :)
Looking good so far. The guys must be so small, that they could probably survive being stepped on like that. Or maybe I'm getting a little ahead of myself...
Interesting start you have here. I'll postpone on the rating once you get into the meat of the story.