Penname: larkpie [Contact] Real name: Jon Arbuckle
Member Since: November 26 2017
Membership status: Member
Bio:

I'm just a person who might write sometime, depending on cirumstances.


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Summary:

About 8 years after being rescued, you return back to visit Sarah's family.  Everything is fine until an accident brings you face to face with your worst nightmare.

 


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Adventure, Butt, Young Adult 20-29, Body Exploration, Couples , Crush, Entrapment, Gentle, Insertion, Mouth Play, Toilet, Violent, Vore, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 29314 Read Count: 148665
[Report This] Published: August 12 2012 Updated: September 26 2012
Reviewer: larkpie Signed
Date: May 22 2018 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

So, late review, but I want to say that this is, overall, excellent. My one complaint was with one of Marissa's reactions, namely to eating someone.
For a 7-year-old, it was a very adult reaction. It was how I'd imagine a young adult, like a 20 year old reacting to it. I feel a more childish reaction would be to wonder if she could just pick the person out of her poop, A-OK, then immediately move to grossing herself out at the thought of it.
Conversely, the children in the final chapter were handled very well, they acted their age. It was a great finish.
That was all for complaints, I just want to thank you for having younger giants, they're far too few I find.

Good stuff, thanks for sharing! 

Summary:

Nick and Sam go to visit Jasmine, but something is wrong… things seem different.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Adventure, Young Adult 20-29, Body Exploration, Adult 30-39, Butt, Mature (40-49), Couples , Crush, Entrapment, Feet, Gentle, Insertion, Lesbians, Mouth Play, Slave, Unaware, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 72036 Read Count: 226648
[Report This] Published: January 18 2014 Updated: June 27 2015
Reviewer: larkpie Signed
Date: March 22 2018 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Pretty great stuff, toddler giants are exceedingly rare, and this is one of the best pieces with them I've seen. I do wish the angle had been explored from the children's perspective a bit more, putting a bit more discription on the feeling of "buggies" in their diapers rather than just "enjoying the experience", but that's a minor nitpick. 

Overall it was pretty good, and I'd be very curious to see if you have anything more like it. 

Summary:

A Neko recieves a very special birthday gift from an anonymous stranger. what ever it is though, it's sure to give her plenty of things to do.

 

Birthday gift for one of my favorite artists. Contains Neko's and Futa, along with graphic details.


Categories: Giantess, Young Adult 20-29, Butt, Crush, Entrapment, Feet, Futanari, Furry, Humiliation, Insertion, Mouth Play, Odor, Scat, Slave, Violent, Vore, Watersports
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.)
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/f
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7334 Read Count: 34711
[Report This] Published: June 16 2015 Updated: June 16 2015
Reviewer: larkpie Signed
Date: January 04 2019 Title: Chapter 1: A birthday to remember

I hate to keep bothering you, but I don't think the site's PM service works still. 

I did send an email, not certain if you got it. I'd really appreciate it if you would be OK with helping me out with a few stories. 

I'll resend the email, just in case.

Summary:

Claire Abernathy is a kind girl. Having moved after family issue's she winds up working at a Daycare. Its a dream job for her, she loves children... but the children here have secrets of their own.

Contains Underage content, along with a lot of other strange philia's. If thats not your cup of tea, feel free to look somewhere else.

 


Categories: Butt, Crush, Entrapment, Feet, Furry, Gentle, Humiliation, Incest, Insertion, Lesbians, Mouth Play, New World Order, Nose, Odor, Scat, Unaware, Violent, Vore, Watersports
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 196299 Read Count: 214712
[Report This] Published: February 22 2016 Updated: March 16 2017
Reviewer: larkpie Signed
Date: August 18 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Fated meetings

Wowie, this is well-written. I read a bit, in the middle actually, haven't gone through the beginning. 

So, wow. Good stuff, I want to say. I don't think I'll ever finish it, due to my abject hatred of the omnipotence fetish, and that's not ragging on you or anyone who likes it, that's purely me. I think I'll be recommending this though, and definitely looking through your works. 



Author's Response:

I'm gload you enjoy it even if it's not your cup of tea then, larkpie. :)

Feel free to read my other story if this one isn't to your perticular tastes. There's a difference with those girls compared to the ones in this one that might give you a better read. Hopefully.

Summary:

After a long night of drinking, Kobayashi reveals certain secrets to her loving Dragon Maid. When morning comes around, she's in for a surprise, thats for sure.

A short story i wrote for the lovely ladies of Miss Kobayashi's Dragon Maid. This is an Anime story as you may know. If your not into that please look somewhere else.


Categories: Giantess, Young Adult 20-29, Entrapment, Fantasy, Gentle, Insertion, Lesbians, Mouth Play
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 5058 Read Count: 9945
[Report This] Published: March 11 2017 Updated: March 11 2017
Reviewer: larkpie Signed
Date: November 10 2018 Title: Chapter 1: A morning to remember

So uh, I tried contacting you through the site's PM system, but I don't think it works, so I'm posting here too, sorry about that. 
I was curious how you operate, your name comes up second on some stories, like Precious Little Demons. Do you collab, do you just edit, do you write some chapters, how does it work?

Also, you said it's OK to email you, but I didn't see your email in your discription, if it's alright, would you mind sharing?



Author's Response:

Sorry for the Delay larkpie, I have been away for some time. To address your inquary, the reason why my name is on other stories is just because the people I work with add me on. Sometimes at least. I do have a hand in others stories, sometimes big, other times minor. It just depends on who I'm helping. Sometimes I do full on editing work and grammer checking while other times I may write a whole chapter or dialog for some. When it comes to stories like Precious Little Demons or Pay it Forward for example, I helped design the characters and mannerisms, but to their credit, they go fully to Sterben Klein. I hope that helps.

You should have been able to contact me via the site but in this case that didn't seem to be how it went down. Feel free to email me at Grimahr@yahoo.com, I go by that penname for the most part so locating me that way is generally easier.

Once again, I do apologize for the delay in responce. I'll try to keep on top of that in the future.

G.M

Summary:

Power has shifted dramatically in the Pokémon league. As all the regional champion's gather to discuss new rules and policies, the all-female league led by the Sinnoh champion herself, Cynthia, vote on a brand-new law to be implemented. One that will give the women of the world a much better standing in society as a whole.

 

This is a series of short Pokémon stories featuring the lovely ladies of the series.

 


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Humiliation, Young Adult 20-29, Breasts, Object, Adult 30-39, BBW, Mature (40-49), Body Exploration, Butt, Couples, Crush, Entrapment, Fantasy, Feet, Furry, Futanari, Incest, Lesbians, Maternal, Mouth Play, New World Order, Nose, Odor, Scat, Slave, Violent, Vore, Watersports
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m, FF/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 108115 Read Count: 309438
[Report This] Published: September 24 2019 Updated: February 06 2022
Reviewer: larkpie Signed
Date: September 20 2020 Title: Chapter 15: Preschooler (Gen VII)

I heard about this story from Franchise Writer, and so took a peek, and this one's title stood out to me the most. 

The good: You did a great job of keeping her innocent, despite her actions. The thoughts and feeling she had throughout were believable for her age, especially her reaction to being told that "they'll enjoy becoming her poop". That whole bit, where she's excited to eat them, but it seems like she just means being treated to a lunch at a restaurant, all of that, the dramatic irony was fantastic. 

The room for improvement: It was a bit short, it ended up feeling the build-up was half the story. A big place that could have used much more description was the initial shrinking. Explaining the sight from both character's POVs southaven added a lot, how she went from reaching his thigh to towering over him, now barely reaching her ankle. A bit of description of one of the guards trying to escape, or the guards urging the CEO to escape while they "fend her off" would have been good display of the futility and humiliation it brought, while further hammering home her innocence, maybe with a panty shot that she didn't notice or care showing. 

Speaking of, description. We got very little for her description, would have been really good for when they first shrank. 

Finally, not to sound rude, but don't use slashes. Choose a descriptor and stick with it. But that's nitpicking.

The hope for future characters: I saw someone ask about more preschoolers of other gens, I'd put a vote there, in addition to twins, especially gen 5, and tubers. Fairy tale girls too. I'm not into too hard of sadism or snuff myself, but so long as they're innocent like this girl (bratty, bossy, demanding, etc are all fine though, so long as she is innocent) then I'll most likely love it. Am willing to expound on ideas for interactions if interested.

Best of luck with new additions!



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review, I'm really glad you liked it and thank you for the helpful critiques!

Looking back on it now I also feel this chapter was lacking particularly in comparison to other things I've written and I think I discovered why, I was impatient.  This was the last thing I wrote before writing my love letter to Gorgon from Fate/Grand Order and I wanted to get to work on it as fast as possible.  That story took almost a month to write and I can see now that effort that I should have spared for this story was directed towards Gorgon instead.  Gen VII Preschooler deserved better, but when I get around to Eevee Pokékid from Gen VIII I promise to not make the same mistake.