A child is born weak and female to a warrior-king who casts her out to die in the wilderness. Fate, and an invertening frost giantess, have other plans.
Not a bad little story. Would be cool to see it continue.
Thanks. I might continue this in the future or at least revisit this character. Definitely will be using this universe more so stay tuned if you liked this.
David has always made fun of Ariel for her ripe after-work feet. However, the discovery of a mysterious spell book gives her the power to put her sibling in his place with a variety of games designed to punish David with the horrifying feet of his friends and sister.
Done as a commission.
My only complaint is that the chapters aren't ever very long with these commissions. Doesn't feel like there is enough time for you to get into the descriptions and details that make your stories great. Other than that, I'm enjoying this one.
The pacing on many of these commission stories is definitely different than my own non-custom ones.
Overpower(ed)'s a parable on Power:
What it is made of, what it creates, what it demands.
Be sucked in, mortals : you already knew the outcome before the cycle began.
This is a pretty cool idea. Well written too. I like it.
Two years have passed since Grey’s last adventure. Having trained to become a Hunter, Grey suddenly finds his future with The Order put into question. Still plagued with cryptic dreams Grey once again returns to giant territory aiming to reunite with familiar faces as well as uncover the truth of The Giant Queen, her Human Prince and how he fits into everything.
Dang. . . . This one is walking the line between feel good and pretty dark. Seemingly Important characters getting Killed Off Left And Right. I respect that. This Is A pretty Good Story That I'm Glad I Checked Out.
Thank you, its a difficult line to walk sometimes. Never want to make it too dark. Anyway thank you for the review and glad you're enjoying it thus far.
Society is changing rapidly, and Mark Lawrence has fallen behind the times. Looks like someone will need to catch him up … but who??
This story isn't really doing much for me at this point, but I'm glad you continued to write it. Please don't change course just because people don't understand what you're doing, or what social commentary you're trying to get across. It might be that it's just hard to get behind someone who has all the power. (Camilla) Who knows? Keep going though, there are still enough characters lying in wait to make this interesting, but it seems like a steep hill to climb. It feels almost so final that you could end it here, and there wouldn't be any unanswered questions except what happened with lynn.
All in all, keep going and tell a great story!
"My Sister is a Demon" is a slow-shrink, slow-growth story that will end up being around 20-25 chapters, and it tells the story of Clayton Williamson, a 17-year-old high school senior who was raised by his mother after his father abandoned the family when Clayton was 5. Turns out, he abandoned the family to be with Kazehana Asmodeus, an alluring, tall, voluptuous woman who is actually related to Asmodeus, the ancient Demon of Lust. In exchange for 13 years of servitude, Kazehana promised Clayton's father fame and riches. The thing is, though, that as soon as Mr. Williamson entered onto the contract, any time he felt lust for Kazehana, he would shrink a little. And he did feel lust for her....a LOT...and he shrank accordingly.
Our story picks up right after news comes that Mr. Williamson has died. No reason is given for his death. Clayton and his mother have to go to Kazehana's house to answer for the contract -- Mr. Williamson has died after 12 years, and 1 year is left of his contract. And either Clayton or his mother must take his place.
I'm interested to find out if the giantess element in this is just a turn on for him or if it will actually play a greater role in the story, seeing as how Scarlet was many times stronger than him before he started to get smaller, so it rules out the necessity of her needing size to help control him. In a way it's good to subvert the standard way these stories are written though. Keep up the good work. I'm really enjoying it.
Thanks so much for th comment, Stevie! I'm glad you're enjoying the story so far! <3 <3
I'm loving this story! My favourite on the site right now and I'm always checking back for more chapters. The way she handles him with one hand completely around his neck of covering his err entire head is an awesome visual! The blowjob punishment is great too. I may have to join the patreon just so I can get more of this! On a side note, I thought I read it earlier on in this, but is Scarlet his older half-sister by a few months?